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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh it was really great!
keep writing and update soon!
cant wait for kunwar and shakti to finally meet!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

amazing update...

kunwar geting bad coments due to his nervousnes,,n i think shakti wil help him..
wel waiting eagerly for d next update..
plz udate soon..

thank u so much dear...updating today itself😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

wow i loved the concept and i just read it and plz can i be added to the pm list and wow no other words just wow

i m speechless

thanku...😊...u r added in my pm list😊
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Originally posted by: KriaReyansh

oh gosh it was really great!

keep writing and update soon!
cant wait for kunwar and shakti to finally meet!!!

hehe thanku pria...they'll meet soon
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Originally posted by: amss4u

pls update soon and pm me...

updating today itself n will surely pm u😊
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Originally posted by: magical_mania

updating today itself n will surely pm u😊

yaaayyy today ...yippiee...
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Posted: 13 years ago

RECAP
Terrence sir put forward his comment "Kunwar I never expected this type of performance from you, you were better in rehearsals'.but what has gone into you'.How could you perform like this?"



Update 3


Mere paaon ke tale pe ye zamaan chal rahi hain


Kahi dhup hai thandi thandi, kahin chchav jal rahi hai


Is zameen ka aur koi asmaan hoga asmaaan'.asmaan hoga


Mein hawa k paro pe kahan jaa raha hoon kahan


Kabhi udta hua kabhi mudta hua mera raasta chala hohohoho


His words were stroking my head. It was hard for me to gulp my own saliva. Before I could speak he butts it on by saying "That was awesome Kunwar there you were better than your auditions but here you are superb'good job. I m proud of you. "


Aahh!! Those were the words I always wanted to listen. I have never expected those words. Excitement was overloaded at every inch of my face. From backstage Jai & saumya came and stopped me from driving me up a wall. I went back to my seat & sat there recapitulating the comments in my mind.


As a happy-go-guy, I went to my temporary abode. Dharmesh and Binny came to me rushing, giving a tight hug. They were impressed too. Infacact everyone was congratulating me which started burning my body with joy. I had just started discussing my views with Dharmesh, felt a sudden presence staring at me. It was none other than that girl which I mentioned earlier. With her timid steps she came towards me, applying a slight force in her hand she put forward it straight against me.


"You did a commendable job today'.Congratulations!!!" For the first time I heard her speaking since we entered this place. Her voice was little deep but her softness had made me push my hands towards her. We shared a handshake. Before I could ask her name she had been called by her friends whom she joined then.


Our happy days were passed as days of fear were coming forth. Means days of elimination sound scary na! Yes it was at least for all of us. Every other week one of us was facing the elimination. I never wished to be there'..obviously wh would like to.


Dharmesh and I shared a great bonding. We were a cut-out from same cloth. With time we became good friends too. Though he was in Geeta maa's team, we were not like typical competing boys who would tear each other apart rather than being good buddies.


I was called by Master Terrence in rehearsal hall by 9 in the morning. I didn't who all were supposed to come so I landed there alone. Terrence sir was already there, he appreciated for my previous performance. Going further, he explained me his new concept which he brought for two of us.


"Freak! Till now I don't know who is opposite me." I thought in my mind. I snapped out of my thoughts when I heard footsteps running in our direction.


"I am sorry for being late. Actually I was entrapped somewhere else'.I'm sorry." She apologized.


"Cool down'it's ok'I can understand'as you know I'm not the Hitler type mentor but for next time be on time." He finished.


"Sure sir" She smiled.


please review 😊ur words means a lot
update 4 page 20
Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
NIce update!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
SHAKTI AND KUNWAR TALKED!!! YAY!!! IT WAS CUTE MANIA...LOVED IT!!!!! ahhh!!!! 😍

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