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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: kriyanshluver

seriously awesome writing..👏

thnx for the pm nd pm me next ti me too!!!!!😉

thank u 4 liking my work😊

ill surely pm u next time

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: apurva100
awsome part...please next part jaldi jaldi update karna

haha apurva 2 comments i m loving it...

will update tomorrow😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Sweetheart17
update soon...!!!!!!!!!!!!

will update tomorrow😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Saumya_D3
wow.mania.di...!!!its.OSSOOOmmm...!!!!!!
please.PM.me.wen.u.update...!!!!!!!

awww...saumya...m glad u liked it😊

will surely pm u dear😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: 21Neha21
amazing update...
would love to know how dey wil create d mEgic on d stage..

waiting eagerly for d update..

hehe thankx neha😊

will get to know soon abt their megic 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar
MANU!!!!!🤗
First of all sorry for late comments...you know why they are late...😛

First I am gonna say a lot of things about update 3...hayeee...m excited...😃

MANU!!! First of all, I want to mention one thing...your trademark..starting an update from very well and meaningful words...really they say a lot of things about the story and as well as life too...I just love all of them...

Now coming to update...I AM RELIEVED!!!! He got good comments...yesh yesh yesh!!! I am so happy!! Last time you almost made me cry...you ended that update in that way...but you are real playful writer...It was drama...shapath jaan nikaal diya tha...Now I am happy...Kunwar got good remarks..yay!!

And dharmesh and Kunwar's friendship..awww...I am loving it more and more...

And Shakti...finally she spoke to him...she is impressed...hmmm...Kunwar indeed danced well...😳

Master Terence...my favorite one... Finally call them for duet..Kunwar is wondering who is the girl...hayeee...it's like living DID 2...I am loving it...😃

I LOVED THIS UPDATE!!!! there's a lot of stock for me in it...you are fab Manu!!! 👏

Now update 4...yesh!!! M xcited to comment...

The first sher...haye...I was struck with it for 5 minutes...it's beautiful...and I made a lot of connective sense from it..for ArSha...lolz...aadat se majbur...😆

Master Terence mentioned his home town..and he smirked!! why...lemme think...you know it's hard to get Terence..lolz..😆

Intro part was great...my Ammy..untrained but yet megical...😳

They are wondering about their selection as couple for that duet...hmmm..so Shakti types...

And Kunwar said we trusted on Shakti's behalf too...aww...My Ammy...😃

THEN KHUDA JAANE!!!! the magical song...haye...Manu honestly I am loving it more and more...you know...your perception and imagination is so realistic...it's all real for me...😳

They mugged the choreography but chemistry...hmmm...sighs...It would be difficult for them...😳

They disappointed Master terence in rehearsal but I am sure they'll make him proud in final performance...😃

It is going awesome Manu!!! It's just perfect!!!😊

You update soon and then I'll share one thing with you...which is related to ArSha about their khuda jaane performance...may be you know it already...but after their performance I'll tell...otey...😉

Love ya jaana...you rock!!!🤗

last but not at all least

awww...adi pata hai meri tabyat kharab thi par me fatafat tera comment padhne aayi...

love u gal🤗

itna bada comment likha hai...u really made my day😃

aww..u liked those verses thats really sweet of u...there are very few who notice that

hahaha jaan nikal di...just a playful act...n yesh its difficult to get terrence...😆

but me apne update me bata dungi n humara kunwar hai shakti kaise ni impressed hogi lol😃

update 4 ke verses kavyaanjali k title track k hai...if u want i can provide u with the song😊

yeah!! dy'll surely impress master terrence well before performance😃

thank u adi 4 inna lamba n pyaara wala comment

loved it simply😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

As last update was smaller 1, so here are 2 updates for u all, update 6 in next post

Update 5

Dhoop naikalti hai jahan se

Chandani rehti hai jahan pe

Khabar ye aayi hai wahan se

Koi tumsa nahi

He said in a stern voice "I'm giving you only one night & I hope I'll get what I expect from you people. For this I'm locking you both in this room & if u want to perform that don't come out before you are enough sure of the required bonding."

He left us stunned to overcome his words. Again a turn of his with more deep voice and intense look.

"Make sure you'll hold your hand for the rest of time & remember lights will be switched off."

He went off & looked the door tightly.

OUTSIDE

Terrence- If they'll ask to open the door then do as they say.

Watch man- ok sir.

We left standing there in the dark isolated room barely seeing each other's face. It was difficult to locate where we were standing then how could we spend whole night holding our hands standing till he comes. We both were in dilemma as to who will start the conversation.

"I think we have no other option left other than obeying of what he has commanded us to do" she said in a very sweet voice.

"I agree but we can hardly see each other's face" I replied

"You don't worry there is a window pane' I'll open it so that the moonlight can enter."

She proceeded towards the window & tried to open it but it was jammed. She couldn't open that window, though she was strong enough. I approached towards her & tried to help her out in her trial. She was few inches away from me position her back against my masculine frame. I could feel the fragrance of her shampoo entering my nose.

A lizard crawling on the window made me back to my sense. I panicked, screamed, jumped as if someone has snatched a banana from a monkey's hand. And she was standing there, absolutely stern with a grin on her forehead, watching me, behaving like a psycho.

"Kunwar, what is wrong with you? Have you seen a ghost" she asked alarmingly "No..Yes'I mean no' move away, look there, Shakti, waha chipkali hai, she'll bite you" I was again jumping, trying to protect her from that nasty lizard.

She gave a look to the lizard & then her eyes gazes on me "Kunwar' it's just a lizard' stop fidgeting." yes she was right. It was just a lizard. "Oh, my God! Why I was behaving all barmy." I thought in my mind.

My thought process put to an end when she yelled my name again.

"Kunwar, u all fine?"

" Ya, m ok" I answered her back putting my clumsiness aside.

I stared at her to see her reaction of what she was thinking about me. I was cursing myself, never endingly, for doing such silly stuffs in front of her. My cheeks were reddened due to embarrassment. I wished she cud never see my red cheeks.

'kunwar you are impossible." She stated, bursting out in laughter.

It made me fell more uneasy but I too joined in her mocking session later.

She had something miraculous, which provoked me to go for her more & more. It was hard for me not to look at her face.

Realizing the unwanted situation, I made a puppy face, which was begging her to stop for then.

"K...k'I won't laugh now." She chuckled at my sight.

Finally we were all normal thinking about the proper agenda for what we were here.

Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Update 6

Ek pal k liye ghadia humko mili makhmali pyaar ki

Aa is pal ko jeele zara

Ye lamhe fir mile naa mile, ho jaane d sabhi duriyaan faasle

Aa dil mila le aa paas aa

Sufficient moonlight was entering in our room, making things visible and recognizable. I offered my hand and she hesitantly lifted her hands and rested on mine.

"Hey please, kisiko batana mat" I requested her to keep that a secret. As a guy it was not apt for my reputation.

"kis bare mein" she asked back.

"Jo abhi hua, I mean the lizard incident, agar kisi ko pata chal gaya, den dy'll laugh at me'you know na what I mean." I gave her a week look.

She giggled but gave me an assured look.

To change the topic, as it was desperately needed, I quickly asked her "Where do you live? Mumbai se ho ya another place."

"Well. I am basically from Delhi itself but we shifted to Mumbai in 2006."

"any personal reasons?"

"Na'just aise hi"

"Can I ask a question if you don't mind?"

"Yes"

"During our introduction, Why Terrence sir smirked at you mentioning my hometown?" I asked her with a doubt of her ignorance.

A sweet blush appeared on her face as she knew the reason behind that smirk, which made my doubt more clear.

"Aaah, nothing just stupid story behind it"

"ok, m all ears."

"Actually, one day, Puneet, Terrence sir and I was chatting during our diploma year and stuck on an argument' conclusion came as ki mere liye koi prince charming(Kunwar) aaeaga, indore ke bade bade mehelo se, then u came and use as Kunwar'so'" she blushed to the core, giving me a hint to complete her sentence.

"Ok, so he was teasing you denoting me'right."

She nodded.

Hearing such a lame reason for that smirk, made me roll on the ground.

"Shakti you are so funny"

"Hello! What did I do?"

"Nothing'.leave" it was hard to control my laughter.

A ten minutes silence took over the whole ambience. We had still held hands, trying to cover up the mourn atmosphere. Passing smiles to each other & then again staring the floor for the hundred times appeared to be some kinda exercise essential to bring on the chemistry. The person who'll smile more will be declared as a winner.

"Did you watch the movie??" Finally she spoke breaking the eternal silence.

"Which movie" I demanded.

"Bachna-ae-haseeno"

"Ha...Dekhi na'usme deepika thi." Mentioning her name drives me to some fantasy land where no one comes between me and her dimples.

"Ha aur Ranbir bhi tha"

"Ha par deepika bhi thi" I was by the time lost in her (Deepika's) dreams.

"Ha'but their chemistry was mind-blowing."

"Cause Deepika thi'" I said half dreamily

"Urghh'kunwar'shut up'kya deepika deepika laga rakha hai." She was frustrated and shook me away.

Coming back to my senses "Kya problem hai Shakti, lemme think about her na."

"K fine, go and think about her, jab Terrence sir aaenge naa toh keh dena tumhare opposite deepika ko rakh le." She said filled with irritation.

"Ok'as you say" I mocked.

Her hands slipped from mine's and she went to sit on the other side of the room. Her arms rested on her upliftly curved knees & head between her arms. Her head was down but couldn't be seen properly as her arms covered he face.

"Why is she behaving like this?" I thought in my mind.

"Shakti" I called her but no response.

"Shakti, what is wrong with you, ab mene kya kaha." I tried to convince her but again face the failure.

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Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Where the Heck was I !!!!!1 I missed all these lovely parts !!!!!!!! Koi nii but I m gonna read and Review each and every part !!!!

Part 3 !!!!

Sis your start was absolutely amazing !!!!! You depict Amar"S Thoughts and Views so damn well !!!! My first love was Rey lol , But sis u r making me in love with Amar !!!! Amar , our sweet desi munda !!!! Trying to control is down-throtten exitement !!!! It felt like a was standing with Amar and reliving each an every moment !!!! I loved the way u potrayed him as a humble guy !!!! He iz not at all on overconfident !!!! He expressing his feeling , the compliments making him reach Cloud nine , He emoting the jerks and happiness !!!! Its so damn genuine and realistic !!! The friendship and attachment of DIDians sounds so touching !!!!! Loved the way Dharmesh and Binny embraced him and complimented him !!!! Thats what friends always do !!!! OMG Shakti"S ENTRY !!!!! I always was in love with Shakti"S calm and composure and u showed it so well !!! God I would have never been able to feel this all !!! It feels like I m reliving DID days !!!
Dharmesh and Amar indeed show a great bonding Just like brothers !!!! Loved Terrence sir Sweet behaviour !!!!! He is the real cupid in uniting ArSha !!!

SIS !!! I m in love with this update !!!!! eVERYTHING SOUNDS SO DAMN REALISTIC !!! Sis u write like a professional and everything seems so Heartfelt !!!! Love you for writing this !!!! Lots of hugs and Kisses😳🤗

Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago