Humsafar - Khirad&Ashar CLOSED Indefinitely - Page 3

Bookmarking this FF and I'll read it as soon as the time permits me too but I'll surely give my feedback once I am done reading =)

Oooh Humsafar on India-forums? I'm surprised, but pleasantly! I LOVE this show and khirad and ashar and fawad <3will be looking forward to more, I like ur writing already :D

I've only watched four episodes so far but the coming episodes look promising. Great to see you write an FF after them, it'll continue to feed my imagination before I start watching the show again.

wow .. gr8 start.. looking forward to this story... first fanfic for asher and khirad :)

Alright, thanks to Aarya I read this, and I must say, it sounds interesting.

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thanks! and I'm just as excited.
Sure...will PM.

Ah! I see 😆...This is where I would need help. I'm poor with Urdu names.
If you don't mind, just correct me as and when you notice such misnomers.

Oh its okay... I just felt it was a bit confusing... The CS of him looked like Khizar, bbut then I thought you might want to add someone extra. But no worries, it happens with me too. 😆 Its not always easy to understand how they pronounce names.

Oh btw.. I've seen similar usernamer around the forum like... 7th element & 8th etc... Are these your accounts too?

you started another story

Originally posted by: 6thElement

True...that was perhaps intercepted by the Evil mother before it could get to Ashar's hands.

i don't know why they have not shown it in the show, but in the book Asher refused to take any call or read any letter from khirad, because he thought she would ask him for a divorce.which is why he avoided her calls, and even refused to read the letter. Its not until after leap the letter comes back into the picture.

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Ah! You came...

Thanks so much for writing back. Will do.

jahan asher&khirad, wahan main :P , i adore the show :)

regardless, it was more so your writing style that pulled me here. I'have read the book and in no form did i want to ruin the image i had in my mind. You know when you read a book, you have a certain image that sometimes movies, or shows tend to destroy , but you have a way with your words, you sweep across all emotions and i like that. I like the strong khirad you have portrayed here, my most favorite part has always been the part after her daughter is born, the strength she gains is almost unbelievable. The remnants of pain&heartbreak she gained from that one man she trusted with everything of hers; have turned into hatred... not even hatred its more like the feeling of nothingness,left me in shivers.

now coming back to your story, beautiful writing style, i really honestly was waiting for someone to start a story on them. Your use of words to describe everything left me in awe, and i definitely liked that khirad is shown to be very strong, glad she left that good for nothing khizar. though i am intrigued very much, on where you plan to this story. i wonder whats coming up in her life, and how she will cope? Do continue. Would love to read it.

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Oh its okay... I just felt it was a bit confusing... The CS of him looked like Khizar, bbut then I thought you might want to add someone extra. But no worries, it happens with me too. 😆 Its not always easy to understand how they pronounce names.

Oh btw.. I've seen similar usernamer around the forum like... 7th element & 8th etc... Are these your accounts too?

Thanks for clarifying...

No I have only used 6thelement to write all my stories and I doubt there is any other person who goes by 'element'...There is 7thHeaven for sure...8th ka tho pata bhi nahin tha...😊

Keep writing.