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Posted: 13 years ago
hope arnav succeeds in protecting... loved the update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rozinab

amazing update naddiya, loved the way arnav wrote his name on khushis hand and fed her lunch! Im so glad arnav will be staying at khushis so he can protect her! Kill the creep shyam somebody!

lovely ...😳⭐️gr8 update...⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
nice update as usual...
loved the caring and protective arnav

thanks for the pm...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnac is such a sweetie...trying his best to look after both the women in his life. Really nicely written.
Many thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav is such a sweetie...trying to look after both the women in his life and keep them both happy and safe.
Many thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar here Arnav is really lovely...
and I read all parts what I missed...
thanks and waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wondaful update
beautifully written
plzz update soon fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago

He just wipe his tears as he heard someone coming towards the door.

Anjali: chota don't forget to keep your medicine

Arnav: i kept DI

Anjali i can't digest i guy with same name could be so mean

Arnav: DI you just learn from Khushi to be strong , to fight.

Anjali but she collapsed.

Arnav: Di one thing just trust your self dont even trust me . hug her tight , it was so sudden that Anjali became bit shocked.

Anjali kya huwa ha chota

Arnav:nothing he just left her .

Anjali"i think you have taken her illness very serious "

Arnav: didnot reply.

NK: walk to his room Naanav nani is calling you.

Arnav: i am coming .

Anjali: did you told nani?

Arnav:yes

Anjali: then what are you waiting for ?

Arnav: Di please dont ask me as i cannot tell. they both walked out to nani room

Nani: see how she is looking ? she was wearing a maroon sari with the help of Nani it was wrap over her dress .

Arnav: he just freeze at the spot, she just shyly look down,"you called me to see this, .."he didnot knew how to react

Nani:look at him ,he just made a embarrassing face . and walked out

Arnav: yeh nani bhi na

NK: naanav you are so rude , if you had said nice it would have encourage her , you just broke her heart.

Arnav: i know what i am doing you dont teach me

NK why should not i teach you? if you had praise her.

Arnav: NK you will not understand .you are still small.

NK: naanav some time you are so protective and the other min you are

Arnav: what is your problem ha ?

NK:just look at him

Khushi and Anjali walked out as they heard Arnav shouting

Akash:NK bhai please leave bhai alone

Khushi what happen?

arnav: just walked to his room and bang the door.

Khushi: huwa kya ha

NK: i just said he should have praise you

Khushi:just embarrassed ,as she hand read his eyes and got he liked it ."tou kya huwa ,if he had not . it is not must to say at times"

NK so you are too taking his side

Khushi: dekha hum un ko acha se janta ha , woh moun se nahi bola ga kuch bhi

Anjali: NK khushi ji knows chota very well you dont get so much worried for them, you just find a nice girl for your self .

NK: girl

Anjali: yes

Khushi: yes yes why dont you find a girl for your self you can also get married , then you too come with us to Malaysia .

OP: aap ka phone

Khushi: just look around she just hold it "hello"

Payal: khushi buaji & amma are worried for you please come back home

Khushi just felt his hand on the receiver .she look at him."hum aata ha jiji ,waise bhi hum thek ha"

Payal: acha hum buaji ko bolta ha

Khushi: just look at him he disconnect it, she just look at nk who was shocked from where he came to help her before he could offer her his help

Arnav: chalo ,i have a conference at 5 & before that i may set adjust the system in your home

Khushi: look at him she saw mami ji coming with Akash and mama ji was behind them his both parents were showing him something and he was running .

Anjali,Arnav and khushi look at each other their eyes became moist ...

Arnav: Di take care of your self ,Khushi you go and sit in car i am coming he just walk to room to get his lappy and bag.. he just walk down

Khushi was waiting for him he just open door for her , she just look at him he just ignore her as he knew she is looking at him. he drive to her home, as they reached maa was sitting with Payal

amma"payal let me do it you will go then "

Khushi: just look at him

buaji: saw Arnav and khushi" aao aao"

Arnav: he just look at khushi

Khushi: come with me she just open the guest room

Bauji:asked her with eyes before she could reply

Arnav : i will stay with you guys till shadi ,as everyone know and it is not safe no days he just walk out to get his other things

buaji: yeh kya

Khushi: shhh she just saw he was coming in

buaji: bolo tou how he can stay here,he live in a big house

Arnav:smiled same way how payal will stay in our big house from here , khushi just help me

Khushi: just walk to the room" what to do ?showed him her hand

Arnav: tell me switch

Khushi: showed him "any thing else"

Arnav: what i want you cannot give that i why go from here?

Khushi look at him his eyes was saying some thing ,she was closing door

Arnav: leave it open"and you dont dare step out "

Khushi just look at him he was talking to aman, she walk out

Buaji:sanak devi yeh kya ha

Khushi:arama se buaji he is busy

buaji: per yeh

Khushi:nani ji asked him why that you ask her she walk to the room

Payal :khushi show me your hands

Khushi: just quickly hide her right hand with left ,she saw Arnav saw her as he was going out to get something from his car.

Payal: it is so beautiful, did you had lunch ?

Khushi: yes i had

Buaji: how ?

Arnav: just smiled at her and walk in the room.

Khushi: Arnav ji help anjali ji and me

Bauji walk to the room "beta "

Arnav: jee

buaji" kal ka leya"

arnav: please dont say any thing please

Buaji: smiled "khush raho kar lo apna kaam".she walked out

Arnav: just started talking his voice echo in gupta's house .Payal buaji and amma just went to market to buy remaining things .and they were relax he was there.

Khushi: made tea for him walk in he saw her as his face was at the door ,he look at her maroon hands .she just placed at the table as she was about to turn he just hold her hand. with eyes she asked him to leave

Arnav:was talking with someone on his lappy ,he didnot bother .

Khushi:chora na whisper. he turn her hand to see his name and smiled at her left her hand she just ran out"pagal ha koi dekhe lata"

time flies . buaji and co came back

Buaji: did you gave him time or you are sitting like this?

Khushi: i gave

Buaji:saw her hands"titlya your hands , your pati will love you a lot"

Khushi:saw arnav coming out of the room he just look at her ,

buaji: look at him beta sanka devi na tang to nahi kiya

Arnav: bohot buaji

bauji just hold her ears "i knew , she cannot behave "

Khushi: buaji he is telling lies i didnot do any thing

Arnav: buaji chora i was just

Buaji: tum bhi

arnav: just felt sorry for khushi, "she was cooking and i was feeling hungry ,that's how she teased me"

Buaji: oh acha acha khushi take out dinner

Khushi: just look away , arnav got she is angry.

Arnav: khushi let me have medicine wait 30 mins

Khushi: look at him gave him water , she just walk out from back door

Arnav: just followed her as he saw bauji and amma was busy with their shopping" sorry "

Khushi: aap ko hum ko sirf tang karna aata ha

Arnav: khushi you 20 time peep in just to look in at me how could i say that to buaji .

Khushi: now you have problem if i look at you ?

Arnav: you will not understand

Khushi: why i will not understand she walk to the bench?

Arnav: bus

Khushi: nai nai bola aap

Arnav:shhh placed his finger on her lips.

Khushi: look at the dark sky"Where is our parents today?"

Arnav: i dont know he also look at the dark sky without star

Khushi: how lucky is jiji and jiju ,they have their maa

Arnav: took a deep breath

Khushi:when we will get married who will say all that things he look at her suddenly it started raining heavily ...

Arnav: just picked her up and ran to the veranda . made her stand "our maa's are crying too with us "just hold her tight next to him from her waist .

Buaji: come in beta you both will get sick it is cold..shouted from in side

Arnav: jee just kissed her cheek and walk in left her behind in shocked ...


Buaji: khushi come in do you want to get sick again .

khushi: just shyly walked in

Buaji: it is Payal shadi and you are blushing

Khushi: nahi tou nahi tuo

Maa : ok sit with arnav beta and eat ..she just sat with him

Arnav: was talking to payal he was just looking at her she just started eating.


buaji beta it is very cold and i am very tired i am going to my room

Arnav: ok

Buaji: khushi ha if you need any thing ask her

Arnav: jee

Khushi was cleaning kitchen

Arnav: i want some thing

Khushi: look at him

Arnav:buaji said to ask you

Khushi: just blush

Arnav: khushi kumari gupat make a cup of tea for me

Khushi: just came back to life .."acha acha" i will bring in a 5mins

Arnav: i am sitting out he walked to the veranda it was raining cats and dog.

Khushi" pat her head i am crazy "she made two cups and walked out

Arnav: you go in you will get sick

Khushi: no

Arnav: i will not sit like last night samjhe

Khushi: who asked you to sit ?


suddenly loud music started

Abhi kuch dino se lag raha hai
Badle badle se hum hai
Hum baithe baithe din mein sapne
Dekte neendein kam hai,


both look at each other they were lost

Abhi kuch dino se suna hai dil ka

Rob hi kuch naya hai
Koi raaz kambakht hai chupaye
khuda hi jaane ki kya hai
Hai dil pe shaq mera
Ise pyaar ho gaya,

khushi: just reacted "happy ji close it "

Arnav:smiled

Khushi: happy ji are you listen or you are making everyone to hear

Arnav: started laughing

Khushi:why are you laughing?

Arnav: you are becoming like me ,

Khushi: now what i did?

Arnav: you are taking out my anger on him pat her head.

Khushi:i cannot be like you

Arnav: you are like me

it thunder and lighten she just hold his arm and light went out

Tu bekhabar , Ya sab khabar
Ek din zara mere masoom dil pe gaur kar
Pardon mein main rakh loon tujhe
Ki dil tera aa na jaaye kahin yeh gair par
Arnav: just warp his arm around her " i am here"

Khushi: just hide herself in his arms
Hum bhole hai , Sharmile hai
Hum hai zara siddhe masoom itni khair kar
Jis din kabhi
Zidd pe ade
Hum ayenge aag ka tera dariya tair kar

buaji: khushi

Arnav: buaji she is with me he was willing to let her go

Buaji:beta she is scared of dark

Arnav: i know buaji you rest i am here with her

Buaji: just walk back as she was shivering

Khushi:"aap ko humari wajhe se problem horahi ha.kal bhi "

Arnav:shhh chup please whisper in her ear."i dont have any problem ok"

Khushi:hold him more tight,

Arnav:our maa are getting very naught khushi he said as it thunder again.

Khushi: just blush as she got what he met, "lets go in"

Arnav:smiled he just hold her hand and closed the door.

Payal: are you coming or you will talk with him, bauji door is locked as it was again and again opening with wind ,when you come to room just open it

Arnav: i will bring her you go and sleep

Khushi:just look at him "you sleep "

Arnav:just didnt reply he just removed the blanket "sit "

Khushi:aap

Arnav: come on , i am not sleepy khushi just sat in bed he sat next to her "sit here till light come"

Khushi: ok he just covered her and himself."that day it was raining too"

Arnav: shhh placed her head on his shoulder she just hold him tight

Khushi: i still remember

Arnav:just kissed her hand "why you are scared today ? i am here "

Khushi: you will not be here always

Arnav: just hold her tight" i will be there for you always close your eyes' kissed her fore head


to be cont

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update!

I love how he's there for her and didn't let her go

Love this SS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww.. a&k are together.. love the update.

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