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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Update!!!!
Loved the way he is there for her any moment...any place...any time...
waiting for their Malaysia trip...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PYAR KARNA KOI ARNAV SE SIKHE
u portrayed his character too good
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG the last lines were like...
I truly felt for Arnav...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful
luvd da way he said dat he is always there 4 her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohh that was fab nadd
well u dnt forget to add one dialogue of buaji in every ff, ss or os of your

buaji: look at him beta sanka devi na tang to nahi kiya

lol 😆

thankx for pm
continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Just fantasic and lovely!!!👏⭐️
Thanks for the PM!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!!!!!!!
fab job
it was so cute
byeee
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Posted: 13 years ago

khushi: can i ask something?

Arnav: yes

Khushi: am i dreaming or you are change ?

Arnav: just look at her ,her eyes was closed ,he could feel her breath on his neck

Khushi:just don't break my this dream as it will hurt me .

Arnav:felt a tear roll down his neck.."why are you crying?"

Khushi: didnot reply .

Arnav:"if you trust me share with me everything that is haunting you"

Khushi:" nothing is haunting me "

Arnav: just didnot bother her ." you have changed me do you know that"

Khushi: kaise

Arnav: for the first time in life i cared for someone else

Khushi: jhoot

Arnav: what

Khushi: you always cared for me ,you can say officially you are caring for the first time.

Arnav: smiled

Khushi: dont you remember ,my hand got wounded ,my ankle got twisted , mud went in my eyes, i had temperature, the car was about to kill me .i was not trace able . i was wrap in wire . my hand was about to get burn with wax .the guy touch me at .he sealed her lips as he could not take it more ,she was not at all expecting it from him she was shocked at first but his tender touch made her relaxed .

Arnav: marry me if you think i care for you

Khushi: was in stage of shocked ,she was not able to speak . he just caress her hairs

Arnav: take your time and think ,dont be scared you can reject me . he just closed his eyes ,as her closeness was making him ask for more.she was just holding him tight La words echo in her ears "ASR told you that he loves you" there was a dead silence in the room both were just awake just pretending to be asleep. he felt she just placed her head on his chest "so you do love me "he said to him self did not said a word to her.


it was middle of night when she suddenly started murmuring he just felt she was shaking him he just look at her

Khushi: he will ruin both families your di and my jiji

Arnav: just hug her tight" khushi wake up"

Khushi was just murmuring " he said he will hurt arnav ji buaji he said "

Arnav: khushi just shakes her

Khushi :just open her eyes "he will harm you"

Arnav: khushi no one will harm me relax and i am here with you she was sweating , she just look at him" now tell me what is bothering you ?" kissed her forehead

Khushi: nothing

Arnav: khushi dont you trust me?

Khushi: i trust you

Arnav: then tell me

Khushi: i cannot i cannot she try to getup but he stopped her

Payal: came in "What happen?"

Arnav:just a night mare he was patting her .

Payal: i will

Arnav: just look at her his eyes said he will take care of her .she just walked away."shyam will not do any thing ,he will not touch you or di i will kill him"

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: i wanted you to tell me ,but i dont know why you are that scared? he cannot even touch you .

Khushi: aap ko pata ha

Arnav; yes my love i know kissed her forehead. last night in sleep you told me everything now sleep peacefully "

Khushi: you dont hate me ?

Arnav: no i just love you kissed her hand .

Khushi: just started crying

Arnav: bus now i dont want to see any tears in your eyes wipe her eyes , go to sleep ,just hug her she just hold him tight .


next morning at 6

buaji woke up she just try to open the door but it was locked from out ,she just called khushi"Sanka devi "

Arnav: just heard he just look at khushi who was sleeping holding him tight,he peek her, just carefully picked her up and walk to her room

Payal was getting up

Arnav: you wait i will open he just made her rest on bed and carefully removed her arms which was holding his shirt"keep your hand on her ,she is still have fear"he covered her and walk to the hall .. just open the lock

Buaji: where is Sanka devi

Arnav: dont wake her let her sleep, she last night again got frighten .

Buaji: when hum ko pata nahi chala

Arnav: payal and i took care of her she is fine now he just walk to the room he lay down but he felt something is missing . he just kept his hand on the side were she was sleeping mins back. he just closed his eyes..



it was 9

Khushi: arnav ji just called him

Arnav hmmm

Khushi; aap he just hold her arm"chora buaji ha"

Arnav:let her see

Khushi: just try to free her hand

Arnav: pull her

Khushi: aap kya kar raha ha she landed on him

Arnav: pyar just quickly kissed her "hato"as he saw she was looking in his eyes

Khushi just quickly got up and ran out .

buaji: sanka devi kya bhoot ha jo iss tarah se bhag rahi hoon.

Khushi: arnav ji

Buaji: arnav bhoot ha , pat her

Khushi: nahi nahi buaji

Buaji: bilkul paglagai ho tum

Arnav: just smiled walked to wash room

buaji : aaj sangeet ha aur tum pat her

Khushi: just bit her lips .she started making his break fast .some one bell

buaji iss waqat kon she open the door

NK: hello

Buaji: nK

NK: ji ji

Buaji: is everything alright

NK: yes yes

Arnav: came out of room"why you are here ?"

NK: when you can stay here cannot I come?

Buaji: you can come beta

Arnav: look at khushi she just avoid eye lock with him.

buaji: khushi quickly make break fast

Khushi: take your medicine she just gave him water and his tablet.

NK: just look at them.

Buaji: sanka devi ko kuch to yaad ha

NK: sanak devi ?

Buaji: like you call him naanav i call her snaka devi

NK: started laughing "Sanka devi vs Naanav"

Arnav:showed him eyes

NK: buaji will you dance with me ?

Buaji: look at him

Nk: naanav said he will dance with his sanka devi so i dont have a partner

Arnav: nk

NK: kya sanka devi ka naanav

Khushi just drop glass in kitchen

Buaji: naanav nahi Laad Governor.

Arnav: just smiled . she just bang tray on the table

Khushi: agar ab kaise na bola sanka devi , laad governor tou hum se bura koi nahi ho ga.

Arnav: sanka devi

Khushi: with a open mouth look at him. "Aap bhi" she just walk to her room

Arnav: had a laughter.

NK: naanav she is annoyed

Arnav: no she is not ,

Buaji: she must be talking to her DM.

Arnav: could see her sitting on chair talking to her DM."khushi is this the way to look after your guest " he said from out

Khushi: mere aur jiji ka siwa koi nahi guest ha yahan.

Arnav: just smiled

Buaji: look at NK in shocked. "phir sanak gai "

Arnav: she agreed . drank water ..

buaji : ap iss ko kya huwa .. i think sub pagla gau ha...

Arnav: buaji she agreed to marry his Laad Governor , they heard her giggle in the room/

Buaji just in shocked look at him.


to be cont

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved it... simply awesum!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWW..lovely..he proposed to her 😃
Waiting to see shyam's reaction to this..update soon
Thnx for the PM😊

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