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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz Update soon... Waiting waiting waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayeee it was so sweet cute adorable i read ur whole ff today nd i wonder hw can i left wid dis personally i love Arsha more dn Kriyaansh!! and the masterpiece line😍! omg!!it was brilliant!!! its all so natural !! plz update soon!!!!nd plzzz pm me😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neethuuthaman

Plz Update soon... Waiting waiting waiting...

i'll try my best to update by monday :)
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Originally posted by: shonabhardwaj

hayeee it was so sweet cute adorable i read ur whole ff today nd i wonder hw can i left wid dis personally i love Arsha more dn Kriyaansh!! and the masterpiece line😍! omg!!it was brilliant!!! its all so natural !! plz update soon!!!!nd plzzz pm me😃

thank you so much 😊
and plz read the note regarding pms on page 12 :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Alrite guys i finally updated. sorry for the delay, i was trying to make this part extra good but i couldnt put my ideas in order so im not too happy with this part.

Sorry if i couldnt match upto ur expectations :(

Before u guys continue i want to dedicate this part to ankita aka aria009hera and anya aka anyaa_012.

ankita thank you so much in helping me choose the song and anya thanks so much for the pep talk when i was suffering from a brain block.

so without further delay...

Chapter 8

They reached the rehearsal hall and Shakti broke away from Amar's embrace and grabbed a pen and notepad to jot down what possible songs and dance styles they could try. She took her laptop out and began browsing while Amar stood there watching her and wondering what to do. He really wanted to just sit there and hold Shakti in his arms all night but they had work to finish.

After wracking his head trying to convince himself to just focus on work he joined her and took the laptop from her and searched up some unique dance styles they could try.

Shakti was a little surprised that Amar was so focused on their work but she let it go.

After discussing possible ideas they finalized Samba! This dance style is almost similar to Salsa and Rumba but its more fast paced. Although Rumba is known as the "dance of love" Samba is more sensuous with sexy hip movements. [ofcourse this was Amar's idea ;) ]

They had also decided the song and tried out some steps. As they combined efforts the individual dance steps began to bind together into a beautiful choreography.

The choreography was finally completed and Shakti and Amar began to practice. Amar pulled Shakti's body close as the music began to play. They assumed their positions when the lyrics began...

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

woh bhi ek daur tha

waqt hi aur tha

jab woh the ajnabi

dono tanaha se the

par woh kehte kise

baat jo dil mein thi

Amar had his hands possessively on Shakti's waist and no matter how many turns or lifts they did he never stopped touching her. Every chance he got he crushed her body with his and the only interference between their bodies were the thin material of their clothes. Her sexy movements were making him go mad with need that he just couldn't keep his eyes or his hands off her.

Shakti tried to focus only on her dance but she couldn't ignore the feel of Kunwar's presence or his body tightly lined against hers. The want and passion that was trying to burst out from inside of her was maddening. She tightened her hold on him and melted into his arms, surrendering completely. They danced to the music with fierce expressions on their faces, trying to control their need for each other.

gumsum gumsum rehte the dono

phir bhi dil mein kehte the dono

koyi sapana hum bhi to paayein

ek din tute ghum ke woh ghere

jhilmil jhilmil aaye savere

mausam badala jaagi fizaayein

woh mil gaye, woh khil gaye

aur pyaar ho hi gaya

He twirled her around and pulled her into his arms, carrying her over to the couch. Amar couldn't resist her anymore. Although they hadnt finished practicing Shakti didn't protest. She could feel Kunwar's longing and her own as well.

Amar sat down on the couch with Shakti in his arms, placing her on his lap. He looked into her eyes and saw the desire in his own eyes reflected in hers. He pulled her close and kissed her into a frenzy of want.

Shakti couldn't believe how Kunwar's single touch or just one kiss could drive her so wild with want. She wrapped her arms securely around his neck, as if to never let go, and kissed him with all her might.

They pulled away from each other gasping for air when Shakti's phone rang. She got off Amar's lap and answered the call.

"Hey ma!"

"Beta where are you?" her mom inquired.

"Sorry mom. Mei batana bhool gayi. I wont come home tonite. I have to stay and practice for tomorrow's shoot. You dont worry, Kunwar meri saath hai"

"Then i have nothing to worry about." Shakti's mom replied.

Shakti wished her mom good night and hung up before turning to face Amar, who was lounging on the couch and watching her.

"Done talking?" he asked. "If so, then i would appreciate it if you came back here becuz i wasnt finished with you" he said in a teasing manner with that killer smile of his.

Shakti blushed but walked over to the couch and stood in front of him. "We still need to rehearse."

Amar took hold of her hand and pulled her into his lap once again. He moved close to her face. "Do you really want to practice now or do want to do something else?" he whispered in her ear.

His hot breath was blowing into her ear sending shivers up her spine. Amar ran the tip of his nose along her jawline from her ear to her chin and back up again. He lightly bit the tip of her ear making her squirm in anticipation.

"Kunwar...we shud...prac..tice..." Shakti was losing her train of thought.

Amar laid down on the couch pulling her on top of him. He tilted her head up so he could reach her neck, placing soft kisses and nips along her collarbone.

"You were saying something?" he asked while running his lips along the side of her face.

"Mmm... yea...prac.." before she could try to finish her sentence Amar pulled her face down and kissed her.

He nudged her mouth open with his tongue to meet hers. She playfully nipped his lower lip and continued to kiss him. He tightened his hold on her and ran his hands along her back and sides exploring and appreciating the softness of her skin.

Shakti felt as if something inside of her was trying to burst free. She tightened her grip on his shoulders and dug her nails into his skin trying to hold onto to dear life. No matter how much she kissed him or touched him she just couldnt get enough.

Amar pulled away allowing Shakti to plant kisses on his neck and shoulders. He grabbed the back of her neck pulling her face back to his as she ran her fingers thru his hair. They kissed until both of them felt light headed from the lack of oxygen.

Finally Shakti pulled away and tucked her head into the crook of his neck cuddling into the warmth of his embrace. They lay there for a while in comfortable silence trying to catch their breaths.

Neither of them said anything for a while. Finally Amar tightened his hold on Shakti's waist and got up into a sitting position pulling her up with him. She was still craddled in his embrace.

"Shakti, you still want to practice?" he asked with a little laugh.

She didnt respond. "Shakti?"

He pulled away a little so he could see her face. Her eyes were closed and she was breathing in and out evenly. Amar watched her sleep for a minute. She looked so sweet and innocent in her sleep. There was pure peace and bliss in her expression as if she slept without a single tension in the world. And she was right to be like that as she was in his arms and he would never let anything happen to her. He carefully gathered her into his arms and carried her over to one of the makeup rooms that had a bed.

He gently laid her on the bed and placed her head on a soft pillow before tucking the blanket around her. He was about to leave when Shakti grabbed his hand and stopped him.

"Kunwar...stay.." she sighed, still half-asleep.

A smile spread across his face at her cuteness. He climbed in next to her and she turned towards him snuggling into his warmth. Amar's heart swelled with love. He absolutely adored the feel of her in his arms. It felt so right for her to be in his embrace where he could hide her from the rest of the world and keep for himself. He wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her as close as he could and dozed off hoping he'd never have to let go of this perfect girl - HIS perfect girl.

phew. finally done. this part didnt come out the way i had hoped so im sorry if i didnt live up to your expectations. please do like and comment...even if u didnt like it :)
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Edited by KriaReyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey it was awesome.
pata nhi y do u feel that u didn't match the expectation.
t least mere toh kiye
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all.. thank u for d sweet dedication!! 😳 i had no idea dat u were gonna use dis song so beautifully... i loved it..!!

and today itself i had vowed to myself to stop dreaming abt arsha.. bt dis update of urs has sent me directly to arshaland.. nd m nt even coming back to earth... haayyeee.. it ws sooo HAWWWTT!!! it ws soo freaking hot dat it literally burned my laptop screen!!



"Done talking?" he asked. "If so, then i would appreciate it if you came back here becuz i wasnt finished with you" he said in a teasing manner with that killer smile of his. and dis dialogue.. i almost picturised it wid dat naughty smile of his and fainted..!! ☺️☺️☺️

Edited by aria009hera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super like... loved it... like like like like...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awwieee...m dead 🤢...it was ssooo HAWT!!! omg omg mereko breath nahi arrahii...arghh tumhe mujhe maarne ki aadat ho gayi hai aur marne ki ly bhi world ke biggest crimnal Arsha ko choose kia...aww it was freaking hot..☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Who said it dint cum out well..such a cute n hawt update..lvd d way u dscrbd song n deir actions..lv u 4 d update..awesm1
Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago

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