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Piyu

@100littledevils

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

awww soo cute n hawt!! Loved it!! awesome!! Plzz update soon!! can't wait !! thanx for pm :)

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

😳let me collect my breath...

hooo it was breath taking part😳

god it was tooo hot i cant stop my self from reading it again and again ☺️

it was awesome 👏

you are superb writer and your ff is awesome and very hot👍🏼😳 and this dialogue

"Done talking?" he asked. "If so, then i would appreciate it if you came back here becuz i wasnt finished with you" killed me🤢

cant wait for the next part please update fast eagerly waiting for the next part😍

Edited by luv_arsha - 13 years ago

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

i loved the way shakti fell asleep and loved the way amar carried her to the bed n thanks for the pm and loved it loads

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

OMG how could you not live up to our expectations? This was AWESOME and by far my favourite update yet! So so so SO CUTE! I cant stop gushing about it! I especially like the image you leave off with...of Shakti asleep in Amar's arms...sigh😳 And how her mom says she has nothing to worry about if Amar is with her. TOO GOOD yaar! LOVED IT!😃

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binx-D3

@binx-D3

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

wow..this was amazing...truly amazing...thank you so much for the update!!

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sukanya

@sukanyaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

pria...m just speechless...its a superb update...the song selection is so apt...n the dialogoues god...they just killed me...the way Amar teases Shakti n his naughty smile...i can simply visualize the whole sequence n can actually feel how hot he will luk lyk in such a situation...

the more i try nt to thnk abt dem much the more ur such updates make me thnk abt dem, dream abt dem ...

gosh m again losing it...

so before losing it completely ...let me tell u ...its really an wonderful update...

keep up the good work...n come up wid the nxt one soon...

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Shruti Tah

@sweetapple2995

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

ek minute...NOT LIVED UP TO EXPECTATIONS HAHHA GIRLYOU EXCEEDED EXPECTATIONS hahhaha awesome job and last part was sooo cute! 😳😍

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
hey it was awesome.
pata nhi y do u feel that u didn't match the expectation.
t least mere toh kiye

thank you so much dear 😊 glad u liked it

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: aria009hera
first of all.. thank u for d sweet dedication!! 😳 i had no idea dat u were gonna use dis song so beautifully... i loved it..!!

and today itself i had vowed to myself to stop dreaming abt arsha.. bt dis update of urs has sent me directly to arshaland.. nd m nt even coming back to earth... haayyeee.. it ws sooo HAWWWTT!!! it ws soo freaking hot dat it literally burned my laptop screen!!

"Done talking?" he asked. "If so, then i would appreciate it if you came back here becuz i wasnt finished with you" he said in a teasing manner with that killer smile of his. and dis dialogue.. i almost picturised it wid dat naughty smile of his and fainted..!! ☺️☺️☺️

thanks so much ankita 😊 and yea i felt u deserved the credit for the song since it was ur idea :)

haha arsha is just so perfect and hawt tht its hard to ignore them for long 😉

glad u liked it !