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Posted: 13 years ago
me want in 2 different updates...because then you can do it in detail...

aur meri bechari geet ko paksh do...usse heart attack ajayega.🤢..agar tum sab ek update main liklogee toh! 😆 LOOOL

joking...do whatever you feel write...we will all support you! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here's the next part jaaniss 😃 Thank you for the lovely comments 😃
PART 41

So well Maan then went downstairs after promising her that he would take her out for valentines day .. Well convincing the family was not difficult as maan said geet had told him to take her out tomorrow only then she will talk to all of them so everyone had to agree .. They somewhere knew maan would take care of geet and they all trusted him .. so then came the special day .. THE VALENTINE'S DAY .. Geet today woke up late as there was no pending work or anything in office .. So she requested a leave and it was willingly accepted .. Geet woke up all yawning and was shocked to see a Wrapped gift and a bouquet of red roses .. She got all excited and jumped out of the bed too see ..

She looked in awe at the lovely bouquet of roses then her eyes fell on a single rose with a small card written ..

Happy Valentine's day to the most beautiful girl ..

She smiled widely .. She then unwrapped the gift and read another letter in it ..

Miss Bak bak ..

She made an O face ..

Okay okay don't make thses faces ..

She smiled

Now stop smiling and quickly get ready by 6 .. I will send the car for you ..

She gave a questioning look ..

Don't give me these questioning eyes it's a surprise na baba .. And please don't expect me to tell you .. If I tell you then it won't be a surprise so please keep your question bank closed and start getting ready for your first valentine's with me ..

Your's maan ..

She then saw a beautiful yet elegant red dress and again a letter she smiled widely..

I love this smile of yours ..

She blushed ..

Ok ok stop blushing and this is a dress for you .. Do wear it for me ..

Your's maan

She couldn't stop admiring him .. Oh how he knew everything about her .. when she smiled when she does what he seems to know everything .. She kissed the note where it was written yours maan .. and blushed ..

To her surprise another note fell ..

Not fair .. Ye kiss tou aaj shaam kay liaay tha naa .. Save it ..

She blushed a deep red and ran to the washroom to take a bath ..

After an hour or so of a hot water bath and relaxing therapy she came out wrapped in a bathrobe and dressed in the dress that he had presented to her .. She looked stunning in it .. It was a long red dress with a little diamond broach in the middle giving it it's classy look .. She looked stunning in it .. She admired her self in the mirror but then blushed thinking how he would react seeing her in this .. She Tied her hair in a neat bun such that her milky white skin of the neck and back was visible .. She wore A few diamond bracelets in her hand and Stunning diamond long earring giving her a glamorous look ..

She definitely looked out of this world with a little kohl and lip gloss ..

(Geet's hair and dress)

(Her bangles)

(Her earrings )

She went downstairs and everyone just kept starring at her .. She looked no less that an angel .. Beautiful .. hot ..stunning .. Yash infact pinched Ranbir in a trance to check weather he was dreaming or not ... Ranbir screamed ..

Ouuchhh ...

And everyone turned to them ..

Oh sorry .. OMG this is you geet ?? He asked all surpised to see her ..

You look gorgeous bacha .. said ranbir and kissed her forehead ..

Hayee Meri beti has grown into such a beautiful girl .. said Mrs Handa ..

Hamari beeti corrected Mr handa and Everyone laughed ..

Geet was blushing with all the comments .. And everyone kept teasing her till the time arrival of the driver was announced .. everyone went to leave her to the door with loads of precautions of what to eat what not .. don't do this and that etc etc etc ..

Finally she was in the car and it headed to some place wich she couldn't guess where but well maan had palnned it it must be good she thought ..

After half an hour the car reached it's destinationa nd she got of screaming his name ..

Maan maaan Maan ..

No response ..

Maan .. Where are you ?

She tried again ..

Just then someone came and tied a blindfold on he reyes and she was about to scream when he said ..

Shhh .. It's me geet ..

Appp .. But why are you tying this ..

Obviously so you do not see geet .. he said ad chuckled ..

Very funny and she made an attempt to take it off when maan held her wrist and asked ..

Do you trust me ..

Yes came an instant reply ..

He smiled and said tou chaloo ..

Par where are we going .. ???

shh will tell na geet ..

Parr maan ..

If you don't keep quiet i have other ways to do it he said and carrased his thumb on her lower lip specifing what other ways was he referring to .. She blushed and opted the safe option to keep shut ..

Maan then opened the blindfold and see saw her reflection in the mirror she looked at him questioningly and he just slipped in a heart shape beautiful diamond pendant .. She smiled .. he kissed the nape of her neck while tying it and she moaned him name .. His hand went further down a little carrasing her back and in a moment he opened the pin that tied her bun together .. She opened her eyes wide .. when he said ..

Happy valentines day sweetheart and i love your hair open ..

She blushed ta the word sweetheart adn hugged him thanking him while he led her further away showing her surprise leaving her shocked and stunned ..

(Pendant Given by maan)

Well well please comment will update again tomorrow 😃

PRECAP : surprise surprise 😉

Please comment and update ..

Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Her hair and dress .. I guess it's not opening in there ...
Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part


waiting for the surprise
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovel dear plz update the surprise soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update wating for suprise
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet must have looked stunning in that dress, waiting for the surprise now!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...just loved geet's gorgeous dress and her over protective brothers...😆

plus the letter seemed really good as well...😉

and maan's way of keeping her quiet! 😳

kya yaar naima...you finished writing your update pretty quickly...chal ab main hi bachi...

better get down to writing soon!

awesome...continue soon

thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it fab.
waiting for 2morrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -maankimishty-

beautiful update...just loved geet's gorgeous dress and her over protective brothers...😆


plus the letter seemed really good as well...😉

and maan's way of keeping her quiet! 😳

kya yaar naima...you finished writing your update pretty quickly...chal ab main hi bachi...

better get down to writing soon!

awesome...continue soon

thanks for PM

ww Thank you soo much Apoorva 😃
Haha short tha na thora that's why jaldi khatamho gaya 😆
aab jaldi jaldi type karoo me waiting for your update 😉

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