Mohabat jab ho gai S-Kprt18pg38 UPDTED - Page 23

hi sweeties ...firsdt of all i m sorry for this much long break .....and sorry to suri .....she one of my gav ..readers i love her comments ......and this is for you suri ...



PART :18

Tushar , Sujal and kashish are going with out talking with each other . Kashish is not very happy with the fact that she wasn't able to kill kripa …on other hand plan is cooking in sujal's mind …!

It is evening they have torches with them they saw a some lights from far they heads towards them.

They were some people who forget the way and waiting for morning to come so they could go back . sujal and kashish when reached there they welcome them . both of them sit across… a guy speak ..

Guy : hey khush …ajj kuch gana yaar …

A pretty face girl turned around "ok darling then she gave that guy a smacking kiss and took her guitar …and start singing …

The scene was like kashish and sujal sitting across each other …few gals n guys were sitting there wrapping them selves in shawls to keep them selves warm ..while a couple there shamelessly making out ignoring others …and no one is noticing and few are laughing ..While sujal is feeling uncomfortable kashish busy in looking sujal only ….

Khushi start singing …

Shaam hai jaam hai Aur hai nasha
Tan bhi hai maan bhi hai pigla howa
Chayee hai ranginiyaan phir bhi hai Betabiyaan
Kyun dhadakta hai dil kyun ye kehta hai dil
Deewano ko ab tak nahi hai ye pata
Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya
Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya

Sujal looking at kashish ….with smile but in his heart …there is only anger nothing else

Pal ghari main ajj janey kiya hoga
Jo hamesha tha dil ..dil mera hoga
Ko kis ke dil main hai fasila hoga
Faisla hai yehi jet hogi meri
Deewano ko ab tak nahi hai ye pata

Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya
Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya



Guy sing

Aao main tum se kahoon baat chupke se
Raang badley gi pal main raat chupke se
Tum ko le jaon ga saath main chupke se

Kashish look at him and smile …and sing …

Jaaonge tum kahan dekho main hoon yahan
Deewano ko ab tak nahi hai ye pata

Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya
Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya

Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya
Ajj ki raat hona hai kiya
Pana hai kiya khona hai kiya


Night passes …..the sun spread its rays every …where …..and some thing have already been planed by sujal …what is that ?


Coming up :

LAST PART …….

great part .u contd after a long time. will wait for the last part.

Originally posted by: golu_1677

great part .u contd after a long time. will wait for the last part.

thnks😃 again sorry for being late 😳

👏 gr88 part dii...amna dii...loved it 👏

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont jaldi jaldi 😛 😛

amna dear..love you....you continued the story.... yaar i completely loveeeeee your story.. thanku for the dedication....🤗
yaar ab coming to the part as usual it completely rocked.... yahaan pe sujal ke dimaak ka scheme ming chal rahi hai... he is ready to avenge kashish... yeh tho mast hai.... now coming to the song and kashish going on staring at sujal...well yeh dekh kar tho mujhe lagtha hai kii kashish ko sachchi mein sujal se mohabbat ho hii gayi hai..that song , kashish kii stare depicted that...ab sujal ka not looking at kashish... well i think there was one more reason why he was not looking at her... that is because deep down his heart he has started falling for her.... well anyway the part completely was amazing..i liked it very damn much.. it was indeed very damn interesting... amna dear you very well know how to keep your readers hooked.. and me tho chipak gayi teri story ke saath , aur yeh fevicol kii jod hai... the story is going absolutely great.. keep up the good work going... 👏 👏yaar ab next part ke liye i think that kashish will support sujal , i mean she will stand by sujal and become good... may be because she has fallen in love with sujal.... i think yeh hoga... am i right amna yaar.... 😉 😉 😉
ab please next part jaldi se post karna..me waiting eagerly... 😃

no i have not forget any one .................all of u are my from my very first forum friends ..i love the way u appreciate me ...suri ..i knew how lonng analyses u write ..hehehhee

ok i have break for one week i m continuing it this noon inshallah hopely end it ..and again i will write raj amna ...ff.........reason i wanna keep my readers hooked up with me 😆

Originally posted by: cute_face86

no i have not forget any one .................all of u are my from my very first forum friends ..i love the way u appreciate me ...suri ..i knew how lonng analyses u write ..hehehhee

ok i have break for one week i m continuing it this noon inshallah hopely end it ..and again i will write raj amna ...ff.........reason i wanna keep my readers hooked up with me 😆

hope so
r u going 2 continue ab ke jo bichare??? plz reply

pls make kash good again and make sujal love her........plz.......i wud be the happiest person on earth.........and nice concept.....cont soon

goos story line ur poems r really touching plz amke sujal and kashish come together and plz plz plz plz plz post the next part soon