Mohabat jab ho gai S-Kprt18pg38 UPDTED - Page 21

I just read the whole thing again amna sis......its amazing...we dunt talk anymore like old days but still i guess we r friends...anyway cont sooooooooon......gr8 job....uff this amna evil queeeen!!!


Iqra 😊

amna dear please post the next part soon..me waiting... 😃

just read ur fic.
it has a good twist but i hate kashish being a bad girl or even sujal hating her.
plz do somthing about.
continue soon

ok amna dear take your time we understand.... 😊

amna dear take ur time we will wait. work comes first

amna dii.......u r going great
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4 this i will give u a coke ka crate
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take ur time.....we won't mind 😳
but cont it at the time u find 😆
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lolz
ana

r u still busy....plz try n continue soon...

part :17


they keep walking when kripa feel a throbing head ach she hold angad's arm tightly ......every one stopped ......she then kneel down holding her head ...."angad ...i am not feeling well ...main aur nahi chal sakti"......kashish saw her plan ruinning so she said "magar kripa tumharey bagair tu mera kaam adhura reh jaye ga na " ..........sujal look at her "tumhara kaam ?" ......kashish at the moment love to kill her own self for that stupid thing she just said " no ..i mean ....hum sab jis kaam ke lia aye hein wo ..."...sujal obdserved what is going in kashish's mind "angad ....mujey lagta hai kripa ko humarey sath nahi anna chahiya ....." ...angad get shocked "magar kripa yahan akeli kesey rahey gi .....sujal thought for once and said "merey pass ik idea hai ke wo dekho wahan tum loog ko ik hut dekahi de raha hai ...." angad look at direction what sujal was pointing out ..."yes i can see " said angad ..."lets go there " saying this sujal walk towards the hut ...kashish angad kripa and tushar follow him ..finally they reach at hut ...sujal knocks the door .....an old woman open the door ...she was wearing an old style long dress ..and seemed very poor ......"sujal i cannot leave my kripa here" said angad " wait dude ..........amma ....kiya hum andar asaktey hein "....the old lady look every one keenly then move a side welcoming them in hut ..."aao"...she said ...all move in side "sujal look at house it was clean and small hut made with wood ...." amma ye kripa hai hum ik safar per jareahey hein ye bhi humarey sath hai magar ye maa banney wali hai aur is ki halat essi nahi ke ye chal sakey ....tu ager app ko bura na lagey tu kia ye aur is ka pati angad yahan reh saktey hein ".....old lady look at sujal "magar beta merey pass itney pasey nahi hein ke main in do mehmanoon ki khatir dari ker sakoon "........sujal look at her and said "dont worry ...ye jab tak yahan hein in ka kharcha aur app ka bhi angad khud bardasht karey ga ...ok angad "...angad nod his head ..then after taking some rest ......sujal , kashish and tushar .........say good byes to angad kripa and old lady ..with the hope that that they will meet soon angad was not ready to leave sujal and tushar alone ...but sujal told him "tum hum se bari larai ler rahey ho angad ager tum humari wapsi tak kripa ka dehaan rakh paye tu ....hi hum sab kamyaab hongye .." then sujal hug angad and then kripa ....he kiss her forrhead ....he was about to leave when kripa hold his hand "rukya mera koi bhai nahi hai kiya app merey bhaya banein gye hum achey dost hein tu is se bhi achey behen bhai bhi hosaktey hein hai na ..." sujal nods with a pleasant smile on his face .......kripa tied a rakhi on his hand ....the rakhi was made with a piece of cloth ...kripa further said "ye main ne is lia bandhi ke mujey mera bhai wapis chahiya " .kashish was getting pissed off at the whole scene while tushar angad and lady were happy when kripa sujal hugged again .

ok i will continue tonight again for sure .................

hope like it
amna 😳