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Posted: 18 years ago
part 15



They are now in jungle in their enemy place …..They were unaware …..They all were scared ……throat seemed to be dried as never before ……..! Suddenly that priest…that old man again appeared ….. Kashish is now kind of scared she dugged her nails into sujal's arms…kripa was too shocked to death...The old man forwarded towards kripa and kept his palm over her head "tu mushkil main ……bura waqt ha ital jaiga …tujh per se gham ka saya dhal jaye ga ……" he then addressed all "ye waqt bura hai tum burey ho …..tumharey ander ka insaan bhi bura is larai ki shooroat ho chuki ……..tumharey samney kai ….mushkillein aye gi magar in sab se pehley tumhey apney anar ke shaitan ko marna hai ………..wo tumharey dil main waswasey daley ga burey khayal daley ga tumharey hi dooston ke khilaf tumhey unhey apney dil se nikal ker apney dostoon ka saath de …us ko pehley makey main harana hai …"……sujal …"app kon hai …"…..the old main smiled …"main Allah ka ik adna banda hoon ….tumhey mushkil main dekha …tu tumhari madad kerney ki thani …….ye kaam mushkil hai namumkin nahi …..jao Allah tumharey saath hai .."…..kashish now asked " magar is ke agey kia hoga ….."….old man .."tum …pehley wo karo jo kaha gya hai ..phir tumhari mushkil ..or imtehaan khud ba khud asaan ho jaye gye …….Allah tumhara nigheban …Allah hafiz " /………then he disappeared ……sujal "ab humein ik doosrey ke saath rehna ho ga …." Tushar spread the map ……."ye nhai rasta …"……angad" nahi sujal ye humain ghalat rasta dekha raha hai ……." Sujal looked at angad carefully ……….his eyes were not supporting his statement …..sujal quietly took some water in one hand ……and then suddenly splashed at angad's face and showed him locket …angad …jerk "kia howa mujey kia howa tha …" sujal "lagta hai us ne apna kaam shoro kerdia hai "

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"haan shoro hogya mera kaam ……………." ..the demon leader ….yelled …"in sab ki maut inhey yahan leker aye hai ……marein gye sab ke sab ..koi nahi bachey ga ………..aney do inhey humarey chungal main ahista ahista …….na karo inhey tang…………..magar haan in ke ander ka shaitan marna nahi chahiya ….koshish karo ke ye apas main larein ik doosrey ko marein …jab insaan apas main lartey hei tu main khush hota hai …wo lar lar ker mar jaiengye aur phir duniya per humara raj ho ga ……….hahahahhahahahahhaha"

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sujal was kind of tired …along with every one they decide to rest …….after 1 hour every one is sleeping suddenly kashish …..gets up …………..she quietly open her bag bring out knife and move on …she passed every one and then stopped infront of sujal her face is shown now her eyes are red …..she smiled evilly ……and move her hand hand up so could stab it into ….sujal …………………………!

Coming up : will sujal survive …why kashish did this …?


due to ramadan i m not to continue quikly but only few parts remaining ...well today was 8th oct....the blak day in the history of Pakistan and south asia ......last year ..the northern areas ....some areas of punjab and some areas of kashmir......were distracted due to earth quake ............i request to .....pray for them ...they are still many areas ..where ppl are suffering like they were suffering ..on 8th oct 2005.....they do not sleep well becoz they think might they close their eyes and .....once again earth quake ...finish their life ...take what ever they have now ..after losing every thing............we need to bring smile at their faces ......i just wanna spread GEO's message ...

geo phir se geo
berho agey berho
geo in ke lia geo ......!


u can still donate some thing for them ..through differnt sincere NGO's and presidet relieve funds !

amna
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Posted: 18 years ago
i know it is not so good 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
amna fantastic...toooo gooddddddddddd... 👏
par yeh kashish ne sujal ko chakku maari.... kashish pe me getting total ghussa.....😡
bechara sujal...ab uska kya hoga... 😭 i hope sujal is fine... 😉 please koshish karna ki next part jaldi se post kar do..me will be waiting..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part...n an amazing msg.....u noe wtu....v did fund raise 4 dose victims in here n did send da money over...i jus hope dat the funds were used 2 halp out da ppl...
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART :16

Before stabbing she smiled wickedly and slowly slowly creases sujal's head! She sings

Ajeeb daastan hai ye
Kahan shoro kahan khatum
Ye manzilien hein kon se
Na wo samjh sakey na hum
Ajeeb dastaan hai ye….

She slowly change the direction of knife…with in her hand and then keep it again in bag …and says "I m sorry ….i m sorry every one ……..i had to do this …every time I try every time but some how I failed ……..so I decide to play my game in other ways …..when I was good I had nothing but now when I m with master demon helping to get u guys …I m happy …I m sorry sujal …I m sorry angad ……I have to do this to u …killing kripa is never my aim …….i have to kill u all ……u all give me pain ……..in some ways …..from the start ….swayum …he always treated me like a maid ……I respect him ..but he …he was a jerk …….so I killed him ..with my mighty powers …then kripa …she snatched angad from me ….i wanted to kill her only but she escaped …amna….sujal I started loving u but that amna came in my way so I had to ….i felt sorry for poor lady ….now u all ……except sujal …..I will not let nay thing happen to u …….but ……these three have to die …..they must die " ……she then left with evil grin …and after some time she fell a sleep ..sujal opened his eyes ..they were full of anger …he was awakened when she confessed whole thing …..his anger towards her ..his hate towards increased to peak level …" enough …..hating u or showing hate towards u is useless now I have to fight with in another way ……….i will kill with love ………..ab wo hoga jo na pehley kabhi howa na hoga …mohabbat hojati …….magar kabhi kabhi …ye jaan leker jaati …main rahoon na rahoon magar ye teeno apney ghar sahi salamat jayegye …………………"….a tear dropped from his eyes ……amna's image flash in his mind….a smiling one ….she was calling him ..!

Next day every one heads for further journey ….kashish was showing directions to every one …..sujal suddenly asked cheekly .."how u come to know all directions kashish ?"….she was …shocked at his sudden question then she replied ….."hmm …wo nahi …actually see the way is just infront"!
Sujal had a new smirked at his face a determination of some thing !

Coming up :…what will happen now ?

PROMO:

YE KESA DIL KA RISHTA HAI
JO DIL KO TEES PHONCHATA HAI …
KABHI JO HASAYE HUMEIN …
KABHI ANSOO DE JAYE HUMEIN …
HOTA HAI YE DIL KE SATH
MOHABAT JAB HOJATI HAI !


OK DECIDE TO KILL ME ...MY STORY IS NOT AT ALL WITH HAPPY ENDING LIKE OTHERS ....BUT SOME THE ENDING WILL BE GOOD AND ACCORDING TO THEME OF THE STORY ...I WANNA SHOW SOME POWERFUL ENDING ......BESIDES THE TRADITIONAL HERO HEROINE ..AND BACHA PARTY ...!

AMNA 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
amna this was amazing. end the story the way u want to i am loving it. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
amna dear you write sooo damn well... simply
awesome , superb , wow... seriously dear what a twist....totally unexpected.... it was very different & coollllllllllllllllllllllll... your story is getting more & more intresting.... 👏
dear but why is kashish bad.... ab iska matlab kya yeh hua ki sujal kashish will not unite.... 😭
amna please kuch bhi karna par sujal , kashish ko judaa na karna.... show something like kashish has been effected by the evil demons..😉 now please continue soon.. me will be waiting for the next part.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i dont have words so i just want to say this 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
thts sooo great...i like kashish evil side....update soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hmm really interesting 😉 amna dear....
sumthing new & different...... 😛
too good part.... 👏
will b waiting for next 1..... 😊

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