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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Aashi she sounds cute. She is mesmerized in Maan's look.
But why did Geet deny on knowing Maan? She didn't want to be obvious?
Eager to see Maan's reaction.

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Saru

@smallville

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

Awesome
Loved it
I can understand why geet said she didn't know him ...they have feelings for each other but they never said that they were dating exclusively. It good she kept the relationship private a secret romance is always exciting ;)
Waiting to see how maan interacts with geet infront of everyone :)
Update soon !!!

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#733

please continue soon , this is getting very interesting

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mayukha

@mayukha

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

OMG !!! THAT SHOULD BE TITLED AS PRECAP, NOT AN UPDATE...😡😡😡

I just saw the note about your update in the small right-hand corner window and immediately rushed to get my piping hot adrak wale chai (I love it especially during a snow storm like what we now have).

I even got my deep maroon soft velvety throw to actually get into the mood...

I expected a nice full page update ...after all hasini has given an update after a long time.

And after spending so much time on the arrangements.. what do I see ??? Just a couple of paragraphs in the name of an update !!!!!!!😲😲😭😭😕😕

It ended just as i took my first sip...

Despite all the ramblings I love the part, just waiting for more ( Yeah.. humans are allowed to be greedy sometimes)

Mayukha

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Princess DD

@Amoureux

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Finally... Thank you Hasini for writing...

I won't call it an update though... A sneak peak to the next part or rather the future of the story 😳

Like many i too thought why should have Geet denied knowing Maan... but think of it why would she accept it either... that too in front of her ex's sister... We still are not very sure of the kind of affiliation they both share though it does look like it was good ...

Waiting for a next UPDATE... 😊

Edited by Azmatazz - 13 years ago

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

Thanks for the part Hasini.
Maan is here yay .
Nobody could resist his charm.
Aashi seems to be totally floored too.
Wonder what will happen now.
Uh oh Geet denied knowing him after all their sweet meetings.
But will she be able to resist his charm and stay unaffected is my big doubt.
Eagerly waiting for the next part

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Boogle.Schiz

@Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: -nirvana-

What kind of tease is that with just little over 400 words...seriously! 😡

I agree with @ucompleteme, why did Geet have to lie about knowing Maan? Is she planning to play hide and seek love with Maan...

*cough*Dork*cough 😆

But I agree! What a tease, woman!
Ah...Good looks and charms...it's a boon and a curse 😆 What could Geet even tell Aashi...'Oh you know, I met him on a train and now we're a little more than friends...

Edited by .-Moksha-. - 13 years ago

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

😛 ooo u have updated. Pls continue the rest.

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

I know it was too short an update, but that is all I could manage. I was running queries at 12 last night, shifting between two operating systems and I'm surprised I even wrote something that could make sense. 😆

Well, I haven't planned anything for Starlight. I'm writing as and when the scene comes to me. And so when Geet says she doesn't know Maan any more than an acquaintance, it was totally what the character in my head told me to write. I can only hope that Geet in my head knows the implications of that answer...😉

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#740

Talk about short updates...

But this update left me with more restlessness... Maan is a charmer... I somehow had assumed that he was that way only with Geet. I know what he feels for Geet is special, but I have a feeling he will be very nice and cordial and charming with Aashi as well, and I don't think I will enjoy that very much because of the uncertainty it will bring along with it.

Oh no. H, better come and clear this ambiguity soon.