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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved their Christmas shopping !!
Cab ride was cute!
Waiting for geet's apartment coffee date !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loving the updates 😊 don't have much more to add except that i'm enjoying the story 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow she called him and invited him to her house too...great... loved the question that he asked her at last...so he understood that getting Christmas tree was just an excuse😳...cant wait for the next part...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
I have no idea why but I was blushing while reading 2 of the recent updates. H, what are u doing to me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Hasini!

Finally got some time to catch up...

Part 3: So Maan himself has suffered a heartbreak and seeing Geet struggling with the same ache, he wants to bring her out of it. It will be interesting to see how he goes about it and how she reciprocates.

Part 4: They opened up to each other and let out their past. For him, it was the first time and for her, it helped her see things in a new light. Glad they loosened up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5: It was enjoyable how they were conversing freely. He was feeling drawn towards her and she did not like the idea of the absence of his company.

Part 6: Great update! Maan was trying to suppress his urges and Geet to not get affected by his presence... let's see where they go from here.

Part 7: Even though I wasn't expecting either of them to come clean so soon, am glad it happened. I am loving this Maan.

Part 8: I am not sure if I can still blame Abhinav... he wanted a relationship without being tied down... he was forced into getting married to her... it was bound to happen... if not now then maybe later. The question is if Geet knew what he thought of their relationship...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 9: Very well penned... beautiful! Loved what you wrote about Love. Geet is analyzing where her relationship with Abhinav stood and if it was really love in its ideal sense. Her dream signified of her chance encounter with Maan. That note from him along with the cup of coffee...it was all awesome.

Part 10:
A beautiful update yet again! Loved these especially,

"Just let go...I'm holding you..."

"The knowledge that she could hold onto something before she could let go mildly surprised her; it wasn't a free fall after all."

Part 11: I am totally loving this! So she accepted that there is something brewing between them that's worth giving a try and also proposed to give it a chance after reaching SF. Wonder what's gonna happen at dinner.




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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 12: Awesome! I like it how you make these seemingly trivial habits/likings of a person an interesting aspect of them and weave it into the story to give an intimate feel.

"Yeah...I can do with Eclairs..." She whispered with a smile... am yet to figure out what she actually meant... loved it nevertheless.

Part 13: Awesome update! The thought of going back to SF no longer bothers her. So much has changed in the span of a few hours.

Part 14: Great, great update! Enjoyed their urge to speak to each other and their phone convo.

Part 15: It was a delighting update... can't wait to read the next part... Do continue soon.


P.S. - Will catch up with Noli me Tangere by tonight most probably.
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Posted: 13 years ago
The newness in a relationship makes for cute observations. He is trying to keep pace with her but also letting her know he sees her bluff and calls it. It is so easy to be swept up and to get carried away in a moment, yet there is a charm in being woo-ed slowly. Your stories are the slow woo-er charmers. They keep the smile on all day. Don't tell me not to thank Hasini, it is part of the blood stream now. Loved it. Continue soon.

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