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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

r the Christmas lights indication of the new light that has come her way...

u know...i love maan's character in this...he is so composed yet revealing...he makes u think what is going on...y all this is happening...n one is never able to guess what he is thinking...

continue soon...

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SiniHanda

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Hahahahhha... loved it! So loved the ending note! Geet, nothing is hidden from the ever perceptive pair of looming eyes!

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Antares...(Or Starry Night...)

YOU are so determined...And that is what I liked about you in NYT too. Everyday around 3.00 PM my time I can login and be assured to see a comment from you(Starry Night).

You are missed girl! I was thinking of pinging you two days ago and here you are.

As for the 'I can do eclairs too..." Wait and see if the truth about Geet's statement presents itself to you.

Thanks for the write up and glad you are back.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
r the Christmas lights indication of the new light that has come her way...

u know...i love maan's character in this...he is so composed yet revealing...he makes u think what is going on...y all this is happening...n one is never able to guess what he is thinking...

continue soon...

Ah! I didn't see it that way at all...But see that's why when you write, I get to see another perspective.

The next one is really from Maan's POV. And I hope he doesn't turn out to be the one you hate soon.

Thank you

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: ucompleteme
The newness in a relationship makes for cute observations. He is trying to keep pace with her but also letting her know he sees her bluff and calls it. It is so easy to be swept up and to get carried away in a moment, yet there is a charm in being woo-ed slowly. Your stories are the slow woo-er charmers. They keep the smile on all day. Don't tell me not to thank Hasini, it is part of the blood stream now. Loved it. Continue soon.

He called her bluff? 😆 I love all these new dimensions I get to see...I will just have to work harder to get the sentiments going in the story.

Thank you. (And you did come back as promised...So Thanks again)

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

I was just going about liking all posts on the other pages in the thread and to my dismay, most of them were my own.

I don't mean to get into the "why such less comments" mode.. (I think I'm out of that).

But I don't want to be the only one talking so much on my own thread. 😆 So I hope you will excuse (and I'm sure you will welcome it) my absence from the thread. (I'm not talking about not updating)

Hasini

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

She's almost too innocent in her unadulterated excitement and how her senses are so naively open to his stimuli, .. hes a lot more sophisticated here..

I liked that touch, where in the crowd, his palms on her shoulders steered her through.. such things would definitely melt someone's heart..

umm.. I dont why something from the previous update is stuck with me though.. the way he so seriously told her over the phone- he doesn't like threats..

He would definitely know why she said it.. I didn't understand why he would have to get serious over that.. am I reading a bit of reserve in him ? i think so..

uh.. I dont want him to call her out over everything ! I might sound whiny 😆, .. but.. I dont know.. over the christmas tree.. i mean , i cant explain..

maybe its my frame of mind right now ;)

update soon !

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: ninand
umm.. I dont why something from the previous update is stuck with me though.. the way he so seriously told her over the phone- he doesn't like threats..

He would definitely know why she said it.. I didn't understand why he would have to get serious over that.. am I reading a bit of reserve in him ? i think so..

uh.. I dont want him to call her out over everything ! I might sound whiny 😆, .. but.. I dont know.. over the christmas tree.. i mean , i cant explain..
maybe its my frame of mind right now ;)

update soon !

Yeah it does have a part to play in the story. But I don't want to high light too much. It sure is part of the draft, so not sure how it will play out when the actual scene is written.

😆 Yeah! You don't sound whiny to me...

Thanks for writing back.