Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58)

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manjiri

@m4manju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

haww u r bad anu, u stopped at such moment 😡 the part was BEAUTIFUL... loved how u have portrayed the pain not just for armaan or shilpa but how both of them feeling... awesome...
and then the car accident scene... i was like why is she shouting at him 😲 then i knw she was so lost in her thoughts to notice it... but yet she's nt ready to give up her attitude lol ... and she's drunk? omg i wanna knw what is going to happen nw... its killing me pls update soon anu and gr8 job 😳 and yeah pls make this a longer ff k? dnt end in 4-5 parts 😛

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Anu

@DulceAmor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: kashmayurfan
Awesome part! You describe everything so well:) luved it! Do cont.soon

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! 😳

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Anu

@DulceAmor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: m4manju
haww u r bad anu, u stopped at such moment 😡 the part was BEAUTIFUL... loved how u have portrayed the pain not just for armaan or shilpa but how both of them feeling... awesome...
and then the car accident scene... i was like why is she shouting at him 😲 then i knw she was so lost in her thoughts to notice it... but yet she's nt ready to give up her attitude lol ... and she's drunk? omg i wanna knw what is going to happen nw... its killing me pls update soon anu and gr8 job 😳 and yeah pls make this a longer ff k? dnt end in 4-5 parts 😛

Hehe, of course yaar, I needed to leave you all in suspense na. 😉😆 But seriously, I'm really pleased that you liked this part. She had no idea what was happening at first lolz...she thought he was some random guy trying to take advantage of her, and he in turn thought she was some crazy girl. 😆 Really she's taking out all her inner frustration on him just because he's there and she needed someone to vent on. I'm gonna explain more in the next part, so watch this space. 😉 I will try to update asap...I shouldn't be as busy this week. And I think it will be about 6 parts long or s'thing. It depends really...I have the rough outline in my head, but sometimes it grows as I write, so it could end up longer. 😆

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nightstar

@nightstar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

U left in absolute awe at the depth of descritions of the emotions...it literally swept thru me...i could feel and every bit of the emotions...loved it...cont soon dont be late plzzz

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

awesome update!!!!

loved ARSH first meeting.

beautifully writen.

looking forward to read next part!!

please continue soon.

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tulsi agarwal

@spicyheart

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

how do u do this??

u mak me speechless

in love with ur story

its fably described n written

continue soon

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Sumaya

@Sam_KaShian

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

awesomeee part!!!!
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
thnx a lot 4 d pm :)
cont real sooN!
can't wait 4 d nxt part :D

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Urvi

@-screwed.UP-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

beautifull update...please add me to ur pm list

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Anu

@DulceAmor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd
U left in absolute awe at the depth of descritions of the emotions...it literally swept thru me...i could feel and every bit of the emotions...loved it...cont soon dont be late plzzz

Oh wowww, I'm a bit speechless actually. I'm totally thrilled you could feel all their emotions. I was really hoping that everything they're feeling would come through clearly, so reading your comment makes me feel like I managed to do that. 😳 I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I will try to update a lot quicker this time round! 😆

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Anu

@DulceAmor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: fri42911
awesome update!!!!
loved ARSH first meeting.

beautifully writen.

looking forward to read next part!!

please continue soon.

Thank you!!! I'm delighted you liked their first meet. 😳 Thanks for wanting to read on. I will try to update within a few days.