ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] - Page 61

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Posted: 10 years ago
Well, it was one of the best ss so far, loved it. They story that made it beautiful lies in its simplicity. Loved it completely. Khushi, payal, their family, Arnav with no invovlment of shyam as an anti social element, in fact not even mentioning shyam as anti-social element, no akash to charm paya, keeping the story focused on the lead characters as just them, I loved it. The scene where arnav fantasize his parents and have a heart to heart talk was so awesome, I loved the meaning of love being said there. I loved lavanya, her letting go of Arnav knowing fully well that she cannot have him, that he is in love with someone else, I loved it. I loved arnav, his straightforward behaviour. Everything was beautiful , and their 30 years hence love was as awesome as when they were young. Also I loved the part where khushi said no for marriage.

Loved every tad bits of the dialogues. U did a marvelous job here. Just continue writting, u r a very good writer. Hope for ur more stories, if u r still in i-f.
Take care.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Will begin soon... for now book-marked
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Posted: 10 years ago
Re-read this story...and loved it all over again...
very beautifully written 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful story..

Crisp and to the point.

Elegant yet romantic..
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Posted: 10 years ago
My ultimate Res.

Are you sure there are not any surprises left for me?

Thyme, it is then!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ArohaAngel-

Your writing soothes me.



Awww Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
The number of times I have read this story in bits and pieces and otherwise...

If there was ever testimony required for purity in simplicity - this is it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

The number of times I have read this story in bits and pieces and otherwise...


If there was ever testimony required for purity in simplicity - this is it.



😊 Thanks Meera :) There is indeed something in simplicity, no?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful loved everything about it
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Posted: 10 years ago
what a superb SS..wish I had started reading Arhi stories from 2011 :-( I started around mid 2012 and missed so many good ones

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