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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...di dat was bEAUtifUl !! 👏
luvd it !!
jealousy is d best way 2 brng fightng hearts 2gthr !! 😆
d part rockd !!!!
Ananya didnt drink without Veer dere !! 😳
Veer was dancng wid Rani ...😡...so vodka !!!
i luv when she'd drunk !! 😉
coz tab Veer HAS 2 take care of her !! 😆
luvd dis line !!
Veer "she's my girlfriend...now just leave"
means ...he is obiously in luv wid her !!
"my wild cat" awww...cho sweet !! 😳
its Veer Anu NOT prianshu...
Veer raat ko itne carng n sweet n subah itne rude !! 👎🏼
dis line was quite hillarious !!

Ananya mouth was wide opened "what???? what did you say??? you will do anything with any other girl???"

Veer "yes...do you have a problem???"

Ananya "yes I do...that's not fair...you have never done that anything with me...and you will do anything with other girls..." 🤣

she's goin 2 die !! 😲
BUT Veer stoppd her !!! n dey embracd !!
yay !! ab sab theek ho jayega !!
luvd it di...❤️...n u...🤗
do ud soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...👏
party...see destiny still wants them to be together...😍
who the hell is this priyanshu n rani...??????...😡
''...Ananya glanced at Lavanya and her boyfriend... "wow...nice...at least some people are together...''...poor anu feeling bad for her...😔

both only wants to see each other...on dance floor both were concentrating on each other other than their partners...both were damn jealous...but their so called egos...dumboos...n idiots...😆
n here she goes...again vodka...soft drink se again vodka...

Priyanshu "she's my friend...i will drop her..."

Veer "she's my girlfriend...now just leave"


veer ne aisa kaha...😲...did he really said that...😛...priyanshu did u heard that get get get LOSTTT......arey koi rani ko bhi ye batao...😉
n finally anu's madness made them together...now i really love her madness...👍🏼
both still love each other...haye kya kehne...😍
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww GREAT one:-) Its SUPERB:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely ff di😃

loved it by god👏

Ananya went towards the bar...

she looked around... "can I have one..."

she stopped...and thought something... "one soft drink please"

the waiter served her...(haye she drink soft drink😲...)

gud girl...she left alcohol...😃

Rani "no no...i am Lavanya's sister..."(who asked u...hum kya kare agar tum lavanya ki sister ho to😡...why u tried to glued with veer😡)

Ananya saw him curling his arms around Rani's waist...and talking to her...she was mad...

she immediately left the dance floor and walked towards the bar...

"one vodka" she said...(oh ho jealousy...wo to honi hi thi😆)

she was about to fall when Priyanshu came running towards her...but before he could reach Veer held her tightly in his arms...

he looked at her and took her out of the party...

Priyanshu "she's my friend...i will drop her..."

Veer "she's my girlfriend...now just leave"

Priyanshu was quiet and left...(wow kya masttt dialogue mara veer ne ...priyanshu ka popat ho gya 🤣 bada hero ban rha tha...heheheheh)



Veer helped her sit in the car...and drove towards his hotel... he knew she was his competitor now...he remembered the time when they used to go to parties...

he lifted her in his arms and took her inside the hotel...

Veer "arrange a room for her...she's my guest..."

Manager "sir guest room is open..."

Veer took her towards the guest room and put her on the bed...

he looked at her innocent face "my wild cat" he said and walked out of the room...(loved this scene very much😍...lovely scene)


Ananya "i won't...i mean how can you dance with any girl who asks you???"

Veer "look...its my life and I can dance, talk or do whatever I want with any girl"

Ananya mouth was wide opened "what???? what did you say??? you will do anything with any other girl???"

Veer "yes...do you have a problem???"

Ananya "yes I do...that's not fair...you have never done that anything with me...and you will do anything with other girls..."(wow wht a scene...ananya was so possessive🤣...loved it)


Veer "Ananya...stop" he came rushing towards her

Ananya didn't stop and was about to jump when Veer hold her hand...

Ananya turned back "leave my hand Veer" with tears in her eyes...

Veer "no I won't..." he pulled her towards himself...

both looked at each other and tightly embraced... he wiped her tears...

Ananya "i am sorry Veer..." she kissed him...(this is my fav scene 👏 chalo accha h dono ka patchup to hua😳)


update soon

eagerly waiting for next

thanks for pm

luv u😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow they finally make up it was so nice 👍🏼 .nice update dear.so old veer ananya r back
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Posted: 13 years ago

ayyeee...

that was really awsum..

simply superb part..

gosh i just loved it when he...she is my girlfriend...

n finally they r together again...

yipee..

but i really hope this tym they fight for their love...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you Dhanvi di for Updating MJDT
loved it thoroughly
yipeee un dono sabkuch thik ho gaya
update sooon
waiting
lov u
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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 25



Veer pulled back "stop it" and walked away...



Ananya "Veer...please wait...i am sorry..." she followed him "please Veer...i won't slap you again...i...i was stupid..."



Veer didn't stop "Ananya...our paths are different...still we can't meet...our parents won't let us meet anyway..."



Ananya thought something... "leave that to me"

Veer stopped... "what will you do??"



Ananya "first let me kiss you"



Veer "Ananya...what is this??"



Ananya "this is my love" she embraced him tightly in her arms...



__*****



Mitali "but Ananya...how did this happen??"



Ananya "Mom...you know I didn't realize before...but now its true..."



Mitali "i am shocked Ananya...i didn't expect this from you...what have you done???"

Ananya "i am sorry Mom...i ...i know I have committed a crime...but now I can't help it...i have told you everything..."



Mitali "how will I tell this to your Dad...how could you do that Ananya...you have ashamed me..."



Ananya "mom please do something...otherwise my life will be spoiled..."



Mitali "don't worry...i will do something..."



Ananya was smiling... "yes...it worked..."



she called Veer "give me your Mother's no"



Veer "why?"



Ananya "you ask lots of questions...now give me...fast"



Veer "fine..."



Ananya took the no...



she spoke to Shilpa "this is true aunty" she started crying...



Shilpa "please don't cry..."



Ananya "what should I do Aunty...what is my fault...tell me...am I that bad that I have to suffer and..."



Shilpa "no...i will talk to Veer first..."



she kept the phone...



After some time...



Ananya came to see Veer '. she knocked his door...



Veer opened the door "you here"



Ananya "wake up and listen...if your mother asks you anything just say yes..."



Veer "yes...for what??"



Ananya "you ask lots of questions...now just say yes...she will call you any moment..."



Veer "fine...you and your plans" he ordered some coffee when his Mother called him...



Veer "hi Mom"

Shilpa "how could you be so careless Veer???...i didn't expect this from you"



Veer "but mom..."



Shilpa "let me finish Veer...how dare you cross your limits with a innocent girl??"



Veer "mom...what did I..."



Shilpa "Veer...i didn't expect this from you..."



Veer "but mom...what are you saying??"



Shilpa "i am saying what is truth...you have made Ananya pregnant"



Veer "what?????" his coffee spilled out from his mouth...



Shilpa "now stop acting...tell me the truth..."



Veer looked at Ananya who whispered "say yes"



Veer was scared but he had to say "yes...mom"



Shilpa "aren't you ashamed of yourself while telling your Mother this news...Oh God what should I do now..."



Ananya again whispered in his ear...



Veer nodded his head but she insisted... "Mom...i...i think you must talk to Ananya's parents..."



Shilpa "what else will you think I can do...you have dig my grave Veer...your Father will kill me..." annoyingly she canceled the phone...





Veer screamed at Ananya "are you out of your senses...i made you pregnant!!!"



Ananya smiled and kissed him on his lips "you look so cute when you are angry"



Veer "stop it...now tell me why did you lie to everyone??"



Ananya "because this was the only way by which we can get together..."



Veer "what if they found out that you are not pregnant??"



Ananya "don't worry they won't...and if you are so worried that I might get caught then we can..."



Veer "its not funny Ananya..."



Ananya "who says its funny..."



Veer "how...how on earth do you get these ideas from...you are ridiculous Ananya"



Ananya "everything is fair In love...now forget it..."



-----****



Mitali thought over and called Shilpa...



Shilpa "hi Mitali...i was about to call you..."



Mitali "Shilpa...first of all I am sorry if my family has hurt you..."



Shilpa "please don't be sorry..."



Mitali "i...i want to tell you about Ananya and Veer."



Shilpa "i already know...and I am sorry for what all happened...our children didn't realize what they were doing..."



Mitali "now we must rectify their mistake...i will talk to my husband and convince him"



Shilpa "i will also talk to Veer's Father and tell him everything..."



Mitali "i will be happy to let Ananya marry Veer..."



Shilpa "yes...now I don't understand why our families were fighting...when our children were in love"



Mitali "i will call you tomorrow"



Shilpa "yes...bye"



-----***



Veer "stop it Ananya...this is not good"



Ananya "this is not good...that is not good...you are too much Veer...you are so boring"



Veer "i am worried...i don't know what will happen when my dad gets to know about this...and did you turn off the heater...??"



Ananya "yes...this room looks cold now..."



Veer "are you insane...its so cold outside and you have turned off the heater..."



Ananya sat on the couch next to him... "you just keep on complaining" and pulled him closer



Veer "leave it..."



Veer looked in her eyes "this is not good...i mean..."



Ananya "this is good..." she closed her eyes...



____******



Shilpa "you won't understand...she is pregnant with Veer's child...and try and think about the girl...what wrong has she done??? its Veer who is responsible for that...Ananya told me on the phone that Veer forced her to get into this relation"



Khuswant "let me talk to Veer first...i will break his bones...he knew very well that we will never support this relation and still he did this"



Shilpa "what's the use...you can't change anything"



Khushwant "what do you want me to do??"



Shilpa "i have already spoken to Mitali...Ananya's Mother..."



____***



Ananya looked at him...she was about to leave...



Veer didn't know what came over him and he pulled her into his lap and circled his arms around her waist. Her mind grew cloudy as she felt his breath on her neck.



He nuzzled his head into her shoulder. His head was swimming, drowning in her.

He breathed in her scent and felt his desire building. she pushed herself deeper into his embrace.



His breath on her neck, his arms on her waist. She hugged his arms that held her so tight.



He couldn't control himself any longer. He breathed her name and starting lightly kissing her neck. Shockwaves ran up and down her spine at the feel of his lips on her bare neck.



He moved up and started nibbling on the sensual points of her ears. She let out a soft moan and pushed herself deeper into his lap. Veer was possessed with his desire for her.



He un-circled his hands from around her waist, and in one swift motion forced open her closed legs, which rested on top of his own. She let out a gasp and he moved his hands up her inner thighs, continually kissing and suckling her neck.



His hand moved up under her shirt to her taut stomach and journeyed further up, teasingly brushing his fingers against her hard nipples.



Ananya "Veer" she moaned, "I want you. I've wanted you for so long."



Ananya's desire was overwhelming. She quickly turned herself in his lap to face him. She straddled him, wrapping her legs tightly around his thighs.



They stared deeply into each other's eyes for a second, his hands caressing her back. He lunged in to kiss her and she coyly moved her head away. She wanted to tease him.



She started nibbling on his neck as he had done to her. He let out a soft moan at the touch of her lips on his neck, and grabbed her bottom and pulled her tighter against him.



She continued bathing his neck with her tongue and moved up to his chin. He couldn't stand it any longer as the tip of her tongue moved in a line from his jaw to the corner of his lips.



He kissed her long and deep and she kissed him back just as passionately, her fingers entwined in his dark black hair. She rocked herself against him. He wanted her now, he had to have her now.


He circled his arms around her bottom and stood up in one swift motion, never removing his lips from hers.


He carried her over to the bed and sat down, her legs still circled around him, her lips still devouring his. They were drowning in each other, the heat radiating off their bodies was intense.


Veer turned and lay her down on the bed, moving himself to hover over her. He wanted to kiss every inch of her body. He ached to explore every bit of her. Their kisses were fire, soft lips and cool tongues...



He quickly rid her of her dress...leaving only her sheer panties behind. He pulled himself back just to gaze at her beauty, to devour her with his eyes. The fire he felt was mirrored in her eyes and she gazed back at him, beckoning him to her again...



He nibbled on her lips as her hands caressed down his muscular back to his firm buttocks. Starting at her neck he moved slowly down her body tasting every part of her...



'.Slowly he traced a path with his tongue from her taut stomach down.



He placed soft kisses on her most sensitive area...She had never felt a sensation so overwhelming, never believed such a feeling was possible.



Her fingers gripped strands of his hair and her whole body was quivering at his touch. Her body's responses were no longer her own. Ananya completely controlled

her body's reactions.



His touch shocked her senses, his kiss fueled her desire, his gaze touched her soul. She was lost to him and feared nothing...



He moved back up to kiss her and she tasted herself on his lips. She was ready for him... she wanted to feel him... she needed to have him.



He lay himself on top of her...ravishing his lips with hers, What was he waiting for, she thought. She was in agony and needed to feel him.



"Tell me," Veer whispered in her ear as he pushed himself harder against her.



She moaned in his ear.



Veer "Tell me what you want"



Ananya "I want you," she breathed.



Veer "Tell me."



Ananya"I want you inside me."



He kissed her hard while pushing himself slowly in until they both were one.



Ananya "Oh God."



None of his dreams had prepared him for the exquisite feeling he felt. He stayed motionless and stared into her eyes. Before he continued, he wanted her to know. To know how he cared for her, how he trusted her, how he loved her.



Ananya "Veer"


She gazed back into his eyes and caressed his cheek with her hand.



Veer "i know, Ananya."



He kissed her deeply as his hips began moving slowly.



All thought was lost, all she could do was feel him inside her. Her legs wrapped tightly around him as their bodies moved in sync. They were one, sharing lips and breath and body.



He licked her lips and whispered her name and she felt herself reaching the threshold.


He knew she was close and could not hold himself back any longer.


Veer brushed his lips softly against hers.


Words were not needed, as none were suitable to express the contentment they both felt. He kissed her forehead and lay down beside her holding her tight against his chest.



They lay in each others arms, their minds both sharing a single thought...


______***********





Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing………….superb………………👏

Yes veer leave all the things on anu…………..couz I think you will never going to set back things at place……………things like this only anu can handle……………..😉

N anu…………..by god this girl is too much………….pregnanat………..goshhh……….poor veer………..😆

I really took pity on him………….his girlfr8………….is really out of the world…………….🤣

God knows what veer's father is going to do with him………………

But finally mitali n shilpa are regrating on what they did with each other…………….n realizes that they are not doing it right by separating their children……………..😛

N veer n anu………….finally anu succeded to seduce veer………………😳

Loved the scenes b/w them………….that was so romantic……………☺️

Continue soon………….

Luv u…………😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing... too hot to handle😳😳😳😳

Pz update soon😊

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