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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18mypride


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Posted: 13 years ago
50 pages ka demand that ...its already 60 pages... muski still typing... 😆😆😆😆
Muski baby send me the email... am waiting for it... i hv thoda free time today so will start work on it right away
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

TODAYS PREVIOUS UPDATE
PART 112
How can bro be with Geet..
he doesn't even know anything abt her. He gulped another drink glaring down at her. His eyes felt the warmth.. a strange belonging, fondness.. how she changes his world world with a blink of an eye .. he looked down.. & looked back again.. something he just can't deny. She just brings the worst & the best out in his emotions. He then looked at Dev.. he looked so happy, his frds teasing him, he blushing, while Geet stood their like perfect .. blaah.. he didn't even want to complete that.

He tried to look away especially after seeing Dev happy. He avoided to drink more.. he was already done with 2... more may be a bad idea .. waisen bhi he never drinks infront of family.. dam this girl just ruined me.. he cursed leaving the bar.
Slowly music was turned on. One by one couples started to hit the floor. Dev asked Geet for a dance. Her eyes restlessly searched for someone. He immediately looked away... she looked at him.. & his ignorance. she sighed smiling at Dev & walked with him to the floor, her every step was reluctant.
Do you really think my brother hates you Geet
she looked at him in shock, then sighed.. well thats wat he told me & she smiled bravely.. thats wat I told him
Dev ' ouch that hurts..
she smiled looking down.. casually dancing on a medium paced number
Wo aisen hi hain.. thoda garam mizaz ka
A low scoff crossed geets lips, she looked around. Her almond eyes scanned the ocean of people who were scattered all over the places. I thought I was the only one who thought that...
Dev laughed loud.. well u seem to know a lot abt ur boss already.
She chuckled.. her boss sending shivers down her... as they took a small swirl around..& then clapped thanking each other as the song changed.
Maan couldn't bare the sight. He just left from there.
Geet & Dev stepped out of the dance floor to get something to eat & attend to guests. Dev looked at phone & excused himself to take the call.
Geet knew seeing his smile.. it was Nt & he was not going to come back any sooner. She looked around.. yash was busy with his business associates & Daadi with some ladies. She sighed & went to the garden.. the whole place was lit with slight moonshine. She chuckled holding herself closer with the chillness.. but it was pleasant.. & the music was loud enough to be heard her.. but very subtle..
As the tune started.. she could feel was warm hand slide around her from back. She instantly rested her head back ward handing it one his. He dipped his head inhaling her scent.
Kurbaan hua.. Teri tishnagi mein yun

She closed her eyes.. the moment was soothing her hurt aching heart. His grip around her waist she fumbled...trying to form a sentence...his sent & feel of him

u r drunk in a family party she murmured conscious how her voice came out in a moan & the pounding of blood through her veins.
na.. just had 2
& turned her in a jerk to face him.
Kurbaan hua
Teri tishnagi mein yun
Kurbaan hua
Teri aashiqui mein yun
The passionate music throbbed around them.. yet very mildly..his emphasis on eye contact under that crescent moon light.. the impression of isolation, along with the his complete control over her in a sudden move.. she just followed his lead in relinquishing.
Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua
Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua
tilting her head she looked at him .. his firm grip around her & turning.. made her inside leap. Glorying in the sensation of this contact.. their eyes didn't leave each other just kurban huwa.
Kurbaan huaaa'
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe'wafa pe'.jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa'
before she could register he had her molded her to his length. Releasing her hand .. he turned her around.. lifting her up.. in his arms.. ..


Ru-ba-ru hai tu magar
Tanha hai yeh jahaan
Jal uthe meri kufr se
Saanson ka yeh samaan
Ooo'
he turned her around & with his eyes lost in her
Kya hua
Pal mein jaane kho gaya kyon
Tu mila aur judaa imaan hua yun
Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua
Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua


Kurbaan huaaa'
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe'wafa pe'.jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa'

Marne ka sabab
Maangta raha dar-ba-dar
Mitne ko toh dil
Pal mein raazi hua
Poori hui har aarzoo
Har daastaan meri
Ke tum shuru hue jahan
Main khatam hua

as they swayed together with the music.. now their feet barely moved. Her structure felt liquid..molten adherant to his.
As he dipped his head nuzzling the side of her neck at the sensitive hollow behind her ear sending little shivers of excitements quivering through her.
Kurbaan huaaa'
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe'wafa pe'.jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa'

She closed her eyes.. a moment.. to stop before she slips into a point of no return. It was so intense a pull she felt into that it became impossible to decide wat did she want anymore. She felt the paradoxical scared & excited by the cognition of it. She gathered all she had in her.. & slowly slipped away. Turning ..refusing herself with a swift movement, Maan's hand wrapped around her arm.

Mujhe bas itna kahna hain... he panted close against her
I have been fighting to let you go.
Then he sighed at his own plight
kafi din kamyab bhi huwa.. aur phir kayen raten..jinka koi aant nahi
Maan continued to say.
She turned her head their gazes met & locked for that instant her heart stopped fighting the power to ignore & started beating harder than ever breaking her walls.
Whether she was breathing or not her eyes searched in his eyes. She stayed silent as his grip on her arm was locked onto it..but it was gentle. Her whole body tingled with an awareness of him.
Precap
claim!!
-PREV PART 111 NEXT PART 113-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey diii nw plz don't change th kurbaan hua meaning for us . already starone ka aakhri salam ki performances dekh kar we r quite depressed. so aap toh dono ko ek saath dance karva denna.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by mons_mb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg maan and geet babhi...muski please yaar...i pity our Maan...
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Posted: 13 years ago

teri raho mai khade hai dil tham ke ...hai hum a deewane tere update ke...

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teri raho mai khade hai dil tham ke ...hai hum a deewane tere update ke...

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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum di
superb
so good di
what claim nad on whom
oh!
pls dont make geet again badnami
di
plsss
we cant see that
pls make this confusion off soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
phewww...thud 🤢
am speechless!
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Posted: 13 years ago
haiii

claim😲...

who is claiming who?
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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