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TODAYS PREVIOUS UPDATE
PART 111

She got up pushing the chair backward.. main teehk hoon Dev. I will just use the wash room. She rushed away from the sight of her heart bleeding with the color of his bandage turning red.
Geet wondered why he always does something like this & why she cares abt him. She cribbed & went to wash her dress. Daadi came to her...
Daadi ' beta yeh tho pura gila hogaya
she pouted cutely
Daadi ' umm.. I won't have anything for u. then Daadi laughed chaho tho Maan ki yah Dev ki jeans phen sakkti ho
Geet laughed with Daadi..remebering.. she usually wears Maans pyjamas at night.
She took a deep breath composing herself .. its ok.. Daadi yeh thodi der main sook jayega
Daadi - nahi nahi ek kaam karo come with me
Daadi took her to the store room & looked for some very very very old cloths..but packed in very carefully like some treasure.


wear this ..
this is actually really old fashioned.. but Daadi sighed yashoda ke hain
Geet was really reluctant ' main kaisen Daadi
they took the whole set of cloths & went to Daadi's room.
Daadi gave her saree .. Geet immediately looked at her in shock
Daadi teased .. teehk hain teehk hain..
wear this.. pulled out a salwar suit. Cudidar types.. light shade. She cleared her throat. She doesn't even remember last when she wore them. She is so used to wear her western outfits.. but challo this is better than saree she thought.
Daadi opened her whole jewelery box.. suggesting her wear all lot of sets. She only picked a pair of simple diamond earnings.
After the lunch Maan sat in his room wondering wat is going on. Geet & Dev.. nahi nahi.. aisen nahi hosakta. To add to his misery he had that song playing on the channel he tuned the TV on to.. merin brother ki dhulhan.
Geet bha...bhi.. he almost felt like a thorn stuck in his throat. he looked at puchki.. yeh kya kar rahi misti.

Evening Party

At the party Maan skimmed around.. looking handsome wearing a black button shirt & black dress pants.
yeh kaisen birthday party hain he cribbed sipping his juice. Naam ke liyen mera bday party hain..
hain tho saren dad ke frds .. business clients yah tho bro ke frds. Main pata nahi yanha kya kar raha hoon.
Yash came & patted his back.. so son how do u like the surprise party
he smiled halfheartedly thanks dad.
Yash made another of his business acquisition announcement, some new project.. tributing to Maans 21st Bday.
Maan was least interested.
Just then he got a call from raj.. he excused himself to the side away from the crowd near the bar counter.
raj ' happy birthday buddy
Maan ' where the hell r u?
Raj ' arren yaar main kaisen aata, u know how it is here na.
Maan ' common yaar its ur BF birthday
raj ' Daadi ne phone bhi kiya tha
man rolled his eyes
raj ' so party kaisen hain
he made all kind of faces bo.. & his mouth fell open ' seeing her walking down the steps.. setting her curly hair behind.. trying to make sure the duppata staye on her shoulder.
raj laughed.. looks like party is firing up
Maan just cut the call bye. His eyes just got lost admirin
g her.


He couldn't be looking at anything else ..his deep dark eyes were glued on her. He looked at her in awe, anybody who caught a glance of him now would have envied her.
She could brighten anyone's day with that beautiful bubbly smile ..he overheard yash saying that to Daadi. Maan's lips widen in smile as he buried his hands inside his pockets. She looked so nervous.. with those cloths... he couldn't help but let a small giggle escape his lips.
Her worried skimming eyes looked at ease the moment she saw him smiling at her. Does he hate me?


Her heart beat raised .. she looked down pushing her hair behind. .. a moment both felt their soul reaching to the other...
She shook out of her thoughts.. when Dev had a wide warm smile as he lend his arm to her & walked her towards the crowd. Instantly there were eyes in the party admiring her. It was so so obvious for two Khuranas to be over protective. ..father & son.
Dev went on introducing Geet proudly. While one of the odd looking client who already seemed drunk came to get introduced to Geet.
Hi .. I am Chetan Ahuja
Dev.. smiled weekly & shook the hand instead. .. hello Mr Ahuja.. from Infosys right.
He smiled sheepishly still lustfully glaring at Geet. Maan instantly gulped the a drink down.. oops didn't realize it was glass of whiskey from the bar & walked towards them to take Geet away from there well he was quiet late before that Yash was there.
Yash ' hello mr ahuja
ahuja ' hello mr khurana still glaring at Geet.. every now & then
yash softly patted on back of Dev.. why don't u guys meet up with frds.
Maan smirked.. knowing his dad & settled back in the bar watching Dev & Geet meeting up with devs frds actually burning within. Devs childhood frds were there.. probably meeting up after ages types.. instantly jelling with Geet, how difficult is that for her.. puren college ko apna frd bana liya the phelen hi din.. he shook his head looking at the drink & stirring the cubes.
Daadi saw her ladla potah sulking in the corner.
Daadi ' kya huwa beta. U don't like the party
Maan cribbed unknowingly it looks more like bros engagement party than my bday party
Daadi ma almost fell off laughing at her pota's comment
he looked at her angrily.. wat was so funny abt that..
Daadi grined don't worry wo bhi jaldi hp jayega..
oh .. no.. his heat just sunk.
How can bro be with Geet..
he doesn't even know anything abt her. He gulped another drink glaring down at her. His eyes felt the warmth.. a strange belonging, fondness.. how she changes his world world with a blink of an eye .. he looked down.. & looked back again.. something he just can't deny. She just brings the worst & the best out in his emotions. He then looked at Dev.. he looked so happy, his frds teasing him, he blushing, while Geet stood their like perfect .. blaah.. he didn't even want to complete that.
Precap
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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hehehe Daadi b bari mazaqia hain... Suggestind Maan and Dev's pants... least did she know... Geet had already worn and worn it everyday Maan's pyjamas...
wow Daadi offered Maan's mom's dresses to Geet...yani Geet's would be saasuu maa...

i hope Maan iss baat per bhi naraz na hojaye

Maan imagined Geet as Bhabhi... no bad imagination...
Maan was getting bore in party...
aur Geet ko dekhtey hi party is full on...
Maan again Jealous with Dev and Geet...
before Maan Yash came to protect Geet from all evil eyes...
Maan bilkul Dad pe gaya ha...
well i just all similarites between Dad and Son...
or as Daadi said Yas did love Marriage...
so his son will do the same...
infact both sons...
Jealous Maan couldnt even think that Geet looks perfect with his own bro...
oops... Maan drunk in family party...
to

abb Maan Geet per drunk ho k Kurbaan hongey...

Continue Soon...

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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update di
daadi & Geet scene vr
naughty daadi suggesting her 2 wear maan aur devs pants
per daadi ab kiya jaani apki peet pechi
apki ladla atangwadi pota ni already ussi apni pejamas behana choka
daadi is shoo 2 give her bahu's srry i mean
Maan mom's dresses 2 Geet daadi fiker not voh bhi jaldi apni gher ki hi bahu banegi
yeh kiya ab maan pher si galat soch raha hai
geet bhabhi awo tere
maan getting feeling jealous
da update di


Edited by _HaNo_ - 13 years ago

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