Memories of Unexpected Love #5 Maanya Note - Pg 45 - Page 11

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i just came...it'll take time...will u wait??
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to phir karo jaldi update aur vaise bhi raat ke 2 baj rahe hai acha hai kal sunday hai no office varna to ab tak main so gayi hoti
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UPDATING IN FEW MINUTES😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
haaayeee...😳..
u UPDATING!!!!!🄳
mein dukhi ho kar laptop band katke jaa hi rahi thi...šŸ˜”šŸ„±
got 3 exams in a row from monday!!!!😭
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Originally posted by: ruchs

haaayeee...😳..

u UPDATING!!!!!🄳
mein dukhi ho kar laptop band katke jaa hi rahi thi...šŸ˜”šŸ„±
got 3 exams in a row from monday!!!!😭


awww my baby...don't worrry...do ur best...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann


awww my baby...don't worrry...do ur best...😊

mein to best hi karti hoon..CryCry😔😔..
unfortunately teachers darr jati hai ki agar ye best hai to worrst kya hoga...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

mein to best hi karti hoon....

unfortunately teachers darr jati hai ki agar ye best hai to worrst kya hoga...šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰


same is the case with mešŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Recap :-

maan slides away from her, cursing geet "pehle iss kabab mein haddi...no no hadda le ayi aur ab aise chipak ke baith rahi hai..."
geet slides near him
maan controlled his anger, again slides bit away.."maan chillana mat...aaj iska b'day hai...control control"
geet again slides near him n tucked her arm with his...

Part 40 :-

U.S.A...8:45 PM

maan gave up n sat there angrily but din't utter a single word which would hurt her...
karan all the while look out of window...
geet was getting bored with their silent modes...
she coughed to catch their attention: ahem ahem
maan ignored her, knowing she is doing it deliberately... even karan knew that but he did look at her, lifting his brows questioning "what??"
geet broke the awkward silence by starting a convo: karan...! dont u think, there is something u forgot...?!
he knotted his forehead, thinking "yaar ab ise kya hua?? mai kya bhool gaya??"
geet looked at him mischievously: soch soch...!
maan looked at her with the corner of his eyes, thinking "now what is she upto??"... but he was more busy in thinking "why the hell, she has to take karan along with us?? not that i mind, umm no no i mind... i do mind it, coz today i wanted to be with her alone but this idiot girl had to take him along,.. kisi aur din bhi toh isko saath mein le sakti thi but aaj hi kyun?"
karan scratched his head: umm aisa kya bhool gaya mai...??
geet rolled her eyes
meanwhile maan thought to change his plan... he had planned to have candle night dinner with her but she ruined it, he looked up, oh god can u believe she is tagging along her friend on a date with me...i'm not going to take this karan on a candle night dinner, i would have not minded if it was a normal dinner...ab toh plan change hi karna padega...geet u ruined my plan, now just wait n watch i'll make it worse..." he smirked inside evilly and asked driver to take them to xyz street...
where on the other side karan got busy thinking deeply...
and geet pouted her lips cutely, mummering "beta karan tujhe toh mai chodungi nahi... tu mera b'day kaise bhool gaya"

karan's thought broke when their car came to a halt... they reached somewhere, karan was not much familiar with the place, he looked out curiously...
maan got off the car... geet followed him, giving some hint to karan: what's the date today?
karan fluttered his eyes, catching her words, mummering "today is 6th April..so??"
he got off the car, then reality hit him hard, his mind screamed: ohh fish..!! it's her birthday today and i forgot...gosh! how can i?? he looked up to sky complaining, then wanted to pull his hair off... he looked at geet and maan walking ahead... geet not paying attention, she din't even look back at him after when gave a hint... karan rushed after her, shouting: geet
maan geet both turned and looked back
karan came rushing, fell on his knees, breathing heavily...
maan looked at him in shock, every stupid thought ran in his mind "what is he upto?? is he gonna propose geet?? even after knowing, that she is married and i'm her husband.." he holds her waist slightly, and gave his one most desired deadly glare to karan thinking"karan if u by any chance propose my geet, i won't leave u...i will kill u right away"
geet first looked at karan, then on maan's hold on her waist, then back at karan...
karan holds his ear: so..so..so..sooo sooorrryyy...i'm really sorry billi...i don't know how i forg....he din't get words to complete his sentence, then finally disappointedly said... such a special occasion i forgt... sorry billi...
maan looked at karan confusingly "sorry??? means her best friend forgot to wish her" he turned his gaze towards geet, with a lopsided smile on his face "wow...that means, i was the first one to wish her...ohh karan i love it so much.."
geet smiled lovingly seeing karan sitting on his knees, in the middle of the road, well its not easy to do it, it was an odd situation, ppl were glancing them, still karan had no effect of them on him, he was more concerned about geet, damn it he forgot his bestie's b'day, n here he found her on her special day, fate this is called fate...he never missed out any of geet's b'day till last yr and even today he is with her but he din't remember it... he was so guilty, he had spent almost 4-5hrs with her today but din't wish her, hell with wish, there he had not a slightest of idea...maybe he was way too happy to found her at last...or may be this is his mind now making excuses... but he shrugged of his thoughts n looked at geet with guilt: sorry billi
she knew, he din't do it intentionally...she smiled but her thoughts attacked her mind "when maan din't wish u, u were all boiling with anger, n when karan din't then how r u ok with it??? why u not feeling bad??how u know that he din't do it intentionally???maan bhi toh bas bhool sakta tha..??then why were u having so much of problem with maan not wishing u??how n why it mattered to u so much???"
maan narrowed his brow "billi?? why is he calling geet billi?? " maan checked geet top to toe "kahin se bhi billi nhi lagti hai...sherni hai, har waqt ladne ke liye tayyar rehti hai" n pouted cutely...

karan disappointedly looked down: sorry
geet smiled: ab aise hi nautanki karta rahega ya wish bhi karega...
he looked up n saw geet smiling...he quickly gets up, hugged her tightly in a bear friendly hug:HAPPY BIRTHDAY BILLI... I LOVE YOU sooo much
aww maan's face was worth watching...a big 'O' on his face... it was obvious, any one can make out that they were good friends n nothing else...but still maan had a titch of jealousy seeing geet in someone else arms... n he saying love u to her, which is anyhow his HAQ, only his...
though he himself can notice now that they are actually so good friends, there smooth relation, no misunderstanding, nothing... he sighed
how he wished geet n his relation should be like this, but had no idea that fate has something else for them... karan n geet are friends, best friends, just friends and not more than that...but he is not a friend, he is someone special...

geet: thankyou... then suddenly pulled out of hug, and fakely made an angry face... tu mujhse baat mat kar...tujhe mera b'day yaad nahi tha...meraaa b'day .... emphasizing on MERA
karan rolled his eyes: chal nautanki mat kar...thik hai na...

maan took them to disc, though it was just around 9 in the evening n there was not much of a crowd and even that was so odd timing to enter disc but geet ruined their plan and maan was determined to not to go on date with karanšŸ˜†
so he thought this would be a better option... he wanted geet to realise that what she have done by taking her here on her b'day...he thought sh'll get angry now...
but geet toh geet hai...the moment they entered, her face had big grin on it... maan was super confuse with her expression... he was expecting her to shout on him... expecting her to complain that he din't make any effort to make her b'day spcl rather took her here...
for her it was like a relishing moment... her memories of her collage days came in front of her eyes... how her gang used to do clubbing every week or sometimes twice or thrice a week...
even karan felt the same way as geet...they both enjoyed the atmosphere around them... it wasn't too crowdy, geet asked maan to dance, maan looked at her disbelievingly but din't say anything and simply nodded for no...
then geet dragged karan to the floor... they both were like a centre of the attention...


gimme long comments...& please press the like button... 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey manpreet nw i m going i will read tomorrow its 2.30 am i should sleep
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awsome update maan ne plan change kar diya aur place geet ki pasand ka hoga wah maan kya naseeb hai n main coincidently first ho gayi so happy for that also bye nw n continue soon next part is part main maaneet is very less so next part main pls maaneet hone chahiye yaar
Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Maan was trying not to shout on her on her birthday...and just ignoring her...
and Geet is one of her kind...
just want to remind Karan that its her birthday...
He wanna spend time alone with Geet on her b'day
seeing Karan on his Knees Maan thought... he might propose Geet...
and he was decided that he will not leave him if he do so...
he felt gud when he knew that he was first one to wish her...
Maan felt jealous when he hug her even knowing that they are jusst friend...
hmm so Geet is becoming aware of the difference between Maan and any other...
billi...nice nic name
Maan changed the plan coz he dint wanna go on date with Karan...
but Geet started to enjoy it
she is dancing with Karan...

ab Maan gussa kaise control karega...
Continue soon...
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago

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