Created

Last reply

Replies

44

Views

8.5k

Users

15

Likes

93

Frequent Posters

maneetmayur thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#21
PART5:

Maan thinks of her eyes, smile, looks n tries 2 sleep. His cell rings,he gets a feeling dat its her, Geet. But he din give herhis no.?? finally he pick up d call:

Maan: Hello' kaun? Geet gulps hard.

Geet: Jee mein MSK se baat kr rahi hu?

Maan(st)dis sound is familiar, kahi vahi to nahi?

Maan: Ji bol raha hu. Aap?

Geet: Mein Geet!! Remember ?? pub me miley the

A smile teases his lips listening 2 her name in her voice, a sweet melodious tone.

Maan: '''. Still thinking, lost in dreamland oopss!! Geet land

Geet: Hello? U der? Remember pub mein, mile the

Maan: Ji ji ,sorry vo (pause) ya I remember. Kya baat hai aap iss waqt? Itni subah suabh? Koi baat hui hai kya?

Geet: Ji vo aapki chot (pause) ab kaisi hai?

Maan lyks her concern n smiles.

Maan: jee ab behetar hai!! Aapne jo patti kit hi (he bits his lip)

Geet smiles n : Ji vahi poochna tha, mein rakhti hu bye!!

Maan: Bye. Tc.

Maan was very happy that she called n smiled, a smile dat was nowhere ready 2 vanish. Maan thinks about d sudden feeling 2 meet her, know her, c her, n all dat mixed emotions lined up n came 2 his mind one after d other. The way they met, the way she bandaged, her care n everything about her. Here Geet too was feeling sumwat same. Sumthing different dan usual, dat she din't feel till 2day. A completely new n maginal feeling.

Precap: whatever u want? Suggest coz am not ready wid it'..


PLEASE COMMENT N LIKE, DEY R REALLY VERY IMPORTANT N MATTERS A LOT 2 ME!!






Edited by maneetmayur - 13 years ago
prachiangel thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#22
nice dear plz ek aache se meeting plan karo maan geet ka😉 nd y dont u post it in ur note u will get more response there😊
prachiangel thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#23
😊 next part plzzz
maneetmayur thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Typing the update now... Vl surely update 2day...😊
maneetmayur thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#25
I wrote in a hurry so sorry 4 mistakes n plz like n comment, n feedbak is important as it motivates me to do better n give u all a better n nice update. So here's
PART6:

Maan was very happy that she called n smiled, a smile dat was nowhere ready 2 vanish. Maan thinks about d sudden feeling 2 meet her, know her, c her, n all dat mixed emotions lined up n came 2 his mind one after d other. The way they met, the way she bandaged, her care n everything about her. Here Geet too was feeling sumwat same. Sumthing different dan usual, dat she din't feel till 2day. A completely new n magical feeling.

Geet calls sasha & asks wats going on with the deal they had with Mr. khandelwal.

Sasha: vl go thru it n get bak 2 u mam.

Geet: K. latest by 2moro.

Geet calls pinky

Pinky: Haan Geet…… I mean mam

Geet: hmmm. Plz get me a coffee. Pinky leaves n gets her a coffee.

15 mins. Later

Geet still having d coffee cup in hand n sipping it. But little did she know d Coffee was over long bak wen she was lost in d beauty of sunset n her lala land…… thoroughly enjoying it….

Suddenly her phone rang n that bought her back to senses n seeing d name flash she smiled (blushed I doubt). "Maan calling…."

Maan: Heelo… geet

Geet: Ji Mr. Khurana boliye…. Aapne hame kaise yaad kiya? Nw dat was too formal maan thought.

Maan: waise Geet, ek baat kahu.

Geet: a bit confused. Hmmm boliye…

Maan: Aap mujhe Maan boliye, Mr. khurana bada formal lagta hai.

Geet: jee theek hai…. Mr. khuran a bit relived nw. I mean Maan. Maan sighed.

Maan: Ji vo mai.. maine bass aapko dekha to socha baat kr l;u. again geet got confused. (he could c get thru d bak window of his office as both r rite opposite 2 each other, Geet's office backside n Maan's office face each other)

Maan continues: aap zara bakside wali window par aayengi?? Mujhe aapka chehera dekhna hai……. Geet blushed n walked 2 d window smiling.

She peeks out n sees him again blush n smile…….

Geet: ji ab kahiye…..

Maan; An tak to aap samajh chuki hogi? Mein aapse milna chahta hu. Geet got it n dat was quick she thought but, she decided 2 tease a bit.

Geet: Ji theek hai, mein aaj dopahar ko free hu, aap office aa jaiye.. a cute smile plastered on face.

Maan: Vo vo!! Mai (stammered maan, nw d MSK n stammering she knew wats cuming nxt. N waited) Aapko..

Geet: Aap mujhe kya Maan?

Maan: I mean hum kahi bahar chalet hai??

Geet: Date par le jana chahte hai? Maan was dumbstruck nw dat was direct n fast.

Maan: Je exactly…… Aap chalengi??

Precap: Maaneet 1st date n mahi moments…….. hayee!!

inharika thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#26
awesome update luvd it...!! can u plss try to give more longer updates...!!!plsss
maneetmayur thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#27
@ inharika: vl try but lack of tym so can't typ more, c i've studies also in b/w i typ in free tym dat too wen no 1 is around.
prachiangel thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#28
😊 nice update dear MAAN n GEET are tooo fast direct date hehehe waiting for mahhiii moments...❤️
divya22 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#29
woo yaar kya direct communication tha... maan gaye maanet ko
Tamanna_TJ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#30
hey dear, nice parts...
Geet ne Maan ko clean bowled kar diya...
lolzz...
Maan stammering... awesome...
continue soon dear...
all the best for ur exams... :D

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya and Raina ff - Love me like you do

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Raina,Ragsan and Vikresha ff - My love is only for u

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

3 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

3 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".