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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
awesome read all parts in a go...luved it...
they meeting n maan geet feelin estless ...
n direct date puch lia geet ne kya baat,...lolzzz...
n maan stammering (muje ghsp yaad aa gaya loved how maan stammers wen he says a lie )...
loved all ur partss
continue soon ur a good writer..keep writting...
i love redin maaneet FF n wo writes also...coz of dem i feel maaneet r still goin
waitin 4 nxt update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
😳 plzz jaldi dooo next part waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Nxt update jaldi do naah
waitin plzzz continue soon :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
part 5 n 6
loved it
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
HIE ALL!! M REALLY SORRY PPL 4 NOT GIVING NY UPDATE 4 SO LONG.. ACTUALLY MY UPDATE IS READY N ITS A MAHA EPI... 4 2 5 PAGS IN WORD BUT UN4TUNATELY ITS IN MY PC N M NOT @ HOME BUT 2 MY NATIVE PLACE, KERELA. SO VL POST D UPDATE DR. LOVE ASAP WEN M BAK... M REALLY SORRY GUYS.. ESPECIALLY
ALL I HAV 2 SY IS TY 4 SUPPORYTING ME IN DIS FF JOURNEY TILL HERE N I PROMISE I WONT UPSET U PPL... PAKKAWALA PROMISE...
I'LL B UPDATING IN JUNE... TILL DEN I'LL B NLY KEEP IN TOUCH
LOVE

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ummme sad yaar...june ka wait karna hoga...
chalo it k... we vil wait... u njoy ur holiday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A VERY BIG HAIII N HELLLO 2 ALL OF U PPL HERE... THANK U 4 SUPPORTING ME THRU LIKES N COMMENTS N ALSO BY GIVING ME IDEAS N ENCOURAGING ME 2 GO ON. WEN I WROTE DR. LOVE I NEVER THOUGHT I WUD GO BEYOND 1ST 2 PARTS BUT AGAIN U GUYS WANTED ME 2 COMNTINUE N M HERE. SO NW IS D TYM 4 A TREAT 4 U GUYS. M STARTING AN SS ON UR OWN MAANEET. HERE'S D LINK. PLZ RESD IT.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
hey dear dr.love ka next part kab aaega waiting from a long time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART7

Its 2 in afternoon Geet came out of her office n saw a big Van waiting 4 her. She entered n wat she saw she could'nt believe so lavish it was. So spacious'.

The Caravan


Interior

Simply beyond words. Even though she is a multi millionaire like Maan but she neva lived a lavish life n it was her choice to be simple..

As soon as she was in front of the door, the door opened by its own(sensor) A hand stretched towards her welcoming her inside. She entered n felt its truly Magical..

She is surprised: Her mouth automatically open in O shape in awe of its beauty!!



He gives a whole tour of d van'..

Driver's seat



Main Hall




Maan's Room


Maan's Room: Washroom..



There are 3 more rooms in it. 1 is convertible Conference room & other 2 Spare rooms.. All well furnished..

Convertible Conference Room



A table n chairs on d other side of room:




Room1: Guest Room


Room1 Washroom:


Room2 or Entertainment Room



Kitchen: With just a coffee maker n necessary items.



Coffee & Tea Maker:




Dining Area:



After the tour Maan takes her bak 2 d main hall n they take seat next to each other on the couch..

She is awestruck n impressed @ d same time.

She gives him a smile


She Speaks:

Geet: Wah mr. Khuarana am impressed.


Maan returns a Smile


Maan: My Pleasure Miss. Handa

Geet: (pouting cutely) Kya kaha aapne??

MAan: thank u

Geet: NAhi uske baad kya kaha

Maan: tumhara naam Miss. Handa

Geet: Ji nahi hamara naam Geet hai n aap hame Geet bulayenge kaha than a humne.

Maan: Accha to ye baat hai, is dat case humne bhi aapse kaha tha k hame aap Maan bulaye.

Geet is silent.

Few seconds Later

Geet: Accha theek hai aaj se bal k abhi se hum aapko MAAn n aap hame Geet bulaenge.. Agreed?

Maan: Agreed!!

Maan: Ab baitho n aaram karo till v reach.(he open d curtains )

Geet: Theek hai aap bhi baithiye. They pass acreoss hills, rivers n greenery'

Maan: Aap free tym me kya krti hai?

Geet: Nothing bas frnds k saath'' (she stops in mid n get lost in past coll days wen she used 2 go 4 outings)

Maan is looking intently @her.. She is lost suddenly. She is lost in her memory lane(Coll days, internship n all sweet memories)

Geet n Annie (Sanaya)



Geet n Sweety(cousin)

With DR.KIRTI




HER SANJEEVANI GANG


SGG(Sanjeevani Gals Gang)



With her hottie (DR. ARMAAN MALIK/ARMU)@ 2 occasions:





After sumtym seeing her still lost. Maan snaps his hand in front of her eyes n

Maan: Geet u here??

Geet: '''

Maan shakes her shoulders. Her trance is broken n she cums 2 present

Geet: Ji yaa m perfectly alrite.. Vo hum coll k dino me frnds k saath jaate the so un yaado me kho gayi ab kaha tym milta hai? Clients, meeting n all me hi busy rehti hu.

Maan: Ohh!! Same here but still u shud thank me in dat case n thank u apne busy schedule se hamare liye time nikalne k liye.

Geet: Oh dat 5n. I really needed a brk n thank u 4 dat n btw u hav a really gud taste' I must say..

Maan: thank u once again''

Btw aap coffe lengi??

Geet: jee!! Black coffee wid 1 cube sugar

Maan: O dats gr8 me bhi aise hi pasand krta hu..

Wait I'll get it 4 us.

They enjoy their coffee:


But again while having it Geet gets lost in d past''.


I CUD'NT GET DD'S PIC WID COFFEE SO HERE I M BAK WID A LONGGG UPDATE N THANKING U 4 UR PATIENCE N 4 BEARING WITH ME... EXPECTING LONG COMMENTS AS WELL. IT TAKES A LOT OF EFFORT 2 PUT DIS UP B4 U PPL..

LOVE U ALL!!

Edited by maneetmayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Woo nice part...
Van idea is great... N all those pics r awesome...
They r heading 4 their 1st date.. Me excited for whats gonna happen nxt??

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