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Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#71
hmmmm jasmine cool dear..... 👏
so finally kashish saw sujal..... 😃 😊
no problem agar un dono ka aamna saamna nahi hua.. 😛 agli part main tho ho hi jayega..... kashish ja rahi hain na mumbai.. woh sujal se zaroor milegi........ 😆
aur haan dear aise kuch karo ki tere story mein charu sujal aur kashish ko milwa de aur sujal ki zindagi se khud ba khud chale jaye.. 😳
aur raha sawaal tushaar ka tho ek kaam karo tushaar ko maar dalo.......aur tushaar ke bachche ko i'am sure sujal , kashish sambhal hi lenge... 👏 mazaa aa jayega....... 👏
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#72
Part-22...Kashish reached Bombay.she goes 2 a temple &
prays:God,plz save sujal .
While she came out of the
temple charu passes near by her.but they did'nt see &
recognise each other. K asks a person who was
standing on the roadside:can u plz tell me where charu
is staying?
He:which kashish? K:how many kashishs do
u no?
he:I no only 1 charu who is not so gud. K:I
want 2 see that charu.i'l stop her dirty deeds.
K was
self determined.with a address she got,K goes 2
charu's house.When her car reaches C's
house,C cums out. C thinks:I think this lady
does'nt no that I STOPPED my earlier WORK. She mite've
cum 2 join me here.
C:I no why u came here.but…K:what
do u think of me?u thot I came here 2 stay here as ur
co-worker?
C looks at k deeply. She
thinks:I think she is a very nice lady. So she gets
embarrassed.
K:u thot all the ladies r like u?dirty
creature.
C loses her control:don't call me like
that.i was bad.but now I'm not like that.but many cum
here without knowing that.that's why I misunderstood
u.sorry.
K:u claim that now u r decent.that's why u r
spoiling a nice man?sujal was a gentleman.but u destroyed
him. C looks at k's eyes.it was burning with
fire.but her words r cuming out of deep pain.
C:r u
kashish? K:yes. C:I wanted 2 see u 2 ask why u deserted a
nice man like sujal.
K was shocked. C:sujal is the 1st
nice man I saw.the men I trusted were cheaters.a person
whom I considered like my own dad only dumped me here.
She bursts into tears:sujal is the person who inspired me
2 b a nice lady.he taught who a woman is.why did u cheat
such a nice person so cruelly?u r a sinner.i'vent done
sin like u.
k cries.Sujal comes there & slaps
charu.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
hey jasmine nice part... 👏
cont soon... 😊
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#74
Part-23.....Tho Sujal was fully drunk,he was conscious.
S:I & kashish got separated.kashish became another man's
wife.that does'nt mean thT kashish cheated me.
Charu:then how did charu become another man's
wife?gsujal,u r too nice.
S:the fault is mine.only
mine.that's a TRAGIC STORY.u DON'T KNOW THAT. Charu
kept silent.She goes out.S & K look at each other.
Song:hum dil de chuke sanam….k cries.she holds his
hands:is it bcoz of me u r drinking ?why r u like
this?plz don't drink anymore.won't u obey me?
S:I
can't kashish.no rescue from this.that's my fate.its not
bcoz of u.u shud'nt worry thinking about me.
K;plz don't
drink sujal.i can't see u getting destroyed due 2
overdrinking. S:I no that u & others r worried about
me.even charu whom I scold everyday gets worried.but
I'm helpless.
K:plz cum with me sujal.I'l giv u gud
treatment. S: then what about ur husband?how wil he
react?
K:I'm not thinking about it.now in my mind only
this thot is there. S:I'l cum kumud.but not now.but I'l
cum b4 my death.
K:sujal! S:now u go kashish.i told u
noi'l cum 2 u. K:but sujal…S:don't tell anything.i can't
cum now.
K removes her bead necklace & puts it around
S's neck:this is 2 remind u 2 cum 2 me. K cries a lot
holding his hands.
then she goes out.Charu was standing
there. K:plz look after sujal well.its my request.
C:yes.i respect him a lot.do u no why?bcoz eventho I
luv him a lot,kashish is his breath.that strong his luv
is.he is even sacrificing his life 4 luv.i don't hav the
rite 2 hinder it.eventho I'm near him,he is seeing &
knowing only u.who can't luv such a nice luver?if I was
in kashish's place I wud've thrown everything 2 reach
garv.i'm jealous of u kashish. K controls her tears .

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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
hey jasmine gud gng... 👏
but so many mistakes... u have written garv kumud in place of sujal kashish.. 😕 .
nywys cont soon... 😊
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#76
jasmine very good dear.. 👏 atlast kashish aur charu met.. 😊 charu ko tapad pada maza aa gaya... 😆 😆 😆
me bohat khush ki sujal , kashish ke beech baat hui.. 😛 😊
jasmine tumna ab sujal , kashish ko milane ki tayaari karo.. 😉 😉 😉 us tushaarrrr ko tum goli maar do aur charu ko devdasini bana do.. 😆
jasmine ye kya sujal ne kashish se kaha ki woh kashish ke pass marne se pehle aayega... 😭 😕 plz sujal ko kuch na ho.... 😳 😳 😳
aur haan plz agli part jaldi likhna... 😊
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#77
Part-24.....Charu,sujal,rishi
dance:chalak{Devdas}.sujal faints vomiting blood. Charu
brings a Dr. Dr:I'm sorry,sujal's condition is serious.
C
was upset.she looks after him well. S:charu,why r u
doing this? C:why,u can't tolerate my presense?
S:ur
effort will b waste.that's why I'm upset.i no that I
won't liv long. c:sujal!I no that u r talking like this
due 2 ur hatred 4 me.i'm bad no.
S:I don't think u r
bad. C was surprised:then? S:I feel that u r nice.
C:ur hatred 4 me has gone?
S smiles:yes. C:now what's
ur feelings 2wards me? S:I feel a liking 2wards u.
C
was very happy. S:if I did'nt no kashish,I wud've luved
only u.but kashish is my everything.so plz don't expect
anything from me charu.
C cries. S thinks:the hearts
of both kashish & charu r paining due 2 me. S
dreams both k & C dancing 2 the song Dolare….
S:charu,I want 2 go 2 kashish. C:no
sujal.now it's the time 2 rest.
S:why shud I
rest?whats the use?bcoz my death is near. C:plz don't
tell like that. S:but that's the truth.let me go.i
promised her.if I don't keep my word,again I'l b a
cheater 4 her. Charu weeps. S gives a letter 2 her:giv
this 2 rishi.
Sujal goes. Rishi cumes 2 Charu's
house. R:call sujal.i've brought licker 4 him.
C:sujal
is too weak 2 hav even a drop.if he drink again,he'l
die.do u want 2 see his horrible death?
R was
speechless. C:sujal went away.
She gives that letter.R
reads it. KC:whas written? R:that he's going 2 see
charu.he has written that its kashish's bead necklace
that's giving him the strength 2 liv.i'm getting tensed
thinking about him.i only destroyed garv by giving
poison.
He breaks the glass bottle of licqour & wounds
his hand.
C:r u mad?Sujal wil become sad if he cumes 2 no
that u did this.
C puts medicine on his wound. Sujal
looks at the bead necklace given by kashish.the beads fall
down.S takes all the beads 2gether & puts it in the
pocket


jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#78
Part-25....Sujal was really tired.he gets tensed:oh
god,wil I b able 2 reach kashish?
He reached near
k's house .he faints. Tushar;s mom cums 2
kashish-tushar:1 guy has fallen b4 our house.he's almost
dead I feel.he was drunk.
K was shocked.she thinks:wil
he b sujal? K:who is he?whats his name? Mom:no idea.
K:had he worn a bead necklace? M:no.had worn a small
gold chain & a ring.i think he's rich. K thinks:if he
has'nt worn the bead necklace,then he won't b sujal.
She
was relieved. M:but ppl found sum beads from his
pocket.
K was shattered.tears cum from her eyes:that's
given by me.he's sujal. T was shocked.
1 servant
cums:that person is not dead.we made sure.he is
breathing.
K was relieved:let me go & see him. M:why
?no need. K:tushar,plz let me go.sujalis my life.
Mom was shocked. She becomes angry:no u can't go 2 see
ur lover.
K:plz mummiji..M:u r married.but still u want
2 b with ur lover? K:plz…its 4 me sujal traveled such a
long distance eventho he's sick.
M:no u can't go. K
was determined:no,I've 2 go. K runs. M:tushar,catch
ur wife.she is mad. T did'nt move. M:what kind of
husband u r?
Mom tells the servant:catch
kashish.don't allow her 2 go. T:no,don't b an
obstacle.let kashish go.otherwise she'l die.
M was
stunned. Sujal moves his lips:kashish…K reaches near
S.she weeps:sujal! K keeps his head on her
lap:sujal…S:kashish,I came 4 u.i've 2go soon. K
cries:don't go sujal. Song:kabhi alvida na kehna……. K's
tears fall on his face. Tushar cumes & snatches k's
mangalsuthra.K was shocked. T wipes her sindoor.K was
stunned. T:these were the obstackles of ur luv.that r
detached from u.u r needed most 4 sujal.not 4 my
son.kashish..sujal is like this bcoz of me.bcoz of my
relationship with u.now that's over.go with sujal.
K
was surprised:Tushar! T:yes.i'll help u 2 giv him
the best treatment.i'm sure that sujal wil cum back 2
life.bcoz u both r made 4 each other.
K:thanks a lot
tushar.i'vent seen such a gr8 person in my life.u used
2 call me Parvathi Devi.but the real God is urself.
T
smiles:funny. K:I promise that tho our relationship is
over,I'l b ur subham's mom's 4ver. T smiles:thanku
kashish.but our relationship is not over.i'l remain as ur
best friend.
K smiles.
After sum months:Kashish in the
pooja room is praying:kabhi khushi kabhi gham…..Sindoor
is seen on her 4head.Sujal comes near her with a smiling
face & prays.K puts the prasad into his mouth. The bell
rang.K goes & opens the door.they were surprised 2 see
Charu there. K:Charu! Sujal:what a gr8 surprise!
Charu smiles:I came 2 see u both.u both rock 2gether.
S-K smile.
C:it's a gr8 pleasure that God made u
both 1.
K:cum,hav prasad. They giv Charu gud
treat. B4 going kashish:Best wishes 4 ur happy married
life.
S:thanks a lot charu. K:u've 2 cum again.
C
smiles & goes. Sujal-kashish look at each other & smile.
S:I want 2 liv seeing u always. K smiles:finally god
heard our prayers. S smiles & hugs kashish.
THE END




tarana08 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
👏

it's end 😭 😭 😭
GOOD
KASHISH

KulBin thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
👏 👏 👏
indeed a good end...
but tushaar so good..... 😕 😡 🤢
never mind but nice story.. 👏

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