Hum dil de chuke sanam 4 Sujal-kashish - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
hey jasmine dont cry.... 😉
cool parts... 👏 do cont soon.... 😊
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#52
dear continue plzz........... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Part-15......CHaru invited Sujal-rishi inside.Sujal
notices many young men there. He feels wierd,bcoz they
were drunk.
S:rishi,these men look like criminals.
R:cool down sujal.
Many beautiful dancers cum.As their
leader Charu cumes & dances:Kaahe chhed
mohe...{DevdAS}.
S:NOW I UNDERstand how shabby this
place is.
S becomes fed up & begins 2 go.R holds
his hand.but S goes away from R.
R :no wonder.i
expected this.
Charu follows sujal.S compares
Charu with Kashish.Kashish can luv only me.thats sure.but
Charu is trying 2 attract so many ppl.tHere is
innocence in kashish's smile & eyes.but in charu's eyes
& smile,only the feeling like how 2 attract men r
found.kashish is a pure girl.her dance steps had
spirituality.but charu's dance steps lack thAT.its
disgusting.
Charu calls Sujal by her touching him with
her hair.
S:how dare u?
C smiles:why did u start
moving away?
S:bcoz i can't breath here peacefully.
C:my
dance...
S:u made that art dirty.Dance is spiritual.u
shud've used it 4 a dirty purpose.
C gets
embarassed.
S:u've dressed carefully,but u look ugly.
C was embarassed.but she did'nt want 2 fail.she
smiles 2 attract Sujal:cum inside.i've seen such a lovely
face b4.2day i'l b my fav guest.
S:by pleasing me if u
make me enter this dirty place,u'l gain money.right?
S takes out his purse from the pocket & throws it on
her face.
C was shocked.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
good work jasmine...
👏 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
Part-16..Sujal:u can share this money with ur
co-workers.or else u greedy person...u can tAKE IT
FULLY.I'M HAPPY THAT I ESCAPED FROM this jail run by
stupid ladies.The money thats earned thru wrong way is
not eternal.it'll b destroyed.
Charu was stunned. S:u
got the money u needed.now lewt me go.u were doing this
drama 4 money no.
Sujal begins 2 walk.suddenly he turns
back.he moves 2wards charu.
she becomes happy:the
person who gave a long lecture is coming back.thays
Charu's talent.
she smiles.
S:A woman is a
daughter,sister,wife,granddaughter,s isterinlaw & a
mother.r u sum1 among them?if not ask urself whether u r
a woman?
That touched Charu's heart.
S goes.she was
wondered.
C:1st time i'm seeing a man like this. she
smiles.
Rishi cumes. C:ur friend sujal is a saint.i can't
believe that there r men like this. R:1st time u r
praising a man.did u like him that much? C:yes.i am
fond of him now.i'd tried 2 attract many men.but 1st
time a man attracted me with his mind.
Rishi laughs.he
teases:r u loving sujal? C:if u feel so,i'm
disagreeing.
R:a woman like u in luv? C:whatever..i'm
also a woman.even i've feelings & emotions.
R:ok.but
don't expect anything from him.bcoz he's already upset
with his luv failure.his beloved kashish married sum1
else.
Charu felt pity,later relief. C:thats ok.i'm
there in the place of kashish.
Rishi laughs.
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#56
jasmine nice.. 😊
but charu 😡 😡 😡 in place of kashish godddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.... .................................................. 😭
i think u can pair charu & tushaar that will be a nice pair & sujal kashish can unite... 😉 😉
what say ??? 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
Part-17...Rishi:it'll never happen.how can a lady like u
can capture the heart of Sujal?1st sujal respected u.but
when he came 2 no who u r he hated u.thats sujal.

Charu:anyway,i'l b able 2 get a gud place in sujal's
mind.4 that i'm willing 2 wait till my death.rishi,plz
bring sujal 2morrow.
R:i don't think its possible. C:then
anyday in this week? R:never.but i'll try 4 u.but don't
expect anything. C:anyway u'l talk 2 gsujal 4 me no.thats
a gr8 deed.
They hear a loud noise from the back:he
won't cum. they turn back.it was Swayaml.
Charu becomes
angry:who r u 2 decide that? S:u no who i'm.i'm sure
that sujal won't cum.how can a a guy like him who was not
impressed by ur beauty cum?
C:sujal will cum.i'l stop my
profession that day.every woman will long 2 escape from
this hell.they wait 4 a person who cums 2 save them.4 me
thT PERSON is sujal.
S:don't take such tuff decisions
charu.u cum inside.i'l giv u precious gifts.
Charu
looks at swayam like a ghost:who wants ur gifts?i need
only sujal's innocent mind.
S:it'l remain as a dream.lets
see whether he'l cum or not.
C:lets see.if he cumes,i'l
throw my anklet on ur face.its a challenge.then u can't
cum here anymore. S:ok.if not,i'l buy u.
swayam goes.
Rishi:what did u tell him?blunder.did'nt u hear what he
said?
C:it won't b a blunder.sujal will cum.i'l win.thats
sure.god wil hear my prayer.
The next day. Rishi:if i ask u
sumthing wil u do that 4 me? Sujal:what do u want me 2 do?
R:2day nite wil u plz go 2 charu's place?
Sujal
shouts:r'nt u ashamed 2 ask me like this?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 gud gud....write more yaar 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Part-18......Rishi:u just go & see.thats enuff.if
not,it'l lead 2 dangerous
incidents. Sujal:dangerous 2
charu?she deserves it. R:but i
promised that i'l take
u there.plz don't make me
embarassed. S:don't talk about
it anymore. R becomes upset. Charu
expects sujal.but
Rishi came alone.C was
shattered.Swayam laughs
loudly:the whole nite u've 2
dance.2morrow morning i'l
go with u. C:2day nite itself
sujal'l cum.i'm sure.bcoz
my luv is strong.if so,i'm not
ur slave swayam.
S laughs. C dances without no
music with
tears.suddenly there happened
a wonder.unexpectedly Sujal
cumes.C cries due 2 happiness.
C:thanks sujal.
Swayam was embarassed.he goes out.C
goes behind
him.she slaps his cheecks. Swayam
runs away like a
tensed guy.C goes inside with
a smile.her eyes
were on Sujal.She dances by
singing:mardala...Sujal did'nt
even look at her dance. C goes
near S:i new
that u'l cum.i new that u'l
look at me & talk. S:i
did'nt cum here 2 see u.i came
here ,bcoz i don't want
my friend 2 b insulted. C
becomes sad:anyway u came here
no.u r gr8. S:however u praise
me,i won't fall in ur
trap. C's eyes rose:this is
not a trap.really i
luv u.my luv is innocent. her
words did'nt fall on his
ears. his eyes fall on a
liquor bottle.he goes near
it.he takes & opens the
bottle. Rishi:what r u doing sujal?
S:whats the problem?u only
said that licker can wipe out
my worries. R:but u don't
drink Sujal. S:get lost. K
drank the whole bottle by
tolerating its bitter taste.
tears flow from his eyes. R &
C were helpless.
S:we'l go S. when they went
out,C's eyes rose.
suddenly S turns back & moves
2wards
C:charu,now onwards everyday
almost all the time
i'l b there with u in this
house. C was surprised
that she cud'nt believe
whether its a dream or not.she
looks at S deeply.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
jasmine nice part.................... 😊
par jasmine ye kya charu loves sujal... 😭 & where's kashish & will sujal kashish ever unite............ 😭

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