Hum dil de chuke sanam 4 Sujal-kashish

This fanfic
is my version of DEvdaS.
PART-1.....Sujal is
returning 2 his native place
after 14yrs.after getting
used 2 the lifestyle in
USA,he did'nt feel like going
back but its bcoz of his
parents' force,he's going
back .since a few months
Sujal is in bombay.he was packing
everything 2 return.his only
friend Rishi cumes:why r u
in hurry 2 go back? Sujal
does'nt say anything. he helps
him 2 pack.R gets a
letter from a book. R:whose
letter is this? S takes
it & looks:this is kashish's
letter . R:who is kashish?ur
kitten? S gets irritated:its
a girl. R:o i see.u did'nt
tell that u've a gf in ur
place.so this is the reason
behind ur sudden return 2 ur
land. S:what rubbish!how
many glamorous girls r here
near me.i did'nt feel
anykind of attraction 2wards
them.then how can i feel
that 2 this simple village
girl?i'vent seen kashish since
a long period.she was my
childhood friend.1st & all
we used 2 send letters.later
it was stopped. R:but i
realy feel that ur
relationship with kashish is
not sumthing that shud be
broken.i think the destiny
is 2 bring u both
2gether.that may be the
reason u r 2 b back. S:u r
mad.by the way a bad smell
is coming from u.u've drunk?
R:ya. S:don't u feel shame
2 tell it openly? S:i don't
feel shame 2 tell the truth
like u.u feel shame 2 admit
that u luv kashish. S:u r
talking rubbish after
drinking. R smiles.
S cud'nt sleep thinking
a bout R's words. he
takes & reads the old letter
sent by kashish:sujal,did'nt u
tease me when i said that a
flower is cuming the the
plant?tho its late,a yellow
flower has cum.when u cum
here,i'll giv 2 u. S
thinks:yellow...luv's color.
S was carried away by
nostalgia...the days spent
with K.

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kashish

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Part-2....Sujal remembers how naughty he was & how

sweet kashish was.K was
brilliant in maths,but S

was just the opposite.he
remembers their painful

departure when he went away
from their place.K stood

near him when was going.they
both cried a lot.due 2

laziness S stopped
writing letters,but K

continued. S thinks that
mayb bcoz he was not

replying later she also
stopped sending letters. S

thinks:why am i thinking this
much about k?she was

only a friend.i remember the
little k clearly.how

does she look like now? he
becomes restles.Immediatly he

goes,paints k with a
guess. S:wil kk look like

the same? S feels like
seeing k like

anything.Rishi's words r still
in his mind. k was very

much trilled 2 no that S
is cuming back. she goes 2

the temple:God,sumeet is cuming
back after many

yrs.thanku so much god 4
bringing him back. she takes

vrith 4 sujal.then dances with
lamps:silsila....S

comes back,gets grand welcome.
S goes 2 k's

house.K's parents did'nt
recognise him. S:don't u

recognise me?i'm sumeet. they
were surprised. k's

mom:sujal!wow! dad:i can't
believe ur change. they

chat. M:sujal,don't u want 2
see k? he wants 2 see

her very badly.but he does'nt
say that. M:she was always

enquiring whether u r back. S
becomes happy 2 hear

it. M:kashish...cum here.see
who has cum. k cumes.she

was really happy 2 see s.he
cud'nt believe his

eyes.bcoz K was exactly the
same person in his

painting. he thinks:without
seeing k's present

look,i painted.it was
right.its a gud omen.but k

looks more beautiful than in
my painting. M:k,did u

recognise him? K:yes,sujal.
su-k look at each

other. he cud'nt sleep
thinking about k.he was

impressed by her beauty.he
sings dreaming about her:woh

chand jaisi ladki {Devdas}.

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hey jasmine very nice yaar... 👏
bst part ws painting sujal made without seeing her...
plz cont soon.... 😊

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Part-3....Sujal-kashish meet in the temple.they walk

2gether silently.losing
patience S decides 2 talk

1st:how did u recognise me?
K smiles:why did'nt u

cum here all these yrs? S:i
did'nt feel like cuming

here.did'nt want 2 see any1.
K wants 2 ask like

this:u did'nt want 2 see me?
K:now also u r not

interested in this place?
S:slightly interest started

cuming. K smiles. S:why
did;nt u send letters? S:i

did'nt feel like sending. K
becomes sad.she

thinks:how cool sumeet is.not
at all bothered about

anything. S:why did'nt u stop
sending letters? K:i thot
u
4got me.so i did'nt want 2
desturb u. S cud'nt

speak. K:u 4got me? S was
speechless. K:u did'nt

think about me even 4 once?
S:where is time 4 that?
K
becomes sad,bcoz she
expected a positive answer

from him. K:but i can't count
how many times i used 2

think about u each day. it
touched sujal's heart.

S:ok,how is ur studies? K:what
studies?it got stopped

early. S was shocked,bcoz
K was the brightest

student in the school who was
the pet of the teachers.

S:why?u lost interest in ur
studies?shocking.. K:no,i

was 1st.but its really
expensive 2 continue
studies.we r

not so rich like u no.
K's eyes filled up with

tears. S smokes. K:u r smoking
b4 god?its a poison.
s
throws away the
cigerrette. K smiles.