Hum dil de chuke sanam 4 Sujal-kashish - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
😕 old guy with 2yr old child???
anyway cont soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
TUSHAR IS NOT OLD IN MY FIC

Part-12....Kashish did'nt get a gud welcome from TUshar's
ppl.they think that she'll keep in her line thru her
beauty.K was very affectionate 2 T's
baby;Shubam.
T becomes very happy:kashish,i respect u
,bcoz u r becming a wonderful mom.
K smiles. Sujal
decides 2 leave 2 bombay. his parents did'nt allow.
S:no,i've 2 go.i'll stay with rishi.i want freedom 2
think & dream.i've lots 2 dream about..my
childhood...kashish....
S leaves.his parents become sad.
Rishi was surprised about S's return.
R:i thot u won't
return.i thot u'll b enjoying ur romance with kashish.
S
smiles.
R:ur smile shows thAT u r in luv with kashish.that
day itself i told u no.but u said no.
S:that was the
gr8est blunder of my life.my biggest mistake.i feel like
singing a luv song.
R:but 4 a duet,kashish is not here.
S:but i see kashish with the eyes of my mind.the magic of
luv makes a lover 2 write a luv song & 2 sing it.
R
laughs:is it?
S sings:hum dil de chuke sanam....S
feels that K is also there with him 2 sing.later when he
realises that it was only his dream,he becomes really
upset.he cries loudly.R was shocked:why r u crying?
S:kashish was not there with me 2 sing.
R laughs:only bcoz
of that?u r not able 2 liv without seeing her 4 a
moment?its ok.after wedding u can see her 4ever.
S:the
wedding is over. R was surprised:its over?then why
did'nt u bring her here?i wud like u see ur childhood
luv .
S:its impossible 2 bring her here.bcoz the person
whom kashish got married 2 is not me,its tushar.
R was
shocked.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
hey jasmine nice part.... 👏 👏
good gng... 😛
cont soon.... 😊
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#44
jasmine good work.......... 😊 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
Part-13...Rishi becomes angry:u fool.u gave kashish 2 that

stupid tushar?if any girl
luves me,if she is an ugly
patient also i wud'nt hav
given her 2 any1. Sujal:it
was my situation.i delayed a
lot 2 realise my luv 4
her.i'm a foolosh helpless
luver. S cries. S:i'm not
able 2 sleep peacefully.my
mistake is not giving me
peace. R:i'll giv u a solution
2 wipe ur worries. He
gives a licker bottle 2 him. S
becomes angry:take it
away from me.don't u no that i
hate licker. R:ok,let me
drink. He drinks. Night.Rishi
was getting ready 2 go out.
S:where r u going? R
hesitates 2 tell:u sleep.i'll
be late when i cum back.
S:where r u going? R:a place
where we can enjoy. S:can we
4get our worries there?if
so i'll also cum with u.
R:no.u don't cum with me. S:if
i sit here alone,i'll go mad.
R:don't cum with me.its
not a gud place 4 a gentleman
like u. S:anyway i'll cum
with u. R:plz listen 2me
sujal.don't cum with me. S:why
u don't like me getting peace?
R:i can't take u there
knowing everything. S:if u r a
gud friend u've 2 take me
with u. R:ok,u can cum with
me.but plz don't insult me
after seeing the place. S:ok.
Sujal-rishi goes 2 a big
beautiful house. S:whose house
is this? R:this is a
smart lady's house. S:she
stays here alone? R:she was
not alone.but departure made
her alone.many went behind
money.now also sum ppl r still
there with her. S:whats
her name? R:Charu. S:she
might've shattered when her
close ones left her. R
thinks:poor sujal thinks that
they r her relatives.



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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
good jasmine...... 😊
ab ye charu kya sujal se pyaar karegi... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
plz reunite sujal n kash...can't tolerate charu....gud job tho
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
jasmiiineee 😡 what the hell tooshi ki entry karwa hi dii 🤢 & chaaru 😡 ...ok kill them both in an accident....that too a khatarnaak one!! 😆 😉
gr8 going 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Part-14......Rishi:Charu is talented,she gained everything including this &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; palace like house thru her hard work.
Sujal:thats why... her relatives might've tried 2 snatch money from &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; her.since she is courageous
she mite've stood against them.that may b the reason why
others left her.r they her brothers & sisters?
S:they r servants who r like her sibblings.
S:whats her job? &n bsp; &n bsp;
R
hesiates 2 tell:that u'll understand when she gets
inside.her tough life brought her here.
S:how did u meet Charu?
R:when i heard about her,i felt like making friends with her.so i came
here & met her.there is sumthing which attracts others 2 her.even i fell into
that magical pull.
S:what?i can't understand anything. Many pretty women invite
them.they were richly dressed. &nbs p; &nbs p;
S:i'vent seen such fashionable servants.
R:charu wants even her servants 2 hav
a luxurious life.
S:she is gr8.
A beautiful lady cumes.Her dress was very &n bsp;
rich:dark blue with precious white stones.she has worn
diamond ornaments.very attractive smile.kajal of her
eyes was pretty.her face expressions were romantic.
R:this is my only friend sujal.
she smiles. She tries 2   ;
attract Sujal with her glamorous smile.her eyes were
glowing. S felt wierd.
R:this is charu.
S was surprised.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
good work..... 😊
but a very a small part.... 😭 😭

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