Hum dil de chuke sanam 4 Sujal-kashish - Page 2

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Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#11
veryyyyyyy sweetttttttttt jasmine..................................................... ..... 😳
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue................... 😊
KulBin thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
really nice jasmine... 👏
actually S is sumeet or sujal???? u have written sumeet at 2-3 places in this & previous part also....
dear cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
sorry 4 writing sumeet instead of sujal
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
Part-4...Sujal:kashish,we'll play cards like we used 2

when we were kids. K
laughs:ok. they play.

song:Bairi
piya...S-K play .K runs 2 her

friend Mouli. K:there is
a happy news. M:what? K:sujal


came 2 my house 2 see me.i
can't still believe this.

M:sujal might've cum 2 ur
house.but its only a dream

that its 2 see u. k's face
becomes dull. M:whats in

ur mind?u r shy 2 say?
K:no,i'm prowd 2 say that i
luv

sujal.ppl maynot swallow
it.but i'll tell this truth.

M was shocked 2 see
her frankness. M:u've the guts


2 tell that u luv sujal?
K:when we r in luv we'll hav

the courage 2 say that.if
u'd guts u will not hav agreed


2 marry a man whom u r not
in luv. M was

speechless. K:i'll soon tell
sujal that i luv him.why

shud i hide my luv 2wards
the person whom i'm in luv

with? M:what if sujal
does'nt accept u? K:i'm sure
that

he'll ccept me. M:how can
u b sure about it? he

might've seen mANY BEAUTIES
BETTER than u IN

aMERICA,BOMBAY...K:maybe
.but he cannot see any charm
in

the m.only i'm beautiful in
his eyes.thats the magic of

luv. k imagins romamce
with sujal.Song:morey

piya.... k's mom
cumes 2 see S's mom. K's
mom

:shud we delay it? S's mom
:what r u talking about?

Mom:about conducting the
wedding of sujal-kashish.

S's mom stares at her.


Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#15
good jasmine................. 😊 😃 👏
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#16
Part-5....Sujal's mom:r u mad?i can't see kashish as my bahu.
K's mom was shocked:but then
u were pampering
her..S's M :yes.but its too bad 2
see another meaning in
that. M:that was also ur
acting. S's mom:ok.if sujal's dad
hears it...m:i'm not scared.
S's M:tht much prowd u
r?4 that what do u hav?do u
hav money? M:we'll hav
money soon.A rich man will
marry kashish.she'll liv in all
kinds of facilities.that time
this family wud've got
destroyed.its my challenege.
Sunset..sujal under the
mango tree. k cumes
there:sujal! S:kashish..u..here..u
r not scared 2 cum ?its going
2 be really dark. K:i
wanted 2 see u.so i came
here.i don't hav anything 2 get
scared. S:i really admire ur
courage.in abroad i've
seen many girls who r not
scared of anything.but i never
expected a simple girl like u
2 hav courage. K:why r u
here under the mango tree
during sunset? S:i luv the
beauty of sunset.i admire
beauty.this tree brings me old
memories. k smiles. S thinks
about his
childhood.when he was not
talking 2 k,due 2
sympathy,k cumes & givs him a
mango.S shares it
with k. K:mango tree is the
tree of luv. S:is it? K
thinks:let the mango tree of
luv b the witness of our
luv. K:sujal,i adore u.u no
that? S:i no that.thats
why in school tho i did'nt do
home work,u used 2 accept
the punishments that i'm
supposed 2 get from the
teacher.u gave me sweet
mango.i was too late 2
understand that u r my best
friend. K:sujal,u did'nt
understand whati said?sujal,i
luv u.4 me u r my luver as
well as my husband. S was
shocked. K:sujal,u don't
feel anything? S:what 2 feel?
K:u don't feel anything
about my confession of luv?
S:no. k was shocked.she
felt that she's going 2 faint.




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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
wow jasmine nice parts... 👏
but wat a twist 😉
even i'm shocked that sujal didn't feel nythng wen kashish confessed... 😭
but nywys gr8 gng dear.... 😛
waiting for the next part plz post it soon... 😊
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#18
jasmineeeeeeeeeee wahhhhhhhhhhhhh..............👏
plz continueeeeee................... 😊
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Part-6.....Sujal:many girls hav proposed b4 like u .but

i

did'nt hav any feeling 4 them.
kuashish:u r too foolosh 2

understand that its bcoz u luv
me.u cannot luv any1 else

other than me. her words
touched his mind. K:sujal,i

can't wait anymore.plz tell
sumthing. S:its getting

dark.u plz go. K:i'll go.but
tel me that u luv me.

S:don't make others gossip
about us. K:let them tell

so,bcoz its the truth.
'kuashish'.she hears a voice &
turns

back.it was hr mom.since
mOm new k's mind she was

not tensed. M:what do u hav 2
do here in this time?
k
was shocked 2 see
her mom in a rough manner. K:i


came here 2 speak 2 Sujal.
Mom's eyes rose:poor

girl.no k.ur meeting with
sujal shud b avoided. K:whT
DO
U MEAN mama? M:u both hav 2
4get each other. Mom

mistakes S 2 b in luv with
K.k was

shocked:how cud u b so cruel?
M:i went 2 see sujal's mom
2
talk about ur wedding with
sujal .but she insulted me.

S-K were shocked. K cries.Mom
takes her

home. Dinner in sujal's house.
S's mom:sujal,there was a

funny thing 2day.that middle
class lady had cum

here.do u no why?by 4getting
their position they want

their uneducated daughter
kashish 2 get married 2 u. S

thinks:mom cals kashish as an
uneducated girl.but she was

the most brilliant student in
the school.if her poor

financial condition was not an
obstacle she wud've

atleast become an engineer.
S:what did u tell

aunty? Mom:i gave her a sharp
reply.u don't worry.i no ur

mind.i no that u won't prefer
a cultureless uneducated

middleclass girl like k. S
loses his mood. S

feels difficult 2 face K.but
sees K on the

roadside.K cumes near him.
S:what s this kashish?ur mom

has told u not 2 see me again.
K:yes.but if u r not

telling me 2 go away from
u,how can i? S:kashish,we

shud'nt make our parents
upset.so u plz...K:u want me 2

go
away.right?ok,i'll go.but
why r u hiding ur luv 4 me

inside ur mind?why can't u
tell what my place is inside
ur
mind? S:like u think i'm
hiding anything in my

mind.i 've already told u the
place u've in my mind.u r
my
best friend.plz don't see
anything else in that.
K
thinks how prowd & confident
she was b4 mouli

while talking about her
chemistry with sujal. S:i've
a

friend in bombay..Rishi.he is
always drunk & has other

bad habits too.but u r very
nice,a better friend than

Rishi.he no only bad ideas.but
what u no r maths & luv.

K:but u no only
foolishness.fools will hav
only

losses.they'l b very late in
realising that.that time

the y'l get time only 2 cry.
K goes away. S gets

confused:what kashish told is
unavoidable & meaningful.



Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
aromi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good but please place the alingment in left side..it's very difficult to read...

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