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Posted: 13 years ago
ommggg raj kiss naina no naina kiss raj na i mein they both kissed each other and then naina kickied raj ooo shit man kahin aur hi maar leti wahan marne ki kya zaroorat thi 🤣
amazing update
cont.soon
Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

...😛
4 pming me dear...😃
for ur all updates...
keep the job up dear..👏..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice part.

Naina ka past life kafi tragic tha...

par Present me use yeh kaisa boss mila hai use...raj ki ankhon se hypnotised ho kar naina ne kiss kiya hoga Raj ko...warna wo toh itna chidhti thi uss se...phir ankhen bandh hui toh sayad wapas zameen par utar aayi hogi...isiliye Raj ko uss kiss ke baad ek free gift de diya uss ne...😆

pata nahi ab Raj kya kare...

cont soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was absolutely amazing...👏👏
👏D monologue cleared everything about her past...which was quite sad...😔
And den RN scene...wow...jst wow...cant believe dey actually kissed...☺️😳
Update soon...😊
Edited by Mrsimisam - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Esha, hi

Naina's past is not so gud.she misses her mom nad dad and she feels dutybound to help her step-mom as she helped her when she was young by taking her in after her parent's death.
Raj is really angry with Naina but she makes him forget everything. oh yeah
He kissed her!! 😲😲 just like that.. yup just like that 😆
How will Naina react?? u'll see

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! thank u
Naina is engrossed in her thoughts and her past life was really tragic!!!!!
She misses her mom and dad and she feels duty bound to help her stepmom as she helped her when she was young by taking her in after her parents' death!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔
It reminded me of the movie Dil Hai Tumhara!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 really????
So Naina does find Raj handsome and is attracted to him!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 oh yeah
Raj is angry at Naina and is behaving very formally with her!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡
But then he went back to asking her if she was engaged and that led to Naina getting annoyed again!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Naina makes Raj forget everything and Naina is also hypnotised by his eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍
Raj has really gone insane in his love and without any warning he kissed her!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Naina also responded to him and kissed him back but she soon came back to her senses!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
O God!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Naina kicked him where it hurts the most!!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 lol yup
Poor Raj!!!! Marna hi tha toh kahi aur maar leti wahan marne ki kya zaroorat thi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 HEHEHEHE , poor him🤣

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thank u for this sweet comemnts
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Posted: 13 years ago


thank u 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
U KNOW WHAT? i m in a lil hurry i'll reply to the comment later!!!

love u guyz tunsss

Edited by backy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART - 8



When his mouth touched hers, a wave of heat zigzagged through him, pooling like fire low in his belly. Her lips were soft and full, as sweet and warm as honey. She gasped, and when she did, he dipped his tongue past her teeth to taste her moistness, which was even sweeter and made him think of other sweet places he would like to taste.


She tried to lean away, but he didn't make any movement. She tried to wriggle but she was like trapped in an invisible web. At last she used her full power and kicked him with her full force, which made him see the stars. His gut contracted on a dizzying surge of pain and shoved all the air from his lungs. Rage obscured his vision, painting her and everything around them in glowing red.


She touched her lips in disbelieve. She didn't , oh surely she didn't just did that?, how can she let him kiss her, moaning and enjoying, how can she forget about her mother, her family her culture and how can she not think about him as a ----- psychopath? She sure enough doesn't like him, does she?


She ran from there as she heard him shrieking in pain.


After picking all of her stuff she made her way out of the office, ignoring all the whispers, she made her way in car. She didn't care what people thought about she leaving her office early that too after just coming out of his cabin.

She combed her hair and sat on her bed. It has been two days since she has gone for work. It wasn't like "OMGGG I kissed a man and m never going back there to see his face". These thoughts were so backward for her, she dated guys but that was long ago, she had assured her self that she will never like or love anyone, because it only gives her pain in return. Every one she loves goes away from her, now heer and sunny as another case. As long as the THINGS and persons were somehow connected to the family name ahlowalia everything was OK 'cause nothing could get worse than to be a part of this family.


She nibbled through the chocolate and looked through some pgs of the magazine that she was holding when her cell beeped.


She saw a msg from pooja


A smile crept her smile when she read the msg, and replied her. It wasn't long before pooja called her


hi nain wats up?


Nothing yar , just relaxing


Pooja noticed the disturbances in her voice and asked her immediately.


Is there anything wrong, I mean u know u can tell me anything and everything. Then why keep quiet and be a saroo?


How did u guessed,, and no m not being a SADOO. It's just m little confused with myself. ''


''U know that drunken guy I told u abt, he happed to be my boss. And come to think of it he never leaves a chance to flirt with me and u couldn't even guesses what he did last to me in office, He kissed me. She said everything in a short single breath.


WH----what? That guy who SOMEHOW happened to be your boss KISSED U? she stretched the word kissed with full curiosity. How come u never told me about it. Pooja asked feeling upset about not being informed.


After five minutes of pleading pooja forgives and ask her " is that why u were so disturbed, because u guy kissed u ?"


No its not--- well yeah I little, but what upset me the most is I think I start liking this guy.


What? Naian r u serious?


No m not sure, but come to think of it what's the biggy. I said I only like him not that I will ever love him or marry him---


Vowww stop it there, now where did the marriage part come from???? Pooja asked with full naughtiness in her voice.


U know what I think I'll hang up the phone now. She was so frustrated and here pooja was teasing her.


Heyy came down. Pooja said trying to came her.


Sooo what do I do???? She asked pooja.


How m I suppose to know, no guy , mind u no guy has ever been so latoo on me she said with a little disappointment on her voice. "naina u are so lucky, just give it a chance. Everything will be ok. And as long as I know u , m pretty sure u are not going to work right?



Mphhh, naian muttered nodding her head.

Now stop nodding and for god sake don't make things so complicated. I mean got to work, u were staying in home because u weren't ready to face the truth that u lov'I mean u liked him right? Now everything is settled and u is ready to give it a chance. Pooja bite her tongue as she was about to say love, but she couldn't help herself either. The way naina told her the whole story and about THEM kissing it seems like they both were in love.

After bidding bye to Pooja naina gave it a thought, yeah she could do that, give him a chance not that she loved him or she was ever planning to get marr----- oh here she goes again. Naina get a grip, she said to herself as she tugged herself in the bed and was all set to get to sleep.

Never has he been this disappointed in his life. He loved someone so deeply, crazily and that person don't give a damn shit. He loved her alright was it a crime, this is not some 1700 this was 2012 HELLOOO. He respected her thoughts but why insults him and ignore him? He wasn't forcing her, he was trying to win her heart, but guess that happens only in Bollywood.



He wasn't guilty about the kiss, he could never be. That kiss has been on of the wonderful things in his life. If she wanted time he would give her, but that wasn't the problem that problem was she just didn't wanted to see his face. He has been totally LATOO on her from the day he first saw her, he give her that. But was it that's why she was ignoring him? Any girl at her place would be drooling on him take her sister as an example. She was totally going GAGA about him. But does that really make it a different, he didn't want just ANY GIRL he wanted her.


For the first time in his life he had full heartedly visit the temple and so desperately asked naina from god. He wasn't even angry at his family for sending him away from him. All he wanted now was naina. But now he gave up. He could never EVER force her. If that's what she wanted. He will leave her alone.


Only he knew how the two days have passed without naina. One more day and he would surely break his promise to stay away from her. He had the right to at least see her if not more.


And here she come, with her hair tied in a neat pony tail and the puff from the side suit her just fine. She looked simply gorgeous in just jeans and top. With a light makeup and some jewelry she looked so damn pretty that for an instant raj forgot to take his eyes from her, and when u are in love the person u love became the most beautiful for u.


He didn't wanted to make her uneasy so he was about to look away when she gave him one of the nicest smile. He blinked not once but twice to clear his version. But still he saw the beautiful smile in her face.


She made her way to the cabin leaving him completely shocked.


Just what the hell was happening around him? Was this her prank but on earth would she prank on him? And before her knew he was making his way to her cabin.




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NOTEEE!!!



DONE!!!!! Phewww '. Ok guys seriously I don't know where this story is going but as long as u guys r with me I'll figure it out. Plz let me know through ur comments what I typed wrong and sorry for the mistakes I don't have much time for proof reading. And plz plz plz plz give me some ideasss, I don't know what to type next. And if u wants the story to be a little ehem ehem let me know and give me some ideas about that too!!! Lol I can't believe I just asked that, ANYWAYS there something else too I want u guys t know. I am having my finals this week and next week (and still on IF) and after that I am free from unii (YAYY) but I won't be able to update because I really really really want to chat my friends and they are free only in summer time usually, so maybe I'll update once or twice but otherwise I will update in probably AUG or September when ever my colg will start.


love u guyz tonss


eshaaa

Edited by backy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Naina hasn't gone to the office after that incident and never wants to see his face again!!!!!
Naina told Pooja about it and instead of immediately trying to listen to her problem Pooja was angry that Naina had not told her before!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Naina has feelings for Raj and admitted that she likes him!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Pooja gave the right advice to her which was to go back to work and give Raj a chance!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Raj is missing Naina like hell and all he wants is Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
He can never force her and he had even gone to the temple to ask Naina from God!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Poor Raj is so frustrated by her absence but to his surprise she did come on the third day!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj is lost seeing Naina looking so gorgeous!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍
He is rather shocked to see her smile at him and went towards her cabin after her!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago

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