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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Updating again. You really do spoil us and we love you for it.
Cant wait to read it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Great update, u truly r gonna give us a twist! Luv it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Dhundlae aks

todays previous update
PART 82

Rano cupped her face.. beda ji.. aap choten choten baten dil pe na liya karo.
Waisen bhi.. u haven't paid my Crd card bill yet
Geet frowned.
Rano kissed her nose.. I like u like this more.

Geet was still not getting off her lap. Rano shook her head & called armaan.
Armaan '
rano mama!! sab teehk hain na
rano question him ' u should be telling me
armaan '
kya huwa mama?
Rano ' aapni Geet ko akela hi chod diya...
Geet mumbled..ussen aapne ridhima se fursat millen tho mujhe dehkega
rano was shocked..
ridhima.. !! yeh kab huwa.. wo tho kitne choti hain
Geet ' mama she is in medical college now
armaan was shocked ' Geet HP main hain,
his voice was horrible in pain .. she didn't tell me she is going.
Geet complained taking the phone from armaan '
thats because u don't have time for me; because u don't know anything that happens around me
with next couple of hrs he was in HP.. all the while on his way he was in call with her, trying to figure out wat is she hiding behind those jokes & smiles. He didn't leave her side for a sec after that. It was heart breaking for him to see his naughty, bubbly ...always mast sweety.. suddenly all grown up.. grown up in a way.. distancing from him.. a distance.. he could feel between their hearts.. souls.. & he knows that could happen only when she would eventually fall in love.. did she!!!!
he didn't know how to control his tears every time he saw her fake a joke.. fake smile.. fake a prank..like free bird seemingly flying ' just that her wings r not to be seen anywhere.
In the Mall
Daadi, Maan & prachi had their lunch together. Daadi being herself.. asked all abt prachi & her family.
Prachi was little conscious talking to Daadi like that, especially when nothing was certain from their end. Daadi tried all her ways to try to like her.. for the sake of Maan.. all she could do was land up hating her more.. even a simplest of thing.. like.. does ur mom know abt Maan as ur frd.. prachi got nervous & that was enough for Daadi to get pissed off. & Maan knowing Daadi read that.
On their way back from mall.. Maan tried to defend prachi saying.. her mom is strict like dad is. Daadi rolled her eyes.. looking up at babaji.. mera pota tho..pyar main pura hi pagal hogaya.

Daadi didn't even once want to talk abt prachi to Maan. But he was not liking this treatment from Daadi & went on probing, why Daadi not liking her. Not that he likes.. but he thought she was the marriage material any senior citizen will approve off.. then why Daadi not liking her. It was more of his curiosity to know .. because all this was proving him wrong...
wrong in a big way... his thinking of prachi.. as a right person.. or the underlying current that... a girl like Geet is wrong.
Maan Singh Khurana is wrong.. oh yes boy.. ur wrong in a very big way... & his big fat ego..being totally turned down.. when he saw Daadi not all approving her.

Daadi didn't say anything...
that itself meant a lot to him. He even accused Daadi saying that .. u r not liking prachi because she is from a middle class family. Daadi sighed..
on a very serious note.. Maan this is ur life.. I have nothing to say in that.
Maan '
lekin Daadi this is not done
Daadi got really angry '
wat is not done.. did I say anything abt prachi??
did I say yes or no..
for gods sake Maan grow up!!! its ur life.. I have nothing to do with it
Maan was really hurt, he hugged her like a baby.. Daadi how can u say like that. U know .. u dad & bro.. some where Geet .. .. his heart spoke. That he didn't voice it.. mean the world to me.
Daadi hugged him '
then why do u thing we will not approve of anything u select. After all its ur happiness we want. Just that I feel u still don't seem to understand where ur heart lies. U still like the way u were in 3rd std fighting for a chocolates that Dev was having.. just because u thought that was cool.. but in real u don't even like that chocolate.
Maan fought back ..
I like mint chocolate Daadi
Daadi shook her head ' & left him alone.. its not chocolates we talking abt her .. its ur life.

Maan was totally confused.. why Daadi didn't like prachi.. wo kitni.. sidhi sadhi types. He went to his room & hugged puchki.. mujhe tho Daadi ki baten samjh hi nahi aati. He looked at his phone & decided to call her..
Maan '
hi
she was laughing loud.. her voice stuck in her throat.. when she heard his voice.. she couldn't say anything.
Maan '
don't tell me I sound that hot on phone
Geet closed her eyes & sighed '
sorry.. whom do u want to talk to??
Maan was totally taken a back
armaan '
kiska phone hain..
Geet ' pata nahi..
number nahi flash horaha hain
Geet spoke again in the phone '
hello??? hello???
armaan ' cut karna.. agar impt hoga tho.. they will call back.
She cuts the call ' it took more than just pressing that button for her.. probably something riping apart.. something tearing with in
armaan ' kya baat hain
she faked a smile again.. chal hum khelthen hain
Maan was totally taken a back... wat did just happen. She didn't have his number. ok.. how can she not recognize his voice... is that wat he expects.. he didn't know how to explain.. wat he felt.. like someone just hammered his heart.. not just ego.. he kept looking at the phone blankly...
the beep beep sound.. of disconnection was there.. for god knows how long... he didn't know why he felt so hurt. She was not mean.. she was normal.. yah she didn't know it was him.. who was calling .. that is normal .. perfectly normal.. main bhi hota tho aisen hi react karta.. lekin how is that even possible..

his phone rang again.. he lifted it blankly..
raj '
hi Maan
wat is up.. wat is all this abt u & prachi
Maan didn't hear a word just blankly '
yaar veer she didn't know its me calling
raj was taken a bit back.. hearing his voice so broken
Maan '
yah .. I mean she doesn't know its my number..
ussne kaha bhi .. number nahi flash ho raha hian
lekin
wo
I mean
how could
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he just threw the phone..
raj closed his eyes.. he knows Maan little too well to understand his emotions
precap
kya karoon hain kuch kuch hota hain
-PREV PART 81 next PART 83-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

Thank god... you clarified and saved my head from explosion


me too...i have missed my pulse thinking that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Congrats for the new thread... 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Congrats 4 d new thread n loved d updates :) waiting 4 next part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Aww he wants us mishty.. Geet😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Waiting... ----edit---- oops i was waiting then and u already updated... u r too fast... anyway comment is two pages ahead😳
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

*sigh* geet just didn't cut the call but cut the thread too between them

will maan be able to bear this tough geet but he needs a *JOR KA JHATKA* JOR SE


i just hate him sometimes...he was defending prachi infront of dadi asey to she will feel ke he really likes that prachi

am feeling really bad for geet & a little for armaan too 😒


what did you mean in last line
Raj know him a little too well 😕
hope he will not misundersatnd maan's talk for prachi

Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago

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