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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
Maan will now try the other way
He has realized it now and he will surely get her back
Geet is in dilemma whether to trust him or not to trust him...because of the past, she thought he will be angry on trowing the gift but he again placed it in front of her with a smile
What is in the gift that Maan wanted her to see or have it?
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hope geet tries to know maan again .
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Posted: 13 years ago
I wish Geet will try to understand Maan's intentions, I want this for Geet's happiness coz she is hurting herself now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
Really liking Maan's patientience now
I hope Geet comes to know that he's really fallen in love with her and he's repenting for his rude behaviour
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...loved it...
maan is working very herd to change himself...and it is showing ...
let's hope for the best...
please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
look like maan in action

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update. geet again going to maika, i hope everything turns out good and geet for once starts believing Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think nw its time 4 maan to come in action nw...
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Posted: 13 years ago
The story has been moving really well and I am loving the fact that Geet is giving cold shoulder to Maan. He deserves it quite well. I am also happy with the fact that Maan is making all efforts to make Geet happy.

But I have objection to Geet's throwing the gift in trash and tearing the letter to pieces. Maybe Maan has had such a rude character, but the way you have portrayed Geet, it certainly doesnot suit her to take such an extremely harsh action. She may try other means, ignore, refuse,reject. She has been a gentle and submissive kind to Maan from the beginning of the story. After her painful life, she might have become a strong woman - but in no case will she have such a heart-breaking attitude- it contrasts with her character portrayal..just my two pence.


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