FOREVER MINE- A KRIYAANSH FF- A FINAL NOTE (PG 78) - Page 51

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow I love ur writing. I read a bit of or FF earlier but then kinda lost track. Today read the entire FF once again and I'm floored with ur writing. The way u describe their emotions is awesome and mind blowing. Pls update soon and pls PM me. Thanks
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I read your FF regularly. But I never got a chance to tell you that it is super duper awesome. 👏 I just love it. I connect with it so well. 👍🏼 And you have expressed it so well. And do PM me when you update next. 😊
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dude now i want to know who this competition is hahah yaar pura update un dono ka pyar ke bade mein hain and im worried about who the competition is hahah hum kriyansh fans ho hi aisa haha but loved the pyar in kriyansh tooo cute! 😳
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please update next part soon 😒
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Amazing update..I loved reading all the parts..update soon..;)
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Hey,, update it na jaldi se... W8ng 4m so long... I wish u r writing a long n sweet update of dis ff . . . . . . Haina?? ~_^
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Love takes off masks that we fear we cannot live without and know we cannot live within.

For one the mask of false hatred had been removed...

For one the mask of indifference...

For another the mask of no love..
And for the last the mask of ignorance...
St. Louis: Morning After Fresher
Rey entered college and parked his car.. He saw swayam waiting outside for him..
Rey: hey...
Swayam: um hi..
Rey: so???
Swayam: so wat????
Rey: abbey idiot hw was it????
Swayam: oh it was fine...
Rey: just fine?????
Swayam: nt really but it will be..maine sab plan kiya hai...
Rey: kya baat hai..tu bada badla badla lag raha hai...
Swayam: haan kuch tho hai..waise tu bhi badla badla sa hai..wat happend wid u??
Rey closed his eyes and rmbrd d happenings from last nit...
Swayam: kya hua aisa ki tu kho gaya..
Rey: i was lost till now i found myself yesterday..
Swayam: deep... waise i ws..
Suddenly one of d girls from dr class came up2 rey..
Girl: hey rey..kal disappear kahan hogaye the??? u din even dance wid me...
Rey: i'm so sorry had sum emergency..but next time i promise..
As he said dis he thot i'm sorry i'm making false promises kal raat ke uss dance k baad mere har cheez mere har dance pe sirf ek insaan ka haq hai..
Girl: k bye i'll see u later..
Swayam: mujhse hi nai bologi??
Girl(shocked): swayam tum kisi se wo bhi ek ladki se baat kar rahe ho??
Swayam: jab tum jaisi swt ladki hogi tho baat nai karunga kya???
Girl: wow thanks..anyway i gta go.. bye rey and BYE swayam...
Rey( SHOCKED): ok tell me honestly tu theek hai na..do u wanna see a doctor??? abhi bol i'll tk u..ur really nt well...
Swayam(laughing): i'm fine bas ye samajhle ki mere brain ka plastic sugeory hua hai...
Rey: impossible..
Swayam: wat???
Rey: main ye maan sakta hun ki brain ki plastic surgeory ho sakti hai..lekin i wont beliv dat u hav a brain..dat is impossible...
Swayam: wat?? shutup tu...
Suddenly dey heard sum1 cuming from behind singing...they turned and saw it was vicky...
Vicky: tu tu hai wahi dil ne jisse apna kaha...
Rey: ab tujhe kya hua???
Swayam: i'm guessing kal raat dropping home ka silsila bada acha tha???
Vicky(lost): hai kal raat...
Rey: ohho aisa kya hua???
Vicky(blushing): kuch nai...tu tu hai wahi dil ne jisse apna kahaan...
Rey: ye paagal hogaya h..
Saing dis he turned 2 swayam..but swayam was also lost..
Swayam(singing): deewana deewana..
Rey: i dont beliv dis tu uske gaane ka chorus ga raha hai..paagal hogaye ho kya dono..main ja raha hun bye...
Kriya: sharon tum itni upset kyun ho..plzz tell me..
Sharon: kuch nai kriya i'm fine..bas wo kal raat..
Kriya: ya sorry abt dat wo wo main ghar chal gai..i ws nt feelin well...
Sharon: hey its fine even i was nt feeling well..
They both turned away wid tears as dey rembrd the happenings of the nit...
Kriya thot y did last nt happen...wen she had never let a guy get anywer near her hw cud she let rey cum so close that nw d distance bw dem was painfull..
Suddenly neha came towards dem luking vry happy...both wiped der tears and turned to her..
Sharon: ooh sum1 luks happy...
Neha(blushing): haan wo main wo..
Kriya: achha ji haan tum wo wo kya..
Neha: arre kuch nai..waise tumhari party kaisi thi???
Sharon: um it ws fine v went home after dat..but tum batao aisa hua kya ki tum aise blush kar rahi ho...
But der conversation was cut short wen two girls passed dem..one of dem was d girll who had met d boys in d morning..
Girl: am i luking vry nice 2day???
Frend: ya u luk fine y????
Girl: yaar aaj swayam ne mujhse hi bola..imagine swayam ne..and he said i was swt...
Sharon lukd absolutely murderous...
Kriya: its ok sharon i'm sure he was jus bein nice.. itna gussa mat ho..
Girl: and u no wat rey said ki agli party main wo mere saath dance karega..imagine reyaansh singhania and me..so nice na..
Kriya lost her cool she got so angry that she crushed d papers in her hands and threw dem away...
Sharon(smiling): kuch nai kriya i'm sure he was just being nice...
Kriya: ya rit...nice my foot..
Neha: ye tum log kis cheez k bare main baat kar rahe ho???
Sharon & Kriya: gadho k barre main..
Neha: kya???
Sharon: arre kuch nai chal ab..i'm hungry canteen chale...
The three of dem walked 2 d canteen...The boys were already der..wen d girls entered they lukd up...
Vicky saw neha and gave her a blushing smile...seeing d smile she went completely red and went and sat on d next table.
Swayam saw sharon and waved a hi but she turned away and went and joined neha...
Rey and kriya kept staring at each other..both rmbrd d event from d nit..but suddenly rey rmbrd his promise and he gave her a small smile..she slowly smiled back with pain in her eyes as she rmbrd dat dis was nt her other half..Wid dis sad doubt she walked over and sat down turning her back 2 rey...
Swayam: yaar vicky yeh tho bata ki kal raat hua kya...
Sharon: neha wat exactly happened bol na..
Neha(blushing): arre kuch nai yaar..
Vicky:abbey kuch nai yaar...nothin happend..waise i need ur help..
Rey: oh really..majnu ko kabse help ki zarurat padgai...
Vicky: seriously i need ur help...
Swayam: achha bol kya chahiye...
Vicky: idea..
Rey: kya??
Vicky: haan main apni deewani ko i luv u bolna chahta hun..i wanna mk it special..
Swayam: abhi tak i luv u nai bola tho abhi tak kya kar raha tha..
Vicky: yaar wo baat bohat special hai tho specially bolna chahiye...
Swayam: oh tho ek kaam kar usse ek special expensive date pe leja...
Vicky: haan ya ek kaam karun..main usse kisis exotic location pe lejaun...
Swayam: ya mayb expensive jewellery or perfume???
Rey: shutup guys tum kitne stupid ho...itni special baat bolne k liye yeh sab nai chahiye..
Swayam: oh really tho mister phd in luvology...wat according 2 u is d perfect setting...
Neha: guys vicky bol raha tha ki usne mere liye koi surprise plan kiya hai.. and i think wo kehne wala hai dat he luvs me...wat shud i do..
Sharon: dont u luv him????
Neha: ofcourse i do..but kuch karna chahiye na mujhe...
Sharon: ya get him sumthin nice...like a cool gadget or expensive jacket..
Kriya: oh plz jab koi confess kare tho uske jawab main in sab cheezo ki zarurat nai hoti..
Sharon:oh ya and tum to hazaron baar confess kar chuki hona..itna experiance...
Vicky: achha dude tho tu bata ki main karun kya????
Rey: ok i'll tell u..
Rey gt up and turned and sat on his knees..closed his eyes...
Kriya: nai experiance nai but i feel just a few wrds a more dan enough to express hw one feels...
Neha: tho plzz kriya tell me ki main kya karun..
Kriya: simple..
She gt up turned and saw rey sitting in on his knees wid his eyes closed..She froze...all she cud do was watch him..see his hair fall into his eye..and small smile play on d corner of his lips...
Rey: I dint know hw but my every smile was for you..and my every tear was bcoz of you...
My eyes seemed 2 open 2 only see you and close to dream of you..
My life's centre shifted for you..
Then my life became you...
I searched for days to find d answer of y you????
And den i simply realised...
I LOVE YOU...
Kriya had forgotten hw to breath...dos wrds were still ringing in her ears..and tears had clouded her eyes..wat he had said was so easy 2 answer...it was rit der in her hrt..and dis time her hrt forced her 2 respond..
Kriya: I love you 2...
Rey was shocked..his body had turned numb and his knees wer giving away...the air was so still dat each breath seemed difficult 2 pull..he slowly opened his eyes..his heart was pounding so loudly dat no the sound reached him..and in his hrt her i love u 2 kept playing again and again...his emotions had bought him to a loss of words...tears silently crept dwn his cheeks...he gt up slowly...
There were a few steps differences bw dem..dey slowly walked towards each other...their souls were abt 2 unite..der dream was abt 2 cum true... They inched towards each other carefully lost in d wrld were only both of dem existed...But suddenly..
Vicky(clapping): wow dude thanks...
Rey and kriya both were awakened from der trance...der bliss... Kriya quickly turned away and went and sat dwn...
Neha: thanks kriya...but ye rey kya kar raha tha???
Kriya: um i don no...
Rey turned away wiped his tears and sat dwn...
Suddenly every1 realised it was time for class...every1 gt up..kriya ran out in a hurry and rey also left quickly...neha and vicky walked out 2 gthr but sharon and swayam stayed in der places...
Sharon thot kriya tho practice kar rahi thi neha k liye but wat was rey doing..and y did he have tears in his eyes..ye inn dono ka chakkar kya hai????wat is it dat both r so intense and alert around each other..hurt koi hota hai bura dusre ko...par fir bhi dono kyun kuch bol nai rahe??y???
Swayam thot sumthing is nt rit...rey tho vicky k liye kar raha tha par kriya jaise uski baato main kho gai..and den dat i luv u 2..like she really ment it..uski aankhon main aansu the..y?????
Both all of a sudden realised that d other one was der sitting across with d same expression..
Sharon & Swayam: kya tumhe bhi wahi lagta hai jo mujhe lagta hai????
PRECAP: The singhania's competetion auditions anounced, swayam and sharon hatch a plan, kriya broken, rey knows d truth of kriya's past...
Edited by nightrose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
update!!!!! awesome will read and write about it... 😃


Finished reading...
the proposal ...I mean i know it was for vicky that rey was saying it and was not a kriyansh proposal but😍... it was beautiful what rey says I loooved it... 😍
and the way kriya responded to it... 😲 I didnt believe she would just say it... but it was prefect... I just wish if vicky wont have broken their trance state... it would have been awesome... but i guess what happens happens for the best... so yayay... all in all loved it... and thanks a lot for the pm... 🤗 looking forward to the next update...
Edited by nityaa02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it. Amazing update. Especially theheart touching unintended confession and the response.

(aisa lag rha tha ki aankhon ke saamne ho rha hai)

Plz unite them quickly. Can't see them hurt like this. And precap mein fir suspense.

Waiting for next. Plz update quickly

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