FOREVER MINE- A KRIYAANSH FF- A FINAL NOTE (PG 78) - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

First of all awesome update loved it.

Just one help though normally mujhe tumhare saare intro samajh aa jate hain and am able to relate it to all characters(don't know whether i do it right or wrong. But i love doing it as uske liye deep sochna pata hai) but for this intro i am confused kaunsa kiske liye tha. Plzzz can u tell which one was intended for whom. plzzz

hey sure and thanks 4 reading so carefully..

For one the mask of false hatred had been removed...

This 1 is 4 swayam bcoz he shows his dislike which is actually luv
For one the mask of indifference...
This 4 sharon bcoz she has till nw tried 2 show she dosnt really cr in 4 nt of every1 wen it actually kills her..
For another the mask of no love..
rey till nw had shown d world his luv is 4 no1 but himself..and he also tries to show dat 2 kriya but it dosnt wrk..
And for the last the mask of ignorance...
Kriya still shows like she dosnt know wat she wants wen d answer is simple and dat is rey..
hope u gt it nw and dat u lik it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...dat was awsummm...every line of rey while giving teaching of proposal to vicky is sooo romantic dat mai b soch ri thi ki I LUV U 2 bol du...hahaha...bt jokes apart its too touchy

n sudden respose of kriya awww...kriya loves him vry much...y..y...y rey y r u doing dis...yeah i knw da reason bt...its too touchy update...THNX ALOT FOR SUCH SWEET N ROMANTIC UPDATE...thnx alot!!

n thnx 4 pm...n plsss update nxt part soon...plsss
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nightrose

hey sure and thanks 4 reading so carefully..

For one the mask of false hatred had been removed...

This 1 is 4 swayam bcoz he shows his dislike which is actually luv
For one the mask of indifference...
This 4 sharon bcoz she has till nw tried 2 show she dosnt really cr in 4 nt of every1 wen it actually kills her..
For another the mask of no love..
rey till nw had shown d world his luv is 4 no1 but himself..and he also tries to show dat 2 kriya but it dosnt wrk..
And for the last the mask of ignorance...
Kriya still shows like she dosnt know wat she wants wen d answer is simple and dat is rey..
hope u gt it nw and dat u lik it..




Thank u so much.

I thot it like this.

For one the mask of false hatred had been removed..kriya(she wanted to hate rey but cudnt like in last post)

For one the mask of indifference... i thot this for sharon (swayam didn't matter)

For another the mask of no love.. swayam(showed that he didn't love any1)

And for the last the mask of ignorance... rey(boz he wanted to ignore the possibility of kriya loving his shadow and not him).

But i was hell confused(kyunki reasons actually match nhi ho rhe the na). Thank u for rectifying

wanted tosend thru pm. but it not going thru pm. thank u so much for replying😊


Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow . . . . It was MEGICAL . . . . . Just loved d proposal scene... Emotions were flowing in d right direction... Nd swaron got it,, hope they can do it good 4 dem...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24




Thank u so much.

I thot it like this.

For one the mask of false hatred had been removed..kriya(she wanted to hate rey but cudnt like in last post)

For one the mask of indifference... i thot this for sharon (swayam didn't matter)

For another the mask of no love.. swayam(showed that he didn't love any1)

And for the last the mask of ignorance... rey(boz he wanted to ignore the possibility of kriya loving his shadow and not him).

But i was hell confused(kyunki reasons actually match nhi ho rhe the na). Thank u for rectifying

wanted tosend thru pm. but it not going thru pm. thank u so much for replying😊


no problem dear...wrds r sumthing any1 can read and understand wat dey lik...
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply stunning..especially the proposal..it touched my heart somewhere..keep up the good work as always..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow very very well written...love it...pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm and amazing update :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsme update..
loved d way dey almost confesed dere love for each other..
it was so mEgical..
m waiting eagerly for d next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Marvellous! Plz pm me the nxt part. Plz.

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