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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was an awesome update, very sweet part. I was blushing through out d part. loved it Pra.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww Pra awesome awesome part loved it 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

oooh la la pra ☺️

what an update yaar.. ☺️
maza aa gya *i(n abhis tone )when he was drunk that time the way he said it* 😆
again i cant quote any perticular thing..
*ahem ahem*
coz i love AN s hot ,passionate, wild, naughty scenes u knw it very well dont you 😉😳🤣
and i love how abhi utilises all the time he has alone wid nikki ☺️ he is so so hot n nikki is hotter..
i dnt knw wether i am suppose to say all this here..🤣 but i cant help it..
i love AN passionate scene as much as i love their fights🤣
under 18 ppl pls dnt mind😉 pls dnt read ma commnt 😉🤣
so where was i? ya.. hot n *ahem* sexy update😉😳
But ye dil mange more... aha 😉🤣
m really the most besharam reader over here in ur thread i guess.. but i dnt care🤣
m like that only *ahem* only when it comes to ma AN😉😳
i love abhi nikki sid scenes.. so fun to read abhis explanation about how he fell for nikki..
n trust me.. they are ma absolute fav.. n kabbadi scene was indid the first.. the way he lookd at nikki omg.. it was so obvious that he has falln for her from his face anyone could make it out.. 😳
i like abhi -sid relation 😳
Abhi quickly got off his chair and tapped Sid's head good humouredly , silently conveying to him that everything was fine and there was no need to worry ..(remind me when sid hugd abhi when he was all alone crying brokn hrt. abhi is a grt brotha😃)
its diffclt to chose one but still ma fav para is...
Every time you walked by me , every time you looked at me with that naughtiness in your eyes , every time you challenged me ,every time you argued with me , every single time , we had sparks fly between us , sparks that were too much for me to ignore, sparks that could only tell me how I was hopelessly going to fall in love with you . Sparks were always flying and sparks are flying right now too . Don't you see them ? A spark here '" , he said and moved the inside of his palm over her bare midriff with a deliberate slowness only to make an abrupt stopover on her navel , as Nikki's mouth opened in a gasp and she frantically reached out for his arm to steady herself.
"A spark here ," , he said smiling softly , already thrilled with her reaction and caressed her cheek , again with the same deliberate sluggishness and then got back to caressing her midriff , as her eyes closed and another moan , that he found extremely alluring , escaped from her mouth. "And! A big one right here ." , he said , now caressing her lips with his thumb and then bending down to kiss them . ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏
lovely writing pra.. love abhis explaination n ahem ahem gestures too 😉😳😆
and i love the naval part *ahem ahem *☺️ i mean u knw.. ok ok fine i love that i found that very hot.. 😛😆🤣 so intimate 😉 ok m besharam cant help it pls dnt kill me🤣
jo such hai wo hai na.. 😛 i cant lie na😉😳😆🤣
last movie part was funny..😆
but so sweet of abhi n sid to agree n sit evn for 10 minutes jus to make nikki happy😳
ya wow i got another point here..
pls give us AN's honymoon parts too.. 😉😳as abhi hasnt taken her for honymoonn🤣
wow m so smart that way u can extend the ff for some more parts😉😳 i love me yaar m so intelligent😆😆🤣 kidin..
but aww i love last para.. nikki peacefully sleepin in abhis arms😳😳 cho chwett,, lovely n adorable..
in short i love this update to the core..
n i cant chose one part..
i love whole update to bits..
n thank u sooo much coz u were so so bussy but stilll u managed to put the part up that too very hot part 😳😉😆
waiting for next..
n i hope u consider ma request of giving honymoon part 😉😳😆🤣
lots of love
-cherry (the besharam evil) 😈🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

@Cherry , I was kidding dear . You are our sweet and naughty girl . yes , the storyline was only upto Part 21 , but I still wrote there more parts . Sigh ... Yes your comments are even better than Seinfield , Office , Sarabhai and EVerybody loves Raymond (all my favorite comedy shows) put together dear . Thanks a ton and here is the first of the three parts , all dedicated to you.

@pink- omg ☺️ i love you pra 🤗 thak u so so so so much.. ur a chweet hrt muaah!!
yes m like that only .. funny 😉😳😆 n i love it when ma comments make u this happy 😃 pls dnt say thanx n all.. coz thank you for giving us such an ANlicious hot passionate parts☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

@Nikki , thanks my dear

@Trish , awww ! Thanks sweetie 😊

@Jibsi , hello and thanks and hope you had a good Eid😊

@hemvb and ashred , thanks

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

oooh la la pra ☺️

what an update yaar.. ☺️
maza aa gya *i(n abhis tone )when he was drunk that time the way he said it* 😆
again i cant quote any perticular thing..
*ahem ahem*
coz i love AN s hot ,passionate, wild, naughty scenes u knw it very well dont you 😉😳🤣
and i love how abhi utilises all the time he has alone wid nikki ☺️ he is so so hot n nikki is hotter..
i dnt knw wether i am suppose to say all this here..🤣 but i cant help it..
i love AN passionate scene as much as i love their fights🤣
under 18 ppl pls dnt mind😉 pls dnt read ma commnt 😉🤣
so where was i? ya.. hot n *ahem* sexy update😉😳
But ye dil mange more... aha 😉🤣
m really the most besharam reader over here in ur thread i guess.. but i dnt care🤣
m like that only *ahem* only when it comes to ma AN😉😳
i love abhi nikki sid scenes.. so fun to read abhis explanation about how he fell for nikki..
n trust me.. they are ma absolute fav.. n kabbadi scene was indid the first.. the way he lookd at nikki omg.. it was so obvious that he has falln for her from his face anyone could make it out.. 😳
i like abhi -sid relation 😳
Abhi quickly got off his chair and tapped Sid's head good humouredly , silently conveying to him that everything was fine and there was no need to worry ..(remind me when sid hugd abhi when he was all alone crying brokn hrt. abhi is a grt brotha😃)
its diffclt to chose one but still ma fav para is...
lovely writing pra.. love abhis explaination n ahem ahem gestures too 😉😳😆
and i love the naval part *ahem ahem *☺️ i mean u knw.. ok ok fine i love that i found that very hot.. 😛😆🤣 so intimate 😉 ok m besharam cant help it pls dnt kill me🤣
jo such hai wo hai na.. 😛 i cant lie na😉😳😆🤣
last movie part was funny..😆
but so sweet of abhi n sid to agree n sit evn for 10 minutes jus to make nikki happy😳
ya wow i got another point here..
pls give us AN's honymoon parts too.. 😉😳as abhi hasnt taken her for honymoonn🤣
wow m so smart that way u can extend the ff for some more parts😉😳 i love me yaar m so intelligent😆😆🤣 kidin..
but aww i love last para.. nikki peacefully sleepin in abhis arms😳😳 cho chwett,, lovely n adorable..
in short i love this update to the core..
n i cant chose one part..
i love whole update to bits..
n thank u sooo much coz u were so so bussy but stilll u managed to put the part up that too very hot part 😳😉😆
waiting for next..
n i hope u consider ma request of giving honymoon part 😉😳😆🤣
lots of love
-cherry (the besharam evil) 😈🤣

Cherry , I am still not in my best spirits to respond to your comment sweetie but i'll try 😉
See I read it again and I m again on the road to become a wreck. Haa haa , I haven't blushed like this even when I was writing all this stuff😊
Yes , I too feel A started falling for N in that kabaddi match and he was so good and natural in that scene , damn ! sigh...
Abhi , Nikki and Sid scenes are a pleasure to write to me too . Their characters come together so well . Glad you liked the head tapping gesture from Abhi . I loved tht part too and yes A is a good brother and he and Sid have a nice modern day brotherly love .
And the lines in red ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ (See I am a complete wreck now ) and I'll try and add to this comment later . Till then thanks so much for this naughty and sassy comment . A big hug to you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry pra i am running so low on time today but i promise to write you back in few days about your last two upates.. i have so much to say... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

sorry pra i am running so low on time today but i promise to write you back in few days about your last two upates.. i have so much to say... :)

Hi Pri 😊. Glad to see you .
I had almost forgotten abt this thread ...
And no issues dear . Will wait for your comments( of course that goes without saying) . Not sure when I'll login nxt though .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Cherry , I am still not in my best spirits to respond to your comment sweetie but i'll try 😉

See I read it again and I m again on the road to become a wreck. Haa haa , I haven't blushed like this even when I was writing all this stuff😊
Yes , I too feel A started falling for N in that kabaddi match and he was so good and natural in that scene , damn ! sigh...
Abhi , Nikki and Sid scenes are a pleasure to write to me too . Their characters come together so well . Glad you liked the head tapping gesture from Abhi . I loved tht part too and yes A is a good brother and he and Sid have a nice modern day brotherly love .
And the lines in red ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ (See I am a complete wreck now ) and I'll try and add to this comment later . Till then thanks so much for this naughty and sassy comment . A big hug to you.

u really dont have to say anything baby 😛
i am glad m the one who brought out this blushing side of yourz infront of ur readers 😉😳😆
u dnt have any idea wat you have done to me.. wid this update of urs..
i m complete goner🤪 😉😆
and u dnt know how good m feeling to see this lil seriuos and matured pra blushing like this.. 😳
m too good.. yaar muhaaz to me 😉😆 kiding..
n glad u enjoy ma comments so much.. n they have this effect on ya😉😆😳
i love ur ff n writing more more n more day by day..❤️
lots of hugs kises n love
cherry😳
Edited by cherry_an - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

u really dont have to say anything baby 😛

i am glad m the one who brought out this blushing side of yourz infront of ur readers 😉😳😆
u dnt have any idea wat you have done to me.. wid this update of urs..
i m complete goner🤪 😉😆
and u dnt know how good m feeling to see this lil seriuos and matured pra blushing like this.. 😳
m too good.. yaar muhaaz to me 😉😆 kiding..
n glad u enjoy ma comments so much.. n they have this effect on ya😉😆😳
i love ur ff n writing more more n more day by day..❤️
lots of hugs kises n love
cherry😳

Cherry thank you for keeping some activity on this thread 😆 or else I completely tend to forget it .
Yes your comments make me blush 😊 I wont deny that
Yes you are too good and very entertaining :))
Thank you sweetie for all your lovely words.
Lots of Hugs and kisses to you tooo

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