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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely!!!
A fun-filled update
Enjoyed the whole song sequence...it was fun
the song is one of my fav's
loved Geet's nakhre 😆
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loved it
the dance was awesome
waiting to see maan's surprise
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awsem update sweta is so evil
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Chapter 18:





Finally the engagement of sudha n yash is completed. All of them enjoyed a lot. But swetha is not happy with maan n geet. She is burning with jealousy n anger.

Swetha (st) : why this is happening to me why?? maine maan ko impress karne ke liye sab kuch kiya par usne meri taraf dekha bhi nahi. Aur wo geet sab log usi ki tareef karte hain. Main kya galti ki? Nahi geet maan sirf mera hain sirf maan. He will be mine soon. This time I wont spare u geet. Agar tumne maan ki ghareeb aane ki koshish bhi ki tho main tumko chodoongi nahi. Ha geet main tumko chodoongi nahi. I will go to any extent to make him mine. She had a evil smirk n changed her dress n dossed off.


In the HM all the elders went to their respective rooms. It was very tiring day for all of them. All the children r talking to each other. They r in no mood to go to bed.


Hey I will come now u all continue told di.

They just nodded n she left from there.

Di went to vijaya n anand's room n knocked the door.

Yes come in.

sudha entered their room n smiled at them.

Arey sudha beta tum aao told anand.

She went n sat beside him. Just then vijaya came out of washroom n saw sudha. She smiled at her n sat beside her.

Sudha di kept her head on vijaya's lap. Vijaya caressing her hair n asked kya hua beta.

Kuch nahi chachi aaj main bohot khush hu.

Ha beta hum bhi aaj bohot khush hain. Hamari badi beti ki sagai jo hua hain.

Sudha got up n sat on her knees in front of her chachi n chachu.

Beta yeh tum kya kar rahi ho asked anand.

Kuch nahi chachu main aapko thanku kehne ayi hu. Mere liye aapne itna kuch kiya. Jab main aapko yash ke baare mein kaha tho aap muje itna support kiye the. Aur aaj jab mein aapki aankhon mein mere liye itna khush dekha. Muje aise lagta hain ki aap mere chachu chachi nahi balki mere mama papa hain.

Vijaya made her stand n hugged her. Kyun hum teri mama papa nahi hain.

Arey aisa nahi chachi mera wo matlab nahi tha.

Pagli humare tum aur geet ek hi hain. U both r my daughters. Samjhi.

Sudha bowed n told ji.

They all laughted.

Acha chachi aap tak gaye honge aaram kijiye main chalti hu. Good night chachi, good night chachu.

Anand kissed her forehead n told we r very happy for u beta. Always be happy. Good night.

Sudha smiled at them n left the room. She went to the hall n saw all r watching movie. They r very much immersed in the movie no one saw her standing. She went n switched off the movie. All of them glared at her as if she cared.

Chalo chalo sab log its very late.

Di tv on karo. We r watching movie bohot interesting hain.

Ha ha interesting? Kitni baar dekha tumne.

Geet made a baby face n told plz di.

Kuch nahi kal tumko college jaana hain.

Plz di. But di is not at all listening.

Di main jiju ko complaint karoongi. Bechara jiju how will he tolerate u? I pity him.

Di made golgappe face went to her n twisted her ears

geeet kya kaha tumne. U pity him ha?

All others r laughing by seeing both of them.

Di its paining main mazak kar rahi thi. Chodo na di.

Di left her immediately geet took the remote n switched on the tv. Geet sticked her tongue out at di. She just smiled st her childish antics. All of them enjoyed the movie. After that all of them bid good night n went to their respective rooms. But krishna stopped maan

kya hua yaar.

Muje tumse kuch baat karni hain.

Ha bolo.

Yaha nahi garden mein chalte hain.

Thik hain chalo.

They both went to garden n settled on the bench.

Bata kya baat hain asked maan.

Maan do u love geet?

Maan is stunned bt his question. He dont know what to tell. Krishna is his best friend so he decided to tell the truth. Maan told seriously

ha krishna main geet se pyaar karta hu. Par muje darr tha ki geet mujse pyaar karti ya nahi.

Matlab? Tumne abi takh geet ko propose nahi kiya?

Nahi yaar. How can I without knowing her feeling

par..

arey meri pori baat tho suno.

Acha bolo.

Muje darr lagta ki geet mujse pyaar karti ya nahi par kuch din pehle main geet aur shanti ki baat suna tha, then I came to know that geet too loves me.

Oh wow dude thats great. I am very happy for both of u. I know u will keep my gudiya happy.

They both hugged each other. Thanks dude.

Waise yeh batao when u r proposing her?

Hmmm I have planned for a surprise but pata nahi kab.

Oh dude dont waste time. Do it as soon as possible.

Ok yaar.

But suddenly they heard a voice from back

acha bachu.

They both turned back n saw di staring at them.

Actually di got a call from yash. She thought of sitting in the garden n talk with him. But when she heard maan n krishna talking about geet she told yash that she will call him later. She cut the call n listening to them. But maan n krishna r so immersed in their talk that they didnt observe sudha standing there. With the sudden voice they turned back n shocked to see di there.

Both: di aap yaha?

Kyun jab aap log yaha baat kar sakte hain main nahi aa sakti.

They both smiled nervously n told nahi di aisa nahi hain. Hum tho bas aise hi pooch rahe the told maan.

Di went to them n asked tho kya baat ho raha hain she asked with fake seriousness but they both thought she is really mad at them.

Di wo..wo..

arey bolo.

Kuch nahi di told maan.

Acha.. she kept her hands on her hips.

They both r silent di just laughted at them n told

arey maan jaldi meri behen ko propose karna.

Maan head shot up by listening to her.

di...

kya hua? N she laughed loud. Pagal main bohot khush hu. I know u r best for her. She will be very happy n I know u will keep her happy.

Di aap tho muje dara diya. Huh!! maan sighed.

Maan hugged di sideways. Thanku di. I thought u r angry on me.

Arey nahi balki main bohot khush hu. Maan, geet hamara princess hain. Promise me that u will always keep her happy.

Maan broke the hug n hold her hands n told

di promise I will keep her happy. She is my life di. Uske aankhon mein kabhi bhi aansu nahi aane dunga. Yeh mera waada hain di.

Krishna n di r happy listening to maan.

Hmm thik hain ab jao tum log said di.

Di main aapse kuch poochna chata hu.

Batao na maan kya baat hain.

wo.. actually main geet ke liye ek surprise plan ki. Uske liye hum sabko bombay jaana padega.

Hum sabko kyun?

Di hum mom dad mama papa ko kya kehte hain. Isiliye we will tell them that we all r going for holiday for 1 week.

Par...

plz di aur waise bhi jiju ko bhi kehte hain. Wo bhi ate hain tho u can also enjoy there.

Yash? Pata nahi wo ayega ya nahi.

Di hum jiju se baat karte hain.

Thik hain aap logon ki marzi. But careful dont let elders doubt about this trip.

No di we r sure. Krishna hain na wo sambhalega.

Oh hello beech main muje phasa diya.

Kya yaar apne dost ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte.

Ha ha main ban gaya bali ka bakra.

Kya yaar? Told maan n made a sad face.

Acha aise shakal mat banao. Main convince karoonga.

Muje pata hain yaar. Ok di bohot raat ho chuki hain. Chalo andar chalte hain.

Chalo. They 3 bid good night n went to their respective rooms.

Inside maan's room he lay down on the bed.

Maan (st) : oh geet now I cant wait. Be ready for surpeise geet. Main tumare aankhon mein khushi dekhna chata hu jab main tumko meri dil ki baat kahonga. Isiliye tho yeh sab planning chal raha hain. Bus geet sirf 2 days. Be ready for the surprise geet waise I am more excited. I want to see your reaction. Oh god yeh time itna deere kyun chal raha hain.

With the thoughts of geet maan dossed off.


Next day morning all r in the hall discussing about the marriage of di n yash. Just them krishna n maan entered there.

Arey krishna bolo whispered maan.

Tum pehle start karo told krishna.

Geet observed both of them n asked

oyy aap dono thik hain na.

They immediately turned to her n told ha hum thik hain. Tumne aisa kyun poocha.

Kuch nahi par y u both r murmering.

Geet kaha na kuch nahi tum chup raho thodi der told maan.

Geet rolled her eyes n told tum dono pagal ho gaye ho.

Di came to them n whispered maan yeh kya kar rahe ho tum. Stop fighting n tell the matter.

Di ab aap bhi asked geet.

Now krishna lost his temper n told stop it. Aunty uncle muje ap logon sekuch baat karni hain.

Ha bolo beta.

wo.. we all met after a long time na so we thought of going for holiday for 1 week. Plz uncle dont say no.

humko tho koi problem nahi hain. Geet n sudha is it ok for u?

Dad yeh aap kaise sawal pooch rahe ho. Ofcourse we r ready said excited geet.

Anand smiled at his daughter n told ok then when u r planning to go?

Today evening papa told maan.

Waise bro where we r going asked karthik.

Bombay chinna said maan.

Wow.. bombay maan we wil go to beach na? Asked geet.

Ofcourse geet we will go n ENJOY there. He stressed the word enjoy.

Thik hain di chalo hum packing karte hain.

Ok geet chalo.

Meanwhile sudha called yash

hello sudha bolo.

Yash muje tumse kuch poochna hain.

Ha bolo. Koi prob tho nahi hain na.

Nahi koi prob nahi. Actually we all planned for outing for bombay. So tum aa sakte ho?

When u all r going?

Today evening.

Sudha I have meeting u all go I will join u all 2morow evening.

Sudha is disappointed n told oh ok.

Hey dont be sad darling tomorrow I will come for sure. Plz

ok fine, kal pakka na?

Ha darling pakka.

Ok bye. Have to do packing.

Ok bye.

She cut the call. Di n geet did their packing. It took almost 3 hours for packing. Bechari di tired coz geet is rejecting all the dresses.

Finally they completed their packing.

Here boys also completed their packing. All of them got ready had their lunch.

After sometime they all left for airport. Krishna already hotel rooms for all of them. They reached airport.


Precap: 1st day in bombay. Maan's surprise, geet's reaction.

Yash n sudha date.

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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yippeee me first :D
Woww jyoti loved it
Awesome update
Aww di is so sweet love her
Love karihna :)
I hope maan jaldi se geet ko propose karde..and phir lots of romance
Superb update
Thanks for pm and continue soon

Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Luvd ds part..
so maan's surprise s in mumbai..
waiting for dat..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
banner is superb
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏Great part dear... And beautiful banner too...😊👏
Edited by soniya_lovesu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...waiting so wagerly for the date...Maan ne pura plan fit kar diya hai
banner is awesome too

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