MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 42

Originally posted by: neha5058

fab part jyoti...great idea of maan...he got her busy in talking they reached to college...he is so caring...
so now geet has started to know her feelings towards maan...
maan control on urself...jab dekho control kho dete ho...hehehe...

uff jyoti,,u made my cheeks red...😳

waiting for next...and thanks tat u liked the songs..if you want more then i'll give you...😊 and

happy new year...

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Awww...maaneet moments are simply amazing!!!

This Maan and Geet are very adorable!!

Geet realising her feelings.

Precap now who is this unwanted guest??!!

Originally posted by: spvd

Happy New Year dear...

till part 15
nice story...
so as of the present time Geet is away from her family for certain reasons...
Maan and Get love each other...
and Maan is in Geet's place and is planning to bring her back...
the past scenes all were so nice...
Geet's cousin has crush on Maan...
cont soon dear and pm me...

Originally posted by: rukshana2

i love it dear thank you dear

Originally posted by: Jassi_preety

COOL...JUST GET TO KNOW ABT YOUR FF...PLS KEEP UPDATING SOON...AND PM AS WELL

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

thanks ka silsila khatm ho gaya ho toh ek update milega?? 😛

part 15: page 63

chapter 16

recap : geet n pari had a talk in canteen n geet came to know about her feelings. But she is afraid what will be maan's reaction so she decided to go home. But geet dont know that maan heard their convo.

Geet decided to go home but remembered that today yash parents r coming to HM. So she directly went to KM. Once she entered home she sat on the couch n called shanti. Shanti picked the phone

hello geet bolo.

Kaha ho tum.

Main ghar par hi hu. I am working on my sheets.

Ohh.. aur kitna time lagega.

Hmm 1 hour mein ho jayega. Kyun koi kaam hain.

Acha thik hain. Tum abi KM aajao. Work baad mein karna. Plzz yaar tumse ek important baat karni hain.

Acha thik hain. Main aarahi hu. Geet koi prob tho nahi hain na.

First u come yaar I will tell u.

ufff.. ok baba coming. Bye.

Bye.

Meanwhile, in the college canteen as maan saw geet going back he came there n saw pari smiling at him.

Hasna band karogi asked maan to pari.

Ohooo maan just stop it yaar. I told u rite ab dekho.

Nahi yaar dekho she looked so pale when she left from here. What if she is feeling bad.

Nothing maan, pehle aisa hi hota hain. She will understand for sure.

Ek min ek min tum dono kya baat kar rahe ho? Asked rohan

both maan n pari burst out into laughter by seeing his confused face.

Now rohan got really pissed off.

Stop it u 2 just tell me.

Ahh nothing dude told maan.

Pari tum bolo asked rohan.

Ufff I will tell but listen carefully ok?

Y r u scaring me?

She just smiled at him n told ok listen hamara maan ko.. n she turned to maan n saw him smiling.

Arey bolo kya hua hain isko he asked curiously.

Hamara maan ko pyaar ho gaya hain finally pari told.

WHAT??? came 3 voices

pari n maan turned back n saw rahul n sam's shocked faces n here rohan too same condition.

Kya yeh sach hain asked rahul.

Ha yaar maan is in love said pari.

Kaun hain wo bechari?? asked rohan in a teasng voice.

Aur kaun its none other than GEET.

Rohan n rahul hugged maan n told congrats dude. We r very happy for u n geet.

Thanks buddy.

Sam n pari too hugged him n told congrats maan.

Jaldi geet se bata dena told pari.

Hmmm I want to see her happy. I will make that day special for her.

All r very happy for maan. They started teasing him. After sometime maan decided to go home. Today he is so so happy.

In KM:

geet is waiting for shanti. Shanti came ther after half an hour. She came inside n saw geet lost in some thoughts. Shanti called her

geet kya hua? Tum thik tho ho na?

Geet came out of her thoughts. She hugged him tight.

Shanti shanti I am very happy dear.

Shanti too hugged her back n asked kya hua yaar?

At the same time maan too came to KM n saw both the friends happy. When he was about to go inside but stopped in his tracks by listening to geet.

Geet broke the hug n told

shanti wo.. wo.. geet closed her eyes n said in one go.

Shanti I am in love.

Shanti widened her eyes wide in shock

k.. k.. kya?

Yes yes I am in love.

What? How? When? Pehle yeh batao who is that? Bolo jaldi bolo.

Arey shanti tum pehle baito.

Yeh sab chodo. First tell me who is that guy? asked shanti in serious tone.

Geet sensed seriousness in her voice n told

shanti wo.. I love maan. Yes tumara maan bhai. I love him said geet seriously.

Uff.. bechari shanti ko shock pe shock aaj😲. Shanti sat on the couch with a thud. But she is very happy for her friend as well as her bhai. She jumped in joy n hugged geet tight.

Wow.. geet I am very very happy for both of u. omg... tum aur maan bhai I cant believe this.

Geet too hugged her tight.

Here outside the maan who is listening to all this is on cloud 9. he cant believe this his geetu, his mishty, his princess loves him. She is very happy n maan too. Today she made his day. When she left the college he thought that she is upset but now ' he just want to take her in his arms, hug her tight, n take her away from this world. But poor him cant do it now. He want make that day special for him.

Inside KM they both broke the hug.

Geet tumne bhai ko bataya?

Inside geet n outside maan both made baby face n nodded in a NO.

muje darr lag raha hain shanti.

Darr kyun??

what if maan dont love me said geet with a sad face.

Here outside maan want to bang his head somewhere.

Maan (st) : arey nahi nahi geet tum aisa socho bhi mat. I love u darling. U r my life n soul. Isiliye yeh sab bateein tum socho bhi mat. Waise dont worry geet kuch hi din. U will be mine forever. Yes geet u r mine. Maan ki geet.

Inside the room :

Geet aisa mat socho yaar. Muje lagta hain ki maan bhai bhi tumse pyaar karta hain. The way he cares for u, jab tum pareshan hoti ho na tab maan bhai ko bilkul acha nahi lagta. I saw him worried for u. so I think he too loves u.

geet made a innocent face n asked sachi??

shanti just hugged her friend n nodded a yes.

Here outside maan too nodded in a yes.

Geet ab yeh sab chodo waise ab tum meri bhabhi ban gayi ho.

Geet blushed furiously by hearing this.

Arey wah.. meri geet ko sharmana bhi ata hain. Hayeee am I dreaming??

geet slapped her playfully chup kar tu.. tumara turn bhi ata hain. Tab main tumko chodongi nahi.

Maan (st) : shanti tum kya jaanti ho meri geet ko. Muje poocho main bolti hu. Jab wo sharmati hain na kitni cute lagegi. Hain na shanti?? oh her red cheeks I just want to kiss them. Control maan control. Huh!! geet now I cant wait more. Be ready for surprise geet.

Maan happily happily left from there. Geet n shanti continued their talking session.

Meanwhile in HM:

All the elders have setteled on the couch.

Namaste panditji. Baitiye.

Ji anand ji.

Anand ji agle shukruvaar(friday) ko ek bohot acha muhrat hain sagai ke liye.

Iss friday itni kam samai told anand.

Ha beta ek baar socho.

Panditji humko koi bhi problem nahi hain told rishab.

Par... when anand is about to speak.

Anand hum sab hain na. Sab kuch ho jayega assured rishab.

Soo anand ji aapko koi problem nahi hain na? Asked mr. malhotra.

Nahi humko manzoor hain said anand n smiled.

They both hugged each other.

Thik hain handa saab n khurana saab hum friday ko milte hain.

They left from there.

All r very happy for the engagement n they immediately called all the children n told the news. All r very very happy.

At evening all the children(maan,geet,karthik,sudha n shanti) came to HM. They enjoyed their evening by teasing di a lot. They all r enjoying sitting in the hall.

They all decided to do engagement shopping the next day. When they all r about to go for dinner they heard a voice from the entrance.

Hello everyone came a voice.

All of them turned towards the entrance. Elders r very happy to see that person. They all smiled at parson.

He came inside n took their blessings n wished them.

Hello aunties n uncles. How r u??

we r fine beta. After a long time asked vijaya n pooja.

He hugged both of them n told wat to do aunty I was busy but I missed u all a lot. So I came.

Acha kiya tumne aake.

He just smiled.

Here maan, geet, karthik, sudha r just staring at him seriously n anger visible in their face.

He gulped his saliva n smiled at them nervously.

Hi guys that person told n smiled at them. But no use.

Hey guys dont u wish him wo.. itne durr se aya bechara told rishab controlling his laugh.

Papa aap plzz iska support may kijiye told geet seriously.

Precap: poor that guy... y they all r angry... 😡

finally engagement. 😃😊

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