FF:Pains and Pleasures (chapter 5 done)

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I'm writing the same story in winx club online hope you guys like it i've made the character sketches not all characters sketches only some more will be introduced later a guy for every gal


Pains and pleasures

Introduction chapter:


Two brothers Asif and Faisal both go to USA to study .Asif married a woman there called Margo and settled there leaving his family alone on the other hand the younger brother Faisal came back to PK and married a beautiful woman called Mahnoor .Asif faced a life of poverty while Faisal lived a prosperous life.
Faisal had three daughters the eldest Mahira, then Neelam and the youngest Roshna while Asif had four daughters Eldest Arsheen, then Nausheen, then Ambreen and the youngest Shaheen.Mahnoor was very beautiful and kind woman who was pure while Margo was an evil woman who gave Asif troubles but their daughters went after their father and uncle not their mother.
Faisal and Mahnnor then die in an airplane crash leaving their daughters alone to their huge property and buisness the greedy Margo had an idea she came to PK bluffing to her husband that they were going to support the girls at time of need but instead she wanted their money Asif happy at the sudden change of his wife agreed to go .The girls were thought of kindly at first but then Margo's true colors started showing
the girls into Margo's cruel hands who treated them like slaves in their own mansion but Margo's daughters befriended them and help the girls through this and then defeat their mother in her evil schemes

Faisal Noorani man who respects his values he was handsome kind and caring.He was a perfect man.He loved his daughters and his wife very much

Mahnoor Norani a very beautiful and pure woman who loved everyone and was loved by all.She was the sweetest person ever and her daughters admired and idolized her .She loved her husband and daughters very much


Mahira is Faisal and Mahnoor's eldest daughter she is very quiet and shy after her parents death she completely became silent and tears were always in her eyes she always listened to aunt Margo's taunts and kept quiet she did every work and never complained


Neelam is the second born who was very fiesty and playful but after her parents death she became rude and mean to everyone except her sisters.She became cold and died inside she was daddy's little girl and she misses her dad with all her heart.She will kick someone but.t if they call her orphan

Roshna who is the youngest of her sisters.She was her mom and dad's little angel she was loved the most both by her parents and sisters as well and treated very lovingly after Faisal and Mahnoor's death Roshna faced the most difficulty and was treated the worst by aunt Margo but she spread joys around and smiled though she was dying inside


Asif Noorani who was Faisal's older brother.He was in love with Margo but after he married her he thought she was wrong but love stil kept them together till the end of his life

Margo is Asif's wife she once loved Asif but going into poverty made her cruuel now all she wants is money and she can do anything for it She is cruel,evil,mean and just selfish
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Arsheen The eldest daughter of Asif and Margo, she at first ddn't like PK but now loves it .She is kind,beautiful and caring with a beautiful voice

Nausheen the second daughter she is very bookish and loves to read a lot .She is kind,beautiful and caring


Ambreen the third daughter.She was the fiirst one to befirend the girls and became besties with Roshna.She is beautiful,kind and caring

Shaheen the youngest one she barely cares about anyone and enjoys her new life in PK .She is carefree,funloving,pretty and amazing


Azfar the guy who lives next door .He is the hottest guy in the whole PK.After hearing about faisal and Mahnoor's death he befriended the girls and is now Roshna's bestie .He hates the way Margo treats the girls and wants to help them


Should i continue this story further? you decide 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i would like to read it further
please continue for me !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well than just for you chapter 2


CHAPTER # 2

Painful Memories

Roshna was sitting quietly on her bed tears falling from her eyes she was in a small dark room that was once their closet now served as a room
she watched her sisters sleep there tear strains on thier cheeks .She went to the window and looked at the full moon she remembered the time when
she was happy ,her parents were alive,they were rich and happy but then Faisal and Mahnoor died in a plane crash thus ending their happiness then aunt Margo came to their lives
she tortured them,she taunted them,she made them do all the house work,she made them servants,she beated them when they do a single mistake and made them slaves to her
Roshna bit her lower lip so she wouldn't make any noise suddenly a small pebble hit her window she o.p.e.n.e.d tthe window to see Azfar the guy who lived next door but he was more than that he was
her friend,her and her sisters only support and comfort, their only friend .He waved at her he looked very handsome in the moonlight ,she smiled and waved back ,then he called her downstairs so Roshna sneaked out
quietly into his lawn .He smiled at her first then he saw tears in her eyes "Roshna you were crying?" "yeah" she answered quietly "you know i hate to see you cry..." his attention diverted to
her hand she was burnt there "how did this h.a.p.p.e.n?" he held her delicate hand in his .Roshna winced and began crying "i burnt the food by mistake tonight so aunt Margo.." she lowered her head Azfar became furious "how dare she?"
"Azfar don't" Roshna looked up at him with tears twinkling in her eyes.Azfar hugged her as if promising to her that one day he will end this nightmare forever

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Arsheen was sitting in her room which was once Mahira's room she sighed "i don't know why mom is doing this" she rubbed her temples "i know she is very cruel to them" Nausheen sighed "Cruel doesn't even count she is much more horrible than cruel..
we should help them" Ambreen said "but mom would kill us even if we talk to them" Nausheen explained "have you seen how she is behaving with them the past four months!...Nausheen just think if we were in their place how would we feel" Ambren said with tears in her eyes
Nausheen nodded "then its settled" Arsheen began "we will beriend them" the three girls smiled just suddenly their smiles vanished again it was Shaheen "Guys its Roshna she is talking to Azfar...if mom finds out she would..." "Oh God" Ambreen gasped

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Roshna moved back she saw there was some tension on Azfar's face "what?" she asked

"ROSHNA FAISAL NOORANI" Roshna jumped at aunt Margo's voice "a-aunt Mar-rg-go" she could barely speak

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so you guys think i should continue do comment please i would love to know your views

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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz continue

and count me in for pm😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sure and thank you so much!!
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CHAPTER # 2
Cruelty...

Roshna gulped as aunt Margo glared at her with daggers for eyes and then at Azfar she was actually scared that whether if the girls fell in love and got married she won't be able to steal their property and money as easily thats why she hated Azfar as he had befriended the three of them and to worsen the matters for Margo he was the so of a huge buisness tycoon so he is definately very rich

"go to your room..." she said at first quietly but then yelled "GO INSIDE YOU PATHETIC ORPHAN!!" Roshna shivered from inside but Azfar came in front of her protecting her "You can't talk to her like this!" Azfar looked at aunt Margo angrilly "Don't tell what i can do" Aunt Margo gave him 'the look' again but Azfar didn't care Roshna felt a bit protected but Aunt Margo grabbed her hand and dragged her inside

Azfar on the other hand grabbed her other hand "You can't do this to her!" "i can do whatever i want she is my niece" She yelled back .Roshna looked at Azfar iving him a please let me go or i'll be in more touble look so Azfar let go sadly and she was dragged inside as if she was an animal

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She landed on the sofa she was crying in pain she looked up aunt Margo she had slapped her causing her cheek to be red and hot ,she held her cheek trying to stop her tears.Neelam and Mahira came downstairs hearing the noise,Mahira gasped and placed her hand on her mouth while Neelam ran to aunt Margo "STOP" she stood in front of her sister protecting her like an elder sister should "Don't you dare hurt my Roshi" she was furious

"What will you do Orphan?!" Margo laughed "I don't know but it won't be pretty" Neelam glared at her she was the bravest of the sisters while Mahira ran to Roshna and hugged her "You Orphans are pathetic.." Margo said spitefully .Mahira knew Margo would beat Neelam as well so she ran in front of her "Please aunt Margo ...forgive Neelam she is young and foolish...and if Roshna did a mistake please forgive her she is just a kid punish me instead i'm beging for your forgivness on behalf of my sisters"

Mahira sat next to Margo's feet and joined her hands asking for forgivness .Arsheen,Nausheen,Ambreen and Shaheen came downstairs they wanted to stop their mother but couldn't ,Arsheen bit her lower lip,Nausheen lowered her head hiding her tears while Ambreen looked at the other way spitefully and Shaheen started crying. "AAPI!!" Neelam screamed at Mahira (Aapi is a word in Urdu which means elder sister) "Don't do this!!" but Mahira snapped back "Shut up Neelu!" Neelam had tears in

her eyes now and Roshna started crying while Margo smirked "Good Orphan" she patted on Mahira's head while Mahira tried to hide her tears "They are forgiven but if i see that Azfar boy again ..." she smirked and left

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How you liked second chapter?...please do comment and tell me what you liked and what should i add or remove all opinions will be welcomed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous update...👏

I liked this concept very much...😎

You are an awesome writer...👍🏼

Thnx for PM😳

Continue soon...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG thank you sooo much

don't make me blush... i don' even count myself as a writer.😳

and sure i'll continue soon
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CHAPTER # 3


Dreamy Eyes...


Kay thnks to everyone who like and read my story thnxx guys luv you <3

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Roshna was crying while Mahira was staring out of the window and Neelam nailing the bed she tried to hold her anger and tears .Roshna spoke between sobs "I'm sorry i know its my fault.." Mahira turned to her "No Roshi its not your fault" Neelam spatted "of course it isn't but that woman...she drives me mad" Mahira got worried "hush Neelu aunt Margo might hear you" Neelam got angrier "i don't care about that woman" she said "i miss mom and dad" Roshna said quietly she had stopped crying .Mahiira sat next to Roshna on their bed and hugged her she hugged back Neelam looked at them resisting Mahira knew "Neelu Princess" she said sttretching her arms she was called this by her dad Neelam began crying and ran to her sisters they hugged one another and cried

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Next morning Mahira went to her university today was her first day she was a bit terrified she had lowered her head and walked in she felt people staring at her and heard them making fun of her clothes obviously aunt Margo kept them in a very bad condition they wore clothes that even servants don't wear but she kept walking until she bumped into someone her books fell on the floor she began picking them up not looking up until her hand came under his hand she was forced to look up into his dreamy eyes hat were sparkling she felt color rose to her cheeks what she didn't know he was looking at her the same way he was lost in her beautiful dark brown eyes .Mahira snapped herself out of the trance grabbed her things and started to go faster when she was stopped by his voice "Hi i'm Fawad Afzal" he said, Mahira turned around and replied "I'm Mahira Noorani" she said and left quickly

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Arsheen was driving home from University her first day went great she became instant popular she stopped on the way for ice cream and when she was walking back to her car a robber came and snatched her bag she began fighting him to get it back but the robber pushed her she fell to ground when somee one came from behind and fought the robber defeating him and took back the bag the guy helped Arsheen up .Arsheen got up looked at her saviour she immediately got lost into his deep black eyes ,she bit her lower lip as looked at his soft black hair ,handsome features and a mezmarizing smile he held her up with his strong mascualar arms "Thank you" Arsheen said "Your welcome" Azfar replied "i'm Arsheen " she said "I'm Azfar" he replied in his dreamy voice "you mean Roshna's friend?" Arsheen said "yeah...your her cousin Arsheen right?" Azfar said "yeah" Arsheen replied "Listen Azfar you have to come tonight at my house for dinner" "but why?" he asked "to say thanks for saving me nd my bag"
Azfar at first thought of saying no but then he thought in this way he would be able to see Roshna since aunt Margo banned him "Sure" he said with a smile she was happy "good come at seven sharp okay?" "fine"

The rest of the way home Arsheen thought of no one but Azfar she felt butterflies in her tummy she was more than happy.

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How you liked 3rd chapter?...please do comment and tell me what you liked and what should i add or remove all opinions will be welcomed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww Sooo cute update,👏

You shud forward it to all your IF friends

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