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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadffi

Awww Sooo cute update,👏

You shud forward it to all your IF friends


thank you sooo much!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mew princess jiii
This is uber amazingg...
Hayeee im so glad wid fawad n mahiraaa hayee all characters rock
O wish mahnoor n faisal aur bhi hote :( lol
Plzzz make fawad n mahiras story veryyy romantic n fawad a guy, whose every girls dream, veryyy loving, plz

Oh n love azfars character i thot ud keep him wid neelam? ;) :p
Edited by Reenoo. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks a lot Reeno and yup i'm going to make them very romantic as he is going to live with Azfar so Mahira's neighbour and class mate

and Azfar and Roshna will go to a quadriangle as Arsheen and Neelam both love Azfar so see who Azfar picks next chapter would be on Arsheen and after that full on Fawad Mahira


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eagerly waitingg then! 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER # 4

I'm in love

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Fawad Afzal a boy of 26, son of the buisness partner of Azfar's dad.Fawad is kind,gentle,intelligent,serious and very handsome

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Arsheen rushed home in a happy manner and went straight to her mom who was drinking juice and watching tv "MOM!!" Arsheen said happily "yeah dear?" Margo said "Mom i've invited a friend over is it okay?" "whom dear?" her mom said "Azfar..." Arsheen said frightendly "WHAT???" Margo spitted the juice that was in her mouth "no n-no mom i've invited Azfar because he saved me today you see a robber was trying to snatch my bag but he saved me" "oh..." Margo thought a devious plan came in her head "okay dear its fine" Arsheen got up to leave "wait...dress nicely tonight" Margo smiled "make sure you look beautiful" "o-okay..." Arsheen said in a confused manner

Arsheen then ran to the kitchen to see Mahira making lunch but her mind was somewhere else was day dreaming a smile was spread across her face as she remembered 'his eyes' "Mahira!" Arsheen said but no answer "Mahira!" she asked again "..Mahira?" Arshen said loudly that Mahira jumped up "..yeah?" Mahira said as her cheeks were as red as tomato .Arsheen ignored and jumped to her point "ummm Mahira...Azfar is coming tonight for dinner" "why?" Mahira asked she was confused "because he kinda saved me today..and my bag from getting robbed" "oh" Mahira was happy "yeah so what should i make..." she was confused Roshna came from behind "Doesn't matter Azfar is a total foodie he'll eat everything and anything" She giggled "but he loves Pak food the best so...biryani should work" Arsheen jumped in excitement "Thanks!..but i don't know how to make biryani" "i'll make it Azfar loves my hand made biryani and can guess it by taste that i made it" Roshna said "thanks" Arsheen was happy and ran upstairs to get ready

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She dressed in an unusual care trying to look as beautiful as she could and when satisfied ran downstairs to see Roshna making biryani in the kitchen and Neelam making dessert "wow it smells so good" Arsheen said "may i help?" "yeah sure you can make raita" Neelam said "okay" she ran to the fridge and got yogurt out and was just starting when she heard a doorbell "i'll get it" she said and ran to get it .She fixed her hair and o.p.e.n.e.d the door to see Azfar looking as handsome as ever she blushed "hey" she said Azfar smiled "hi" and now his eyes wandered to search Roshna but couldn't see her "hey lets go to my room" Arsheen suggested and took him to her room and there she talked and talked to him as much as she heard him the more she started having those feelings about him ,he was perfect just perfect and Arsheen couldn't help but stare ,she felt buterflies in her tummy and she blushed every time she looked into his dark,gorgeous and sparkling black eyes

They were called to dinner downstairs Azfar finally caught her glimpse dressed in an old shalwar khameez whose colors have faded ,her hair tied in braids with strands of hair coming out making her long,silky,black hair a gorgeous mess...she was there looking the most perfect of all girls.. his best friend who understood hs every feeling,every problem who was always there for him..his Roshna.She was setting the table with Neelam.He sat on a chair and Arsheen sat next to him Margo came and smiled at Azfar.Azfar smelt t "wow it smells delicious" he said "then eat" Arsheen served him but he saw Roshna and Neelam going upstairs "Hey Roshi Neelo you guys not eating" Neelam smirked and Roshna looked down aunt Margo never let them eat with hem Margo quickly said "Azfar both of the have to study they will eat later with Mahira" Roshna and Neelam nodded and turned to leave when Azfar ate a morsel and said "Wow!! its sooo good" "Really? well it should be because Arsheen made it" Margo said Azfar stopped chewing he knew Roshna made it he could guess her hand made biryani from far away he looked down Roshna turned around in shock as she heard aunt Margo say it while Arsheen herself looked at her mom unbelievingly ,Roshna went upstairs and wasn't seen by Azfar that whole evening


Azfar was about to leave so Arsheen went with him to the gate he was about to leave "okay bye " Azfar said Arsheen leaned to him but he left .Arshen hit herself on the back of her head "i'm such an idiot what was i thinking? he would kiss me?...but why was i thinking that?...d-do i l-like h-him?" she asked herself "yeah i do!...no no i love him..." Arsheen smiled



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How you liked 4th chapter?...please do comment an
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeahhh me first...⭐️

Yipeee Fawad enterd...🥳

And update was sooo nice...

Thankx for PM❤️

Edited by sadffi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot it makes me happy to read such encouraging comments thanks a lot .You guys are the reason why i write
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update dear...keep it up...👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it so much 👏
Ooemmgeee i just love fawad n faisal 😉
fab job dear 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you soo very much i love the support will post soon as fast as i can

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