A Woman...?-MG-KashSSs-Pt2(Lst)Pg42(14/10/12)

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Hey guys, my name is Kashish and I have written few Mini FFs (Unpredictable Life;
Same yet Different), OSs (Genuine Love;Egoistic Love?;I love you) and an FF (Twist of Fate-)
Here I am back with a gallery of SS (short stories), I really hope that you will like it. This SS's concept is by Aancchal :D

*Ajnabee Ehsaas- (Concept: Aancchal :D )
-Intro: Page 1
-PART 1 : Page 6
-PART 2 : Page 10
-PART 3 : Page 14
-PART 4 : Page 17
-PART 5 : Page 20

*~Bitter Revenge Or Sweet Love~*
-INTRO : PAGE 25
-PART1 : PAGE 28
-PART2 : PAGE 31


*~A Woman Respected?~*-Concept credits goes to Pari0706
-Prologue: PAGE 36
-PART 1: PAGE 39
-PART 2: PAGE 42



Ajnabee Ehsaas (please tell me if the tittle is ok or should I change, if yes then suggest me some tittles.)
INTRODUCTION

21st November 2011, Geet was really happy. She said 'yes' to the marriage proposal from her bestest friend Sameer. Sameer was happy, his family was happy, her family was happy and she knew he will love her a lot and take care of her thus she was really happy.

The same day, in the evening, they got engaged. Taking their parents permission they went in the garden to talk. "Geet, I wanted to talk to you" Sameer said as they both sat on the swing.

"what is it Sameer?" she asked with a smile.

He held her hands and asked "I didn't get time to personally ask you, are you ok marrying me?"

"Sameer, I am really happy to get married to you. I know you love me a lot and will take care of me. I also know that after marriage I will fall in love with you" she said squeezing his hands.

"I am really happy to hear this as in no case, I would want to see any cracks in our friendship." he said with a wide smile. True he loved her a lot but he didn't want to force any decision on her. He hugged her feeling happy and she too felt really relaxed.

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Sameer and Geet were to get engaged after two months. At the moment, Sameer was in Delhi, meanwhile Geet at her house, in Mumbai. He was away for three days.

Sameer was holding their engagement photo. "what are you doing?" Sameer asked her, missing her a lot. He put back the photo and drove the car.

"you guess?" Geet teased him. She was really missing her best friend as he was always there with her.

"missing me" Sameer teased her back "I am also missing you loads, I love you" he confessed his love Geet won't reply, yet he knew that soon she will also fall in love with him. He had full faith on his love.

"That is true, I am missing you. When are you coming back?" she asked, playing with her ring.

"Today" he said with a smile.

"really?" she asked with excitement

"yes really" he said with a giggle

"when?" she asked, with a big smile.

"see behind you" he told her

As she turned, she was left aghast, he was standing right behind her. She threw the phone on the bed and rushed to him. "I am so so happy that you are back" said Geet

"same here" he said with a smile.

"how was your trip?" she asked him, as she made him sit on the bed.

"nice but I missed you loads" he took her into his arms.

"Do you want to drink something?" she asked looking toward him.

"can I drink you?" he said with a wink, and kissed on her cheek.

She hit on his chest "you are shameless"

"That I am, but only with you" he said with a smile.

After few days, Sameer took her for shopping, both of them were having loads of fun. "I am tired and I am feeling thirsty" she said looking at him.

"ok you sit here, I will bring water for you" he placed a kiss on her forehead and went to fetch water.

*BOOM*

Everything turned gloomy; Geet fainted due the scene of explosion in front of her eyes. As she opened her eyes after a while, she saw dead bodies at some distance, she ran there and tried to find Sameer. "Sameer, Sameer" she called his name, hoping to hear his voice soon, to know he was fine. Her tears were streaming down non stop.

"Sameer" she called his name again but all in vain, she rushed to the people collecting the bodies. "Sir I am searching Sameer, did you see him?" she asked hysterically.

He checked the list and said "no sorry, there is no name in the list of injured people, the dead people are here" he said with finality.

She went back to searching, but he was nowhere. Finally tired of searching, she shouted "SAMEER" and right then she fainted due to crying and being exhausted.
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Hey guys,
Here is the intro, I really hope you liked it and that you would want to read the next part too:D
Guys, please let me know ur opinion.

I want to dedicate to all my friends, my readers and to people whom birthday is in November (Happy Birthday guys, may you get all the success and happiness. Be happy and keep everyone happy :D).

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly or something like that please let me know :)


Please leave your comments, even a word, good or bad-Or even please press the 'like' button. As your comments mean a lot to me, they encourage me to write further :).

If there is any mistake do tell me, don't hesitate :D

All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome.

And I'll PM later :)

PS: if you want PMs all u have to do is comment/press like button and add me in buddy list as 'kashishkPM' :).

Luv u<333
Kashish

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds AMAZING
don't forget to pm me :D
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hey buddy really nice concept
start seems interesting
please add me into ur pm list
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sounds really interesting...do cont soon
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nice concept
but i missed maan hope he comes soon in the FF
cotinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new SS...
intro
nice start...
Geet is engaged to Sameer...
cont soon and pm me...
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sounds amazing don't forget to pm
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great concept...waiitng eagerly for the next part
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different start.. waiting for the next..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the new story dear... Feels really bad to see Geet loosing her love

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