Mohabbat hogai tum se A-K LAST PRT PG24 - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good plzz post next part fast. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part plz continue i just love it yeh dil mange more
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
awwwwwwwwww
jaldi se cont karooo
cant waittt 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Amazing part, angads kind of mean! lol. THough i luv his attitude! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was a fantastic part!!!!!!!! i just hope angad falls for kripa rly soon! update soon, i can't wait to read more
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
it so amazing piz cont soon
cant wait 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
Good job 👏
Please cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
plzzzz continue can't wait for ur next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pART:11

next day kripa wake up and see angad still sleeping se thinks to her self;

kripa(thinking): ye wo hi insaan se jis ko bina dekhey bina janey main ne itna pyaar kiya aur ajj ....ajj main is ko pyaar kya apni nafrat ke liq bhi nahi samjti ...mager phir bhi kyun .....ik ajeeb se khoshi ...ik chahat..ik kashish jo mujey angad ke itney zulam kerney ke baad bhi mujey is ke sath is rishtey main sari zindagi bandhey rehney per majboor kerti hi !.............

suddenly angad's cell ring ..which make him wake up too he saw the flashing no. ...and a smile come across his face

angad: hi mishty...kesi ho

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angad: arey tum ro kyun rah ho ...dekho meri baat suno ...mishty

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angad: arey nahi baba is shaadi se humarey rishtey per koi fark nahi pera hai ...it is just .....fixed deposite for me

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angad: acha theek hai main ik haftey main kripa ke saath wapis arrha hoon

he says good bye to mishty and ..smile cutely!

angad: kripa

kripa(come of terrece): kya hai

angad: merey kaprey nikal do main bath leker atta hoon

kripa: haan acha

angad goes to take a bath while kripa thinking ..................!

kripa: (thinking): ye shaadi bhley hi meri marzi se na hoi ho ...magar ab isey koi nahi toor sakta or nanahi koi humarey beech asakta hai ...mishty ye khel tum dono ne milker shooro kiya tha ..mujey neecha dekhaney ke liya...ab ye angad ....or merey beech nahi tumharey or merey beech hai dekhtey hin angad kis ki taraf jata hai!

i will write next soon and longer one!

coming up: an argument between angad-kripa.................!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome part! I like the way kripa thinks! Cont. soon!

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