Mohabbat hogai tum se A-K LAST PRT PG24 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

138

Views

31.3k

Users

41

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

amneetkaur_24 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#71
Incredible part! I felt bad for Rahul though. But i stil loved the part! Cont .soon!
nabz8888 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#72
wow, what a dhamakedar part!!!!!! cont. soon!!!!! i can't wait!!!!! good job on the part!!!!
nabz8888 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#73
wow, what a dhamakedar part!!!!!! cont. soon!!!!! i can't wait!!!!! good job on the part!!!!
Sour Skittles thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#74
wow!!!!!!! angads just soooo 😈
cont soon
luv himani
lucky-moon thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#75
wow its awesome just one word SUPECTACULAR plzzzzzzz yes plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😃
purplelolo thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#76
hey gr8 work ...keep it up.. 😊 👏
~*DeEpI*~ thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#77
good job 👏
cont. soon please 😊
Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#78
PART:15

kripa: u angad khanna stay way from me ......

angad: kripa apney husband se isterha baat kertey hein .......

kripa: kya ..bawaas kerey ho ...

angad: dekho na ....rahul ...ye kessey mujh se bat keri hai ...

rahul: kripa tum ko angad se is terha baat nahi kerni chahiya ...loogoon ke emotions ka khayal nahi kerti at least us insaan ke jazbaat ka ehsaas tu karo ...jo tum se aur jis se tum pyaarkerti ho

kripa: main is se pyaar nahi kerti .....

angad: tum mujeh bse pyaar nah kerti ...

rahul: krip ab is jhoot ka koi faida nahi .....hai ....tum ..angad se pyaar kerti ajj se nahi ..balki peechley do saaloon se

kripa: but it was simple crush an infactuation

rahul: yeah ..an infactuation which turned in to love and which lead to ur wedding !

kripa: ra....

rahul: plz kripa ....lo aunty uncle bhi aagye ....uncle ye hai app ke dammad ..angad khanna ...

kripa's father surya: kripa tum ne humari izaat khak main mila di

kripa: dad........

surya: no kripa ..just shut up ...apni bakwaas band kero ..kisi ko mau dekhaney laik nahi choro ...

gayatry: app plz ...arraam se baat kerya hum mall main hein

surya : arey tu is ne izaat ki dhajiyaan ura di hein pejhley hi kum tamasha nahi bana hai aur ye sab tumharey laad pyaar ka nateeja hai ..aur bheejo doosrey mulk project ker ney ke liya

gayatry: app mujhey kasoor war kyun tehrarahey hein

surya: tehraraha nahi raha ....balk tum ho kasoor war

ripa: mamma baba ..plz

surya: tum chup raho ..aur angad tum humarey ghar chalo ..ab jab shaadi ker hi chukey ho tu bacha kiya hai ..chalo ghar chalo !
lucky-moon thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#79
nice part i read it earlier but forget to post a reply any how it was spectucular and plz do continue
Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#80
PART:16

Angad Kripa and kripa's parent reached to kripa's home angad with his clever mind some how trapped poor souls...Means kripa's parents! Suryaban's temper is converted in pleasant mood now…;
Surya: Kripa beti I am sorry mujey laga ke tum ne kisi essay wesey lerkey se shadi ki hai magar angad tub hoot h acha lerka hai ..main bhoot khush hoon aur mujey yakeen hai ke main koi bhoot hi acha kaam kiya ho ga jo angad jesa dammaad mila hai.

Angad (interrupted}: sorry for interruption uncle ..oh I mean dad but main app ka damaad nahi beta hoon ..!

Surya: haan bhai wo tu hai …mera ik hi beta hai…aura bhi doosra bhi upper waley ne tumharey roop main de diya …1

Angad: thank you

Gayatry: acha ab ye loog thak gye hongye ..app ko tu zara bhi khayal nahi hai …kripa beta angad ko apney rom main le jao …jab tak tum dono yahan ho Kripa ke kamrey main hi reh lo

Kripa: magar mamma……

Angad: theek hai mamma ..magar main app se kuch kehna chahta hoon

Gayatry : haan beta bolo

Angad: wo actually hum ne court marriage kit hi ..aur essi shaadi bhi koi shaadi hoi ..hum chahtey ke humarey bewaida pherey hoon aur humari shaadi socially bhi …koi mainey rakhti ho …!

Surya: bhoot achi baat kit um ne …hum kal hi kisi pandit ko arrange kertey hein jo tumhari shaadi ki date fix kersakey …

Angad: yahan pandit asaani se mil jayengye

Surya: beta yahan …kareeb main ik temple hai jahan ke pandit humarey liya tumhari kundali dekh ker date nikal deingye

Angad: uncle oh I mean dad …..un se zara jaldi date fix kerney ko kahiya ga …yahan ka visa bhoot kam time ke liya mila hai

Surya: theek hai beta jessa tum kaho ..wesey Kripa ko abh le jao gey …

Angad: ji da..main Kripa ke bagair akeley rehney ka ab tasowar bhi nahi kersakta ….dekhya na is ke peeche peechey chala ayaa….aur yahan aneey ke baad jab is ne bataya ke app loog ki khushi ke liya ..humari shaadi ko bhool ker ..app ke liya sari zindagi ik samjota kerkey guzarey gi is ke liya merey dil main respect aur bhi berh gye hai ………
Kripa (murmured under her breath): respect my foot!

Angad: kuch kaha krips tum ne

Kripa: haan ..nahi tu ..kyun

Gayatry : arey bhai thak gai hai ..aur tum ho ke batein kiya ja rehey ho chalo tum loog bhi jaker araam kero …main dinner ke liya arrangements kerwati hoon !

Angad: ji mamma…..

Gayatry and surya left...as soon as they left Kripa runs to her room angad goes behind her …she enters in her room about to slam the door..when angad push the door and Kripa fall on the floor ….door opened angad entered in the room …he locked the door …and as Kripa still on floor …he climbed and cross her bed and then jumped down over bed ..And lay their at his stomach...Kripa get up and go to angad! Kripa in angry tone asked him ;

Kripa: what the hell u are doing in my room on my bed

Angad: what do u mean by this ..i m with my wife ..in her ..opps I mean our bed room …..
Kripa: wife my foot ….main tumhari biwi nahi hoon samjey band kero ye natak aur dafa ho jao yahan se ….

Angad: well kripa …he pull her over him elf Kripa tried to free her self …as he saw this he turned and now Kripa is under angad !...he continues to speak ….rahul tum se mujh se pyaar kerti ho right …what that rahul was saying …u r crazy about me ..i m ur first love

Kripa: that was a crap ….

Angad: no that was truth ….

Kripa: another u also spoke …that u r taking revenge from me …by get getting marry to me ….torturing me …well mr.khanna u have tortured me enough please leave I will handle my parents ..please now let me live my life …with rahul or the person who is my destiny !

Angad: destiny …haan …I told u na …..ya ..one more thing I told that was …a fact and is fact ..day of judgment ….and that is ……the person the only person who owned you Kripa …sharma …..who have right at every breath u take …at move or your …at every part of ur …and ur life is angad khanna ….samjey ……main chahoon is hi waqt tum per apney naam ki moher laga doon ….magar main itna gira howa insaan nahi hoon …jis din humari shaadi ho gi ..us raat …..tum Kripa sharma nahi raho gi …chahey pyaar se ya zabardasti se ..tum ko Kripa khanna banna parey ga ….samji !



Kripa: main nahi jati thi ke tum itney girey howey apni hawaas ke liya tum us lerki ko bhi dhooka de rahey ho jis se tum pyaar kertey ho ….

Angad: shut up ……mujey itna girney per tum ne ..aur tumhari so called zid ..tumharey attitude ne majboor kiya jis din ne mujey first time degrade kiya than a ..us hi din …main ne faisla kiya tha ke tum ko apney kadmoon main laonga ..aur wo main ker ke rahoonga …shuker karo shaadi se pehley tumharey saath tumarey hi kamrey main …main kuch nah keraha ….jab ke koi mujey rokney wala bhi nahi hai …….mager ..main essa nahi hoon samji …he then move and letkripa go ………….!

Kripa who is crying now goes to bathroom …and changes her self in a maxi …and again come to angad who has his eyes shut tightly….she pick up the pillow and and take blanket from cupboard throw it on ..Sofa...Then go to angad again as he is sleeping...She covered him with sheets ….and sleep on sofa by herself...After ….making sure that door is locked properly …!



Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

10 days ago

Mohabbat ke Safed Raaste ~ A Mayra Five-Shot [Completed]

Inspired by the timeless Bollywood tale "Raja Hindustani", this story unfolds in the snowy embrace of Manali, a free-spirited taxi driver and a...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

7 months ago

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1 Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page. I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

4 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

9 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".