Mohabbat hogai tum se A-K LAST PRT PG24 - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
😳 very sweet and cute part 😳 can't wait to read next part so con. soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi i lub r fan fic ....but im confused abt 1 thing ..........at the end of 16th part i m not sure abt the no. but angad said that he was gonna marry kripa n she will be kripa khanna by hook or by crook........but in the next part it seems that they r already married i mean kripa is sayin that the war is btw misty n her .....n they r in a hotel .....4rm last part they should be at kripas mom dads place ....n i checked n re checked if i had missed a part but i didnt ........can u or any one clear ma confusion......
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Posted: 19 years ago
just a question...how many fanfics do u actually write?
and you gotta cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
heeey...i read the whole thing today...its REALLLY GOOOD...plz do continue 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry sorry ..i forget abt my fanfic 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
thank god nowu remember any plzcon soon n do not 4get this time other wise 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey nice prt plz cont. SOON!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
plz post the next part soon its juz great!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome part 👏
con. soon with very long part 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

PART :19
Angad ad kripa were happy from inside…that they are together …for no reason they smile …..angad kripa stayed in Karachi for one more week ..after completing all formalities ..angad took kripa back to India …kripa said good byes wth teary eyes ..because all she know the troubles in her lie are welcoming her!


they reach mumbai in flat of angad ....which is complete mess....three roooms apartment ..kripa who was habbitual of lavish and big rooms now suffering ....although .....angad is pretty well-off ..but he didnt buy ...a home coz he was alone.... in that bet for kripa ..which he has won now kripa is angad's now!

kripa was about to fait when she saw ...a flat ...........!

kripa: ye ..tumhara ghar hai

angad: haan yun

kripa: main yahan nahi rahoongi

angad: kyun tum princess ho

kripa: angad main ...yahan ...

angad: main ne sooha tha ke main ghar badaloonga magar ab tu yaheen rahoong adekh lena aur tum bhi

kripa: tum essa kesey kersaktey ho

angad: rehna yaheen raho

kripa: theek mujey nahi rehna ..main wapis chali jaongi

she is about to leave when angad ..grab er hand and twril her around and through her on sofa .................! he go close to her and says

angad: ye mera ghar hai yahan meri marzi chaleygi ....tum yahan hi raho gi ..meri marzi ke begair yahan se kadum bahir amt nikal na samjhi...he hold her hand firmly

kripa: tum ......pagal ho choro mujey

angad: u know what .........main wo hi kerta hoon jo mera dil kehta hai

kripa: angaddddddd

angad: come here .......he took her to his room.......he through her on bed .......and scream;

angad: listen ...kripa ..ye hi ab tumhara ghar hai...................tum ko yaheen rehna hai...! aur ager nahi rehna hai tu bhi yahin .....rehna hai chaye tum chaho ya nahi .....! main bair ja raha hoon ...wapis aaon tu ye ghar saaf rakhna ..aur haan merey ghar koi naukar nahi nahi hai !

he goes and take bath ..after that he leave for some where ...kripa who was crying chnge her sself in normal dress.....she clean the whole house!

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angad goes to mishty ....mishty was realy very happy when she saw angad she hugs him tight ...! angad looked tensed ..misht figure it out!

mishty: tum kripa ke wajah se preshaan h na ye lerki ...ateey ke ateey tumhey ...

angad: mishty ghalti meri hai .....wo ...tum ne mera flat dekha na ......wo kesey rahey gi

mishty: magr angad tum abhi bhi ik struggling actor ho jab ki ik flat ajj kal 35,00,000 lack se kam ka nahi milta ya phir kisi normal area main ley sakte ho

angad: nahi mishty normal area main kesy wahan loog humey dekh ker pagl ho jayegein

mishty: angad magar....

angad: mishty main samhaloonga ay ways ab main chalta hoon ...angad left mishty feel awkwardness in his behaviour

mishty (to herself): angad wo nahi raha jo wo
tha ...essa kiya kya kripa ne 😕

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angad goes bac to his flat when he entered ...there was a complete differnt sight .......the whole hoe was clean .....a good smell of food was comng from kitchen ..he take kripa's name;

angad: kripaaaaaaaaaaaa

kripa come out of kitchen ..she was wearing simple light blue top and white knee lenght jeans ......and looking cuyte ....ngad was mesmerized by her beauty ...he come back when krpa took his name ;

kripa: angad kiya howa khaana laga doon ya kha ker aye hoo

angad: nahi main ne khana nahi khaya

kripa(smile): ok main tumhara hi wait keri thi

kripa set the table ......angad was feeling bad about his previous behaviur

angad: kripa ...

kripa(while eating): hmmmm ..she look at his plate which is still empty ....she then say

kripa: angad itna bura nahi hia ke tum loo bhi na
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angad: nahi kripa ...vo actually i m sorry ..mujey ghussa agya tha aaur

kripa: angad ..mujey bhi sochna achaiy tha tumharey janey ke baad safai kertey howey tumharey contract papers perhay ...tumhari itni salry nai hai abhi ke hum ik bara ghar afford karien ....aur tum ne tu gaari bhi loan per li ti pehley us ka loan khatum jaye tu hum naya ghar le lein gye .....aur wesey bhi is ghar main kiya burai hai ...hai na

angad gets up from his chair he lightly kissed on kripa's forhead cheeks and lips ....a current runned through her body he smiled and say thank u kripa! 😳

kripa: angad ik baat kahoon ...

angad(taking food now) kahoo

kripa: main yahan kisi ko join kerlo meri repo acha hai ..kashisf ki wajah se......ager tum ijazaat do tu main ...

angad: nahi kripa ......main kerlonga tum ghar peer rahoi

kripa: angad main tu sirf ik choti se help ...

angad: kripa .....main ...

kripa: angad ....biwi aur shoher gaari ke do pahiya hotey hein ...ager ik ko bhui kuch ho tu doosra effect hota hai ...main ne tum se shaadi ki bhaley se humarey beech wo relation nahi hai ..mager .....yahan humrey zindagi guzarney ka masla hai ....mujey plz job kerney do angad plz


comin up: wil angad permit her job!?

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