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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol that was funny! cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey haha great fanfic so far!! continue soon....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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serioulsy where do u get all these fabulous ideas from...i mean i hv nothin in my brain.😆..i just read it...wow...it seemz like a cool fan-fic...wid a new storyline.😊..so i hope i will be gr8...plz cont. soon...me waiting impatiently...👏 👏 👏
Luv taniya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART :3


angad was saying this ..then a gal in white t-shirt and blue knee lenght jeans comes from behnd and hugs him turned and hugs her back ..and kis her on her cheek ...kripa who was standing far behind standing seeing this veiw ...she feel shatered aand then she says to herself ...!

kripa: (to herself) no kripa u cant do this to u ......wo tumhara kuch nahi lagta ...wo kisis ko bhi pyaar karey ...tum ko koi fark nahi perna chahiya remember he is ur infactuation ...tum ko us sey acha lerka mileyga ......just dont give him attention sirf kaam ke time us baat kero ....aur on secong thing ...just dont give him looks ...and ignore him ...yes ..perfect !

she said " PERFECT " loudly ...kashif come over there ...what is perfect krips ........he asked polietly !

kripa: hmmm kuch nahi kashif just ik dress ka idea demagh main ayya tu .....

kashif : tum designers bhi na ...well good news for u ...

kripa: what

kashif: well yahan kareeb main ik resturant hai jehan ..Pakistani breakfast,lunch or dinner ...available hai

kripa: gr8 ....but i think hum ko kuch indian bhi try kerna chahiya right

kashif: u wish

kripa: yes kashif ..plz plz plz ...chalo na ..yahan ke kisis famous resturant main chaltey hein sab

kashif: ok main sab se pooch leta hoon ...well haan ..humey abhi .....three hours ka break bhi hai

kripa: gr8.........

kashif leave from there ...but he come back ....and look ....bit worried

kripa: kashif bhai kiya howa u look worried

kashif: haan kripas ....wo humarey sath jo actors aye they they already left to explore mumbai ..or mujey or ..sadia(his wife) ko abhi ke abhi kahin janna hai

kripa: ok tum loog jao main yahin hoon ....

kashif: magar tum kesey

kripa: tum loog jaooooo

kashif: ok bye ..well u sure ke tum ............

kripa: haan baba jaooooooooooooo

kashif left ..kripa didn't want to show her nervousness ...and her lonliness ..so she walked out from .......studio ......and before leaving she ...read the ....name of studio again and note it .....and then she asked her driver to take her at beach side ...they reached there ......

kripa: driver tum jaoooo

driver: but ma'm

kripa: jab bolana ho ga tu main call ker longi

driver : theek hai ji

the driver left kripa at beach she set there ...three hours past now kripa decide to call driver ....but she was shocked ...bnecoz she didn't have his number ..kripa was too much scared ...suddenly she saw a figure ...who was known to her ...yes it was angad .......angad khanna ....he actually came ..after dropping mishty ...his g.f at her home ..he just come to relax ...kripa runs towards him ..he was also shoked to see her there alone

kripa: ...a-a-aangad

angad: kripa tum akeli

kripa: haan wo main essey yahan aye thi i missed driver's cell no ...now i worrying to death ...that how would i reach to studio then i saw u ...so i m here .............

angad: jab tumey rastey nahi pata tu yahan kyun aye ...aye to aye akeli kyun ruki

kripa: tum mujey leker jaogye ya nahi .....

angad: pehley tum merey sawal ka jawab do

kripa: tum mujey leker jaongye ya nahi

angad: kripa answere me ...........

kripa: u answere ..../me

angad: cant u hear what i said ...damn it agar kuch ho jata tu .......................

kripa: fine matlab tum mujey leker nahi jaongye ..ok main khud koi taxi ker ke chjali jaongi

she is about to leave when angad grab her hand ........he twist it hard ..........she screamed little

kripa: aaahhhh ....angad choro ...dard horaha hai choro

angad: tum khud ko samjti kya ho haan

kripa: kuch nahi ...choro mujey

angad: dekho koi mujey avaoid kerey mujey psand nahi

kripa: tu main kya karoon

angad: tum merey sawal ko avoid ker rahi ho

kripa: ker rahi hoon kya ker lo gye haan

angad: ker ney ko bhoot kuch ker sakta hoon .....

kripa: leave me ................

angad ...chalo merey sath

kripa: nahi jaongi .......she turn around to leave when angad look at her ....held her hand pull her towards him picks her up in his arms ..take her to car ...throw her inside ...and drove towards studio !

hope u like it ................

coming: will they ever become friend .....will they really meant to each other .....how can anfgad fall in love wt kripa ......yet he loves an other gal !
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was great!! continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART :4


they reach to studio through out the drive they did n't talk ...as they reached there kripa who was mad at angad ...about to leave ....angad grab her hand ....kripa take it back with jerk ;

kripa: mr.angad khanna don't u dare to touch me again ....get it ....app ke pass essa hota hoga yahan ...magar humarey pass essa kuch nahi hota ....arey kisi bhi lerki ko app jab dil chahta hai goad main utta letey hein ...well wo aur hoti hongi jo app ke pass araam se aajati hongi samjey ...,

angad: shut up ..

kripa: kyun bura laga ..pehli dafa ..

angad: just shut up

kripa: kyun sach bardasht nahi hota hai ...

angad: ...chup ik dum chup ...now finally tum bata hi do khud ko kya samjti ho haan ...arey tumhari jesey merey agye peechey ghoomti hein

kripa: magar app jesoon ko main app ney 10 feet door tak bhi nahi anney deti samjey ....now ...,don't try to talk to me .....ab hum sirf apney kaam ke liya baat karengye /........got it

angad: well tum itni hasseen nahi ho ke main tum se baat kerney ke liya maroon ...just get out of my car

kripa: ja rahoi hoon

angad: roka kis nay hain

kripa: tum ne hi mera hath pakra tha ....

angad:L just get out u ...crap ...............



coming up : more fights

sorry for ..short part 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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LOL, I was imagining angad to be a little nicer...but I like the meaner one better 😆 nice...continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
hey,
that was a gr8 part cont soon and pls make the parts longer
ruchi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
plz continue soon
that was g8

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