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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART :9


angad slapped mishty .....kripa was passing them by the time ...she stopped ...and see angad in anger ...mishty looked at kripa and angad in shocked way ; she was not in condition to react (off-course after having ...angad's slap ...who would be in better condition 😆 )

kripa: angad.... ye kya batamezi ...lerki se kesey baat kertey tum hey nahi pata kya ...how could u slap ur girl friend ....in front of so many ppl

angad(who is more furious then kripa): main is ke saath kuch bhi karoon ...tumey kya who the hell u r

kripa: ye koi tum hari property nah hai ki tum jab dil main aye issey maar do gye ....samjey !

angad: hey u ....tum apney us boy friend ke saath hi raho ......samjhi ...humarey matter main interfare kerney ki koshish na hi karo to acha ho ga ..yahan kaam ke liya aye ho apney kaam se kaam rakho

kripa: boy friend ...are u nuts ..main aur boy friend .....

angad: banney ki zaroorat nahi hai samjhi ...wo ejaz tumhara B.F ....hi tu hai

kripa: excuse me ...pehli baat wo mera boy friend nahi hai ..doosri baat agar hai bhi tu non of ur business ...aur ye jo tum public place per apni girlk friend ke saath kerrey ho wo theek nahi hai ..agar tumharey beech koi problem hai tu apney ghar ja ker suljhao samjey ...

angad: main road per kerha ho ker sujhao tumey kya

kripa: main tum jesey loogon se baat ker ke apna ..mood nahi kharab ker na chati ...mishty come wt me .....leave him alone ...wt his so- called ego

.angad got more furious but remain silent ...a plan cook in his mind .....he close his hand ..amke a fist ...hit on wall to hard !

the part ends ...kripa was about to leave in sit in their .....van (that arranged by production house ) ....when some one come and said her ...she has a call ..she runs back ...no one noticed and all left ...kripa found that no one was on phone and venue was pretty empty ...she got scared ....only waiters were there .....she start walking in parking lot ....when some grab her hand ...and hit and turn around ....her body ...push her towards wall ..her back hit hard ...

kripa; aahhhhhh kon hai

angad comes from behind ......his eyes were full of anger ....he come close to ripa ....almost breathing on her face ...kripa was scred ....to death ..not able to say a single word ..................! she was sweating ....and breathing hard millions of tears rolling down from her eyes .....she finally able to speak ;

kripa: a-a- an-ang-angad

angad: ssssshhhhhhhhh .....chup ik dum chup ...ajj main tumhari koi baat nahi sunoga ...sirf main kahoon ga aur tum sono gi ......samjhi .....he then wit jerk ..take her ..to his car .....throw her in side ...! drive really fast ....and take her to beach ..no one was there .......then he takes her to beach house ..close the door ......locked it !kripa again got scared !

kripa: plz angad mujey janey do plz ......

angad : ....main ne kaha tha na ...tum kuch nahi kaho gi ...chup rehney ko kaha tha na ...now listen .....

kripa: mujey kuch nahi sunna hai

he ...hold her wt her hairs ...her head was aching bad ....becoz of hairs

kripa: angad ....choro mujey choro ....

angad: ...meri baat suno bas ............ripa ....main nahi jaanta ..kyun magr ...tumhari her baat merey ....her choti se choti bari se bari baat mery liya ...meaning ful hai ...main nahi jata kyun magar tumharey barey main kuch ghalat nahi sun sakta ...main nahi janta kyun magagr tum ko kisi ke sath dekh mujey pata nhi kya ho jata .....is liya main chahta ...hoon tum hamesha ke meri ho jao ..mmain tum se pyaar karoon ya na karoon tum sirf mujh se pyaar kero ....he then kiss her neck passionatel ..kripa ...push him ...away ..............!

kripa: aisa kabhi nahi hosakta ..kyun ke main tum se pyyar jnahi ker ti ....main nafrat keti hoon tum se

angad: magar phir bhi tum meri ho

kripa: pagal ho gye ho tum

angad: jo chahey samjo !

coming up:' secrete 😆

Edited by cute_face86 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
greatttttt partt 👏
conttt soooon.... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
wow its an awesome part plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
👏 plz plz plz con. soon great part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART :10

angad leave her at the sentence ……he become furious …..!angad moves towards Kripa agin and says …
angad: kya kaha tum….what u said ..tum mujh se pyaar nahi kerti right …tu karo ..coz main sab kuch bardasht ker sakta hoon magar ye nahi ke ..jo cheez meri ho wo kisi aur ke saath ko chhey ….

Kripa: kis ne kaha main tumhari hoon just leave me mr. khanna ..aur shayad tum bhool rahey ho ke tumhari ik girl friend bhi hai mishty …remember mishty !

Angad picks out his cell and make call to some one Kripa was all over confused about angad is up to !

Angad: hello mishty main angad ol raha hoon

Mishty: sorry kehney ke liya phone kiya

Angad: no tum ko ye bataney ke liya phone kiya ke jot um ne socha tha …wo sach tha ..yes I love …kripa ….do u have any problem with that
Mishty : angad jab tumhara dil hi merey pass nahi ho gat u tumharey ho ney na honey se mujey koi fark nahi perta …all the best angad !

Angad: but still we are friends mishty

Mishty: for ever angad !

He cuts the phone now facing trembling Kripa !
Angad: see Kripa problem solved !

Kripa: shut up u …..tum kis terha ke insaan ho

Angad: jesa bhi hoon tumhara hoon aur tum meri ho

Kripa: forget it

Angad ….tum meri ho …he slightly kiss at her lips and apart …….he then picks her up in his strong arms …take her to his car ..and drive to hotel leave her there !

Kripa in her room ..remebering every moment with angad …and cried a lot !

Kripa: angad tum ne …apna sara image jo main main banaya wo sab …toor diya …toor diya merey dil ko ..i hate u …I hate u !

Next day there was a party given by production house ….angad has good voice also so ..kashif …request him to sing a song !

Kashif: plz angad ..ik song tu hona hi chahiya plz …….every one ….convince him and angad start singing !


Khoobsurat hai wo itna Saha nahi jata
Kesey hum khud ko rok lein Raha nahi jata

Khoobsurat hai wo itna Saha nahi jata
Kesey hum khud ko rok lein Raha nahi jata

Chaand main daagh hai ye jantey hein hum lakin
Raat bher dekhey bina us ko raha nahi jata
Khoobsurat hai wo itna Saha nahi jata

Jo mera ho nahi paye ga is jahan main kahin
Rooh ban ker milonga us ko asmaan main kahin
Pyaar dharti per farishtoon se kiya nahi jata
Khoobsurat hai wo itna Saha nahi jata

Un nighahoon main mohabbat nahi tu kaho aur kiya hai
Per wo mujh se ye keh raha wo kisi aur ka hai
Zara sa jhoot bhi dhaang se kaha nahi jata
Khoobsurat hai wo itna Saha nahi jata

Ankhoon main keed kiya betha main ik haseen lamha
Jab main is neend se jagoonga tu dil tootey ga
Wo mujey khawab koi kyun dekha nahi jata
Khoobsurat hai wo itna Saha nahi jata


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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part! It as fabulous! Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
continueeeeeee soooon i read the whole thingy and its great
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part:11


Through out the party Kripa did not make any eye contact with angad at the end of song . Kripa called kashif at a corner.

Kripa: kashif I want to discuss some thing important with you

Kashif: haan mujey lag raha hai kuch baat party shooro honey ke baad se

Kripa: kashif ….i want to quit this contract

Kashif: well u simply can't

Kripa: kyun

Kashif: it is clause in our contract Kripa

Kripa: magar

Kashif: plz Kripa …..then see some one ….oh hiii and he left …kripa is all pissed off at kashif's strange behaviour

Angad comes over there and pets her sholders …..she turned around and her …anger is now her rage !

Kripa: tum yahan kya kerey ho

Angad: jo tum kerahi ho …enjoying party

Kripa: merey pass kya kerey ho just stay away from me

Angad: u know what Kripa darling ..main tumharey pass nahi atta …tum ne mujey majboor kiya

Kripa: ahhh forget it ..i simply hate u moron
Angad: wow gali bhi deti ho tub hi kitni cute dekhti ho

Kripa: use less …wastage of time

Angad: kya

Kripa: tum se baat kerna

Angad: I will get u …and make u mine

Kripa: ya sure in dreams

Angad: no …in reality

Kripa: pata hai tum dekhtey reh jao gye aur main ksi aur ki ho jaon gi !

Angad: tumharey wo koi aur dekhtey reh jaye gye aur tum meri ho jao gi

Kripa: shut up

Angad: sach kerwa laga Kripa

Kripa: sach ho tabhi tu hi kerwa lagey na …ye to ik jhoot hai

Angad: u know tum jawab bhoot deti ho ..wo bhi bina soochey samjey

Kripa: arey itni khoobsurat lerkiyaan ..un ke peechey jao tu tum ko kuch miley gab hi ..u know what I will not ..look good with u

Angad: u know ur simplicity …is difference between u and others /….un sab ne do ghantey parlor main lagye hon gye khoobsurat dekney ke liya magar tumhari ye lipstick or ..kjlal hi kafi hai tumharey liya …………………..(Kripa is tying her hairs in jora ) angad open her hairs ….by removing hair pin from her hairs ….and says …tum kholey balloon main zayada achi lagti ho ….

Kripa(push him away) : door hato mujh se

Angad: mujey door hata do gi merey ehsaas se kesey door bhago go Kripa !
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww what a cute part! Do cont soon!

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