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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Good one ...keep continuing 😊

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Though you have departed from the SNS storyline completely, your OS is interesting, I read every word. It was like reading that comic book movie that was so famous Bruce Willis, Mickey Rouke, and I liked that movie it was completely different from other films and similarly your OS gripped me in the same way.

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

hi your os is fabulous os mindblowing one

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Mandy

@Mandy20

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

very interesting OS! well done

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
Hey I really enjoyed your OS!!!

Very different to the show but great none the less. I enjoyed how it progressed, not a lot of dialogue between the two but the flow was great.

Yyour last paragraph was really nice, love Ahems thoughts about his marriage!!

If this is your first attempt you have doen an amazing job!!!!

😃 Thank you! as i began writing, their thoughts seemed more appropriate, especially when i wanted to capture Aham's in & out of consciousness, so I went into their heads while trying to stay true to their personalities.

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: varshu27
it was wonderful...a great job

😃 thank you, varshu27! i enjoy writing but never tried writing a fanfiction before so i'm glad you enjoyed it!

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sks21
omg that was amazing...
wow ur first attempt and u have done a wonderful job...
a different story and i just loved it...
and loved the end

😃 thanks! with how the CVs are so unpredictable, i didnt want to try incorporating the actual storyline & decided to venture into an alternate reality. hahaha, im glad you enjoyed it!

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SriB
Great OS .loved the last line too. Great ending

😃 thank you! in the end, it all came together - i didnt want to make it too long but i didnt want to rush the ending either. i'm glad it was good to read!

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: rsk16
really awesome for your first attempt.very nice os.loved the ending

😃 thank you so much! hopefully my next one, once i think of another scenario, will be just as good or even better!

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: savvi
i cant believe this is your first attemptt...nice os...

😃thank you so much! even i was amazed by how focused i was in writing it. i enjoy reading & writing, but never attempted a fanfic - so i am glad it has entertained everyone. i hope i can write just as well in the future