OS: Our Seven Lives & Beyond [UPDATE PAGE 5]

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Fahima

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wonderful...luved the OS
very different to the original story

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shruthi2010
nice os. great attempt. keep it up.

😃 thank youuu! i was happy that i was able to write it in almost one sitting - so the thought pattern didnt break. haha. just need to think about my next plot line now 😛

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: _Precious_
Your OS is entirely different from others and have a good scope. Really liked your concept. Being a beginner of writing OS, you did a fantastic job. Please continue soon.

thank you so so much. i really wanted to explore a different situation in which Aham and Gopi could have reunited & this came to mind first. i'm glad it has received such approval & hope my next one will be even better!

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: samiya.059
Wonderful dear

thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it & this effort was successful! 😊

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: taniks
Lovely os , different but very interesting , loved ur ending

thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this attempt. I knew by not sticking to the original plot description, i needed to write something solid. I'm so happy it succeeded! 😛

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: navyab
Good one ...keep continuing 😊

thank you!!! I will definitely try to come up with something just as entertaining and better! I'm trying to think of another plot line as I'm responding!😆

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Though you have departed from the SNS storyline completely, your OS is interesting, I read every word. It was like reading that comic book movie that was so famous Bruce Willis, Mickey Rouke, and I liked that movie it was completely different from other films and similarly your OS gripped me in the same way.

thanks, nafisa! I'm so glad you enjoyed this OS, I know I had to make it really good considering I totally diverged from Gohem as we know them. (That rhymed, hahah, anywayyy). I actually dont remember which film you're referring to BUT I actually thought of Rocky once I finished writing ISL&B. Lol. I'm trying to think of something just as creative for my next addition to this. 😃

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: vaishali667
hi your os is fabulous os mindblowing one

Thank you sooo much! I actually enjoyed writing my "action" scene. 😛 I tried being realistic while not boring anyone. I'm so happy you found it worthwhile to read!