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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#981

...you ended this...
what...
this too?
i mean..wha...

but it was awesome, nice with the punching, he totally needed that for the douche bag moves...

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#982

WOW Muffin!!

What a finish sweety.

I loved it.

Khushi's reaction to the divorce was priceless...as was Arnav's fainting spell!

You've ended this beautiful story really nicely. Definitely one of my favourites sugar...so thank you!

The last paragraph was absolutely perfect.

Thanks for all the PMs.

⭐️

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#983

oh no no no no... they can't get divorced... please don't end it this way :( sooo sad... oh but will you create a new thread? Coz its reached over 150 pages (congrats btw :D) Please write more!!!!

Oh n thanks also for the PM!!! :)

Ok so I realised you had already posted up the final part... and I just read it!!! Wow those love letters... sooo cute... i loved her genuine reaction to them... laughter!!! It would have been weird if she found them touching! I loved the ending it was really perfect!!!

Edited by Orion_N - 13 years ago

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#984

OMG i jus loved ur ff i belve this is the first ff which i read 1-14 parts and that to in one go :D otherwise iread 14-1 reverse lol

and i loved ur siggi as well

plz con soon and add me to ur pm list plllzzz

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#985

HAWWW...It ended!!🥺

But wow, Munchy...I just loved this FF. It's SUPERB!

Anyways, I guess its only Pandora's Box now :D

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#986

This is stunning, you know?!
Of couse you do, with so many people already telling you that! 😳
I feel like a fool for not finding this earlier, it's one of the best FFs I have read till date! :)

Wow! like literally WOW! I don't even have words to express the sheer beauty of this writing! :)
The whole thing was so intense...and the little bits about the their path through the staircase, how she lay broken at the foot of it, and then the gradual transition as they finally made their way to the top, each twist illuminated because they were together making it all the more awesome!!
Some parts were so hearbreaking, so agonizing, it made my heart wrench in turmoil! 😭
Nevertheless, the ending was way too perfect making up for all of it :) The last line - 👏

Mann!! Im bookmarking this! Reading this intense piece just once, sure as hell ain't enough! :P ;)

Edited by Richie-Rich - 13 years ago

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#987

aww it ended!! but what a beautiful ending!! thanks 4 the PM😳

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nature-lover

@nature-lover

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#988

Fantastic ending and just loved it 😃

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A...

@A...

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#989

Superb Ending Min👏i...it was very very very good n i'm surely going to miss this...Thank yu for the Pm's...It was truly a wonderful experience reading such gud stories...Thankx...

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#990

wow dear...just read the whole FF in one stretch...wonderful work👏👏👏
it was so engrossing...so interesting...very high on emotional quotient yet very romantic and beautiful... brilliant piece of writing⭐️...absolutely loved it🤗
I hv sent u a buddy request...plz add me to ur PM list for ur future works😊