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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1001

Came across this FF today only 😭... read it in a single stretch 😊.

Awesome story, well written with nice and cute way. Full of emotions and romance.

Story have nicely potraid the actual relation of Arnav towards khushi and Anjali. were they are eqaully weighed in his life. The brother sister relation and the love relation are well explained and nicely done.

You have got a good talent and do keep it up👍🏼

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1002

very intense story...though i still feel he was forgiven faster, ending was good... :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#1003

This story was so beautiful. I think I loved it more than PB. Every character, Arnav, Anjali, Khushi are so striking. And the way you've described their raging emotions is amazing. Thank you for giving us uch an amazing piece of fiction.😊

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1004

beautiful ff and a beautiful ending :)))

khushis trauma and arnavs repentance, the outburts and the apologies, everything has been written and potrayed so well 👏 arnav is selfish and a coward but his passionate love for khushi is out of this world... loved the role reversal of khushi and ASR!!! the emotions and reactions are a highlight of this ff...

the most impressive part was khushi kneeing arnav (she should've done that long time ago 😆 ) and arnavs atttempt at poetry!!! fabulous roller coaster of emotions... i just read it in one shot as could not stop myself!

kudos!!!

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1005

Oh my...I have just read this from start to finish and I am speechless...

This is beautiful, sad, depressing, lovely all at the same time.

I felt as though my heart stopped in some of the tense, depressing chapters. Like when ASR threw money at Khushi after they had made love the first time...I had tears in my eyes!

Such a harrowing yet wondeful story...where the soulmates finally did end up together.

I loved your style of writing and would love it if you PMed me when you write any more FFs or SS's

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1006

awesome ff !!! loved it !!!!!

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1007

AWESOME FF. just read through all the chapters...

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1008

Hey there :)

As much as I loved the title of this FF, I loved the whole storyline too :D The Spiral Staircase what an amazing story .. the writing style left me speechless .. the metaphors so beautiful !

Loved it <33 Keep writing. Please PM me too in future.

Cheers!
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