FF: The Spiral Staircase Last Part Page 136 - Page 65

great FF...i read 1 to 10 in one stretch and just loved it...am waiting for the next update... i still think Arnav should have sided Khushi and am not very convinced abt his explanation...hope you add more to it...

read the last two parts!!!!!

only 1 word to describe this ff...WOW!!!!!! just spent half day reading all the parts..its amazing..cant wait to read more...though i dont khushi to give in that easily, lol...girlpower..she should make arnav suffer a little more..am being a little sadistic here *evil smirk* lol...do pm me when you update next plzzz...awaiting it;)

Loved the amount of clarity you've put into each and every character and their actions.

Amazing FF! Just read through the whole thing. Loved it! 😊

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sorry dear for reserving b4 reading;)
start is sooo hot
haye bathroom romance;)
but i cant understand y khushi is behaving so rude
one moment she is sweet and other so heartless:(
how arnav donno shyam is dead
plz dont telll me eh was dead.:(
he'd suffer more than arhi:)
anji- khushi convo. Badly needed:)
i hope anji will tell how much arnav love her:)
upst soon yaar

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**Edited**

Sorry I reserved before I went to school, and then came back and read the update 😳

The first half was very hot ☺️ Loved the way Khushi entered the shower with her Lard Governor 😆

I want to know how Shyam died! And what all happened while Khushi was gone

Wonderful update tho! Can't wait to read more

dis is amazin ...awesome updt wid a hint of everythin..loved it

reserved...

*editing...ed*

i kind of...umm...forgot dat i had reserved a place(im repeatin u see so im totally being honest😉)...sorry 4 being late...😭

so this update was blazingly brilliant👏👏👏 ...it was much needed as well...da love makin scene as usuall was fabulously treated...nothing obscene...just pure need n prideful greed to be with someone u loved lost n found(to an extent)...😳
i wudve loved to see Khushi giving more of the cold shoulder to da Raizada's bt den again she too was miserable somewhere by doin so...n thus im happy she called up a truce 4 however miner or short lived it was...😃
me too like Khushi wanted Anjali to take da stance in their differences...if Khushi had done it 1st den hers wudnt have been any apology...she hadnt done anything worth a sorry...so hers wud've been bitter truths...rightly placed accusitions n acerbic warnings😡...Khushi wud have done it 4 her peace of mind n 4 Arnavs ad'infinitum burden...Anjali carried more baggage...coz she was truly in da wrong...hers was an apology long awaited...it was like da panacea 4 everyone's life...atleast this way Khushi cud realize Anjali is sorry 4 wat she did...
the chit chat b\w Khushi n Anjali was my fav part⭐️...the athymia of da situation was nt lost...suffering was still lurkin in b\w them...da shattered pieces of a life well lived lay between them...4 all human errors both of them did wat their previous selves wudve done...it was jst splendid to have Arnav as their support here...he bridges their depths n dissolves their sorrow...😍
bt WOW!!!! Khushis hysteria was a suprise😲...she still havent recovered 4rm mental block of hers...theres still a world within her dat is cursed by pain...bt I wished it had been Arnav in ASR mode...brought her out of da vices she was weaving around her...maybe he too felt quilty of nt being able to punish Shyam...da man who made him kill his wife's soul had jst had a easy life n a solemn departure ...must have been unbearable...n seeing Khushi judging his helplessness made him powerless...😭

im quite scared now...Khushi is goin downhill with her hysterics...n here Shyam is turning out 2 be Julius Caesar(...getting more n more powerful after his demise😉)

ur creating a crescendo here n im loving it👍🏼

*on rooftop now shoutin 4 another update...(waiting to get an echo bak soon)*