FF: The Spiral Staircase Last Part Page 136 - Page 67

I really enjoyed the entire scene and the comfort coming in between Anjali and Khushi, its surely needed at this time and Im sure shes the one who will help Khushi overcome certain things and grudges that she still holds. The end shows it all...and as for Arnav and Khushi, I ADORE THEM. The beginning scene was HOT, passionate, and very well written Muffin! But woah did she actually pull him by the collar and pushed him, seems like the laat governor trait has passed onto our jalebi bai! LOL! Anyhow, youve done a great job with the entire part...BRAVO! Also, as fo Shyam...that scumbag died just like that? No ways! Bring him back just so Arnav, and as well as Khushi and ANjali can beat the crap outta him, physically and mentally. Like screw up the nerve cells and stimuli in his brain so he becomes mental and suffers for years without dying. LOL Okay Im going a bit overboard but you know what i mean😆 Youre a doing a marvelous job in shaping up this FF and its almost like, its real. Dont know how to put this in words, but its like I can imagine just with your mere words the life and the storyplot of this entire tale. Truly, take a bow! You deserve every nomination for this, and not too forget, goodluck with it. Im sure you'll win!!! Keep it up!!

- Dee

man my heart goes out to khushi right now and feel really sorry for her for not getting her justice.

great update. love how your story gets me really into it.

xxx