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.Euphoria.

@.Euphoria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

Awww amazing update!
I love how she's noticing that Arnav has changed.
I wonder what her reaction will be to Shyams death..

Loved it!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#652

khushi needs to see a doctor she need some help she has a lot of pent up emotion amazing update loved it can't wait to find out how snake died loved it she went metal on arnav

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#653

Let me be very honest with u little muffin...The begining was OK(May be I still hold grudges against Arnav)Could'nt enjoy it much.I might once u unfold the whole story,that's the way I'm ...gonna read the whole FF again and enjoy every single bit.But as of now I would say it was OK.Khushi-Anji convo was very much needed.My grudges against Anji is considerably reduced.Arnav not knowing about Shyam and Anji knowing about it...that made me sit straight and go thru it couple of times...and I'm very much intrigued.What could have happened?u left me on a cliff hanger there.But the story is taking a straight dive towards the peak.U have converted an ordinary story into a highly intense,passionate,intriguing master piece.I can only say one thing at this point...LOVED it till now,can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold. 👏Sorry If was blunt dear.

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Oh my bathroom s ... Mmmhh I think this comes from ur steam ss

Wow she came for Belfast with everyone

Don't tell me he is dead I tight he should be suffering god pls tell me he suffered before he died pls pls

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monkeydog18

@monkeydog18

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

It's good that Anjali and Khushi are civil now! Poor Arnav why is Khushi happy one moment and hysterical the next?!! Poor armor baby! Thanks for pm

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hershii

@Smileyface

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#656

awww this part was good!

im glad anjali and khushi are working out their issues. Im hoping its anjali who helps khushi overcome everything regarding shyam only because they both somewhere went through the same thing (not really but u know what i mean) Definitely a much needed talk needs to happen between the two but i hope she forgives arnie! Though i am shocked he didn't do anything to shyam...and somewhere khushi is right...he treated her like crap but didn't do anything to the man who screwed everything up.

Great job muffin <3333333333 and duhhh this ff totally deserves being best ff...i love it! and ur awesome <333

xox

hershi

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Yazzy91

@Yazzy91

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#657

Amazing update! I hope anjali clear's a lot of stuff for khushi! x

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Hiruni

@CDlove

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#658

Oh maaan what happened to shyam!!! how did he die!! Tell me already!!!!!

😕 Im never going to get anything done today..Im just going to keep on thinking about what happened to the snake 🤢

Anyways lovely update. The shower love-making scene was HAWT!! wufff how do you even come up with these stuff?? :P

kushi is a bit demented isn't she? never ever listens to anyone. especially not arnav 😉 unless it's something to do with a happy ending (you know what I mean) :P

An abusive woman handling Kushi!! I LIKE IT!! !! YUM!! 😳

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#659

MUNCHY WOW JUST WOW
loovedd the hot scene between arhi!
It was mindblowing!
Khushi outburst
it's totally justified i would be like that too
loved how khushi and anjali patched up
hope anjali calms khushi down and khushi talks to arnav.

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#660

whenever i get pm from you.. i straight away look if you hav updated this FF... this is one of my favorite FF...

this is fantastically amazing 👏👏

loved there bathroom love making... i must day its so hot..☺️☺️ then followed by the civil talk between khushi and anjali.. that was pretty much needed... and what followed after was bombarded... khushi is such a broken soul that it will take time for her to heal.. kudos to her she can stand for herself now.. she caught arnav by collar and him pushed him😲🥺 shyam died before he got his punishment they are so many loops in the story after khushi has left. eagerly waiting for your update dieing to know what happened in RM after khushi left